Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED*

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ssss97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

That's alright. Get well soon first.

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Apologies guys...
Soon after I updated part one, an unexpected test series began in my college, and that caught me up...
And amidst this, I am running high Viral fever...
Just wasn't able to concentrate to write...
I'm sorry...
I will try finishing this TS, asap...
Regards
Aazeen

Get well soon Aazu... 😃 sorry warry koi nahi... Just concentrate on your studies... n we all are here... kahi nahi gaye... 😳 You finish your imp. tasks first.. ! Theek... ??/ 😃

God bless you...

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hello Aazu dear, how are you doing now? Hope all is fine with you on your best of health. God bless you. 🤗

First of all, sorry for this much late in writing though only a few words for your lovely start to the new TS. Secondly, many congrats dear for claiming yet another feather in your cap with your awesome narrative part. 👏

I loved the emotional touch in this story. The leads are in the acute love with each other, yet not uttering a word to show it. Love is not unacceptable, but it do make everyone so close to heart.

The bro and sis relation leading to a beautiful and lovely another relation gives a very nice feeling inside.😃 The title suggests the story ahead and it makes me happy even to imagine the next part. 😉

Moh moh ke dhage - Lyrics are so deeply felt and suits the theme. 👏

The apprehensions that Ashu have, are his insecurity that he has earned in his life. But i don't think that he has to worry anymore, cos the next part is in the brilliant hands of yours to make the lovers dwell in the air of shining sunshine. ⭐️

The seductive " thank you ' of Ashu is stunning indeed. You have glued many of your readers here. 😉 I know every one must be eagerly waiting for the next part. And so am i 😳 Take your time, and keep the track intact.

Take care, luv ya loads ❤️🤗

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part-2 updated...

I will reply to the comments for part-1 at leisure... 😃

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ssss97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awesome update aazeen. The letter part is just so amazing. Out of the box. Thanks for posting. Will wait for the next eagerly

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Vidisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Thanks Aazeen...take very good care of your health.

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shobha21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Beautiful update Aazeen...loved it.👏👏

Thank you so much for the update. 😊

Waiting for the next.

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Anjani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Apologies guys...
Soon after I updated part one, an unexpected test series began in my college, and that caught me up...
And amidst this, I am running high Viral fever...
Just wasn't able to concentrate to write...
I'm sorry...
I will try finishing this TS, asap...
Regards
Aazeen

We are waiting for part-2 but only when your work is done and after you are back 100% to your normal health...Take care...Don't worry about update!!

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Anjani9

<font color="#6600cc">We are waiting for part-2 but only when your work is done and after you are back 100% to your normal health...Take care...Don't worry about update!!</font>

I have already updated part-2 di... 😆