Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED* - Page 8

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hello Aazu dear, how are you doing now? Hope all is fine with you on your best of health. God bless you. 🤗

-- I'm fine bhabhi... How are you doing?😃 Bless u too...🤗

First of all, sorry for this much late in writing though only a few words for your lovely start to the new TS. Secondly, many congrats dear for claiming yet another feather in your cap with your awesome narrative part. 👏

-- Thank you so very much bhabhi... And no! please do never apologise me for being late... It's not a duty... is it? So just relax and come at ur absolute convenience...😊

I loved the emotional touch in this story. The leads are in the acute love with each other, yet not uttering a word to show it. Love is not unacceptable, but it do make everyone so close to heart.

The bro and sis relation leading to a beautiful and lovely another relation gives a very nice feeling inside.😃 The title suggests the story ahead and it makes me happy even to imagine the next part.

😉

-- Well that's the intermingle of relations... The teasy relation between the brother and sister, the hesitated relation of Ashu n Nidhi... n so on... Definitely not unacceptable, yet, not easy...

Well thats the advantage of reading a story in a song pattern... The lyrics themselves told that the next part is coming towards happiness...😳😃

Moh moh ke dhage - Lyrics are so deeply felt and suits the theme. 👏

The apprehensions that Ashu have, are his insecurity that he has earned in his life. But i don't think that he has to worry anymore, cos the next part is in the brilliant hands of yours to make the lovers dwell in the air of shining sunshine. ⭐️

-- Thank fully you guys understood why I used Moh-moh ke dhaage and it's significance in the story... I was a little astound to know when people asked me, what does this song mean in this story...😛

As to the insecurity, well, aisi kaun si kahaani hai jismein problem ka solution na mila ho...😉

The seductive " thank you ' of Ashu is stunning indeed. You have glued many of your readers here. 😉 I know every one must be eagerly waiting for the next part. And so am i 😳 Take your time, and keep the track intact.

-- Hehehehe... I know u guys go gaga over with ashutosh's smiles... Thats the gift to my readers...😉

Take care, luv ya loads ❤️🤗

-- Thank u bhabhi... love ya tooo... And thank u so much for such beautiful review...🤗

Originally posted by: sss97

Awesome update aazeen. The letter part is just so amazing. Out of the box. Thanks for posting. Will wait for the next eagerly

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update aazeen

Originally posted by: Veni-Vidi-Vici

Thanks Aazeen...take very good care of your health.

Originally posted by: shobha21

Beautiful update Aazeen...loved it.👏👏

Thank you so much for the update. 😊

Waiting for the next.

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

May God bless you with extra strength to recover fully. Take a very good care of yourself Aazu! 😊

Just read the full TS, am in the highest level of Ashni's pure ecstasy right now. Going to review in a while, thanks a lot for this special version Aazu. You simply rock my dear. ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Part 2

Just Awesome!!! 👏

The night they both danced together on a romantic duet - How can they both forget it? No question to make it unbelievable. Loved the way you have made them equally drowned in love Aazu. ❤️A brilliant piece of work ⭐️ Just got bowled over. 😳

-- Did it feel rushed bahbhi? I mean the entire conference thing? While I was writing, I felt so... But then it wasn't needed... Something has happened to me over time, I don't feel like unnecessary stuffs, exaggerating the length of the story...😆 Its like, likh sakte they, par zaroori nahi tha... Aap log bataaiye mujhe apna opinion...

The Love letter. O my my!!!!!!!!! What a lovely and very thoughtful expressions Nidhi has put in. ⭐️❤️Her mind spoke and heart wrote, her love expressed and her fears came out. Yet, yet she has so smartly written her heart there. Beautifully expressed, wonderfully penned down. 👏

-- I was so apprehensive with the part 2 bhabhi... Mere saath aksar yahi hota hai... Main 1st part aaraam se likh leti hu, but phir part 2 mein atak jaati hu... I just wasn't able to connect both the parts... And samajh nahi aa raha tha ke confession kaise karaau... Ashutosh itna apprehensive hai ke wo kisi bhi haal mein khud aake toh propose karega nahi... Aur Nidhi itni bhi upfront nahi hai ke she confesses on his face... Aise mein letter writing was the only option for me...

Haalaki, I think Nidhi ka 6th sense worked well... Usne poorey pros and cons ke saath letter likha, just not to spoil the relations between the two people, as well him and her brother...😉

Ashu on the same hand, living with the same feelings and his heart is out to make it sure now. His happiness is obvious. And i loved his laughs to every point. Recalling the simpleton Nidhi, turning into a lover of his. His own insecurities have flown out now. What a loving scene Aazu. You made me landing in the AshNiland.

-- Frankly... As a writer, Ashutosh scene here was my favourite in this entire TS... I mean for me this is a very powerful scene... Where he kisses the letter and hugs it and carelessly lies on the bed and starts laughing to the end of ending up crying... His insecurities flowing away... Impactful scene for me...😃

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Part 3

No match to the concluded version. 👏 Wondrous and praiseworthy indeed!!! ⭐️👏

I cud imagine the state of mind Nidhi was going with when she was waiting for Ashu at the sunset point. Almost crying inside, she moved from the place. Only to find out that the man she was waiting for, was waiting to stun her with some hard questions. And Ashu also did not spare her from the teasing fonts. 😉

-- Thank God! you understood Ashu was teasing Nidhi... In the other forum, I had update the same story, and the readers were like, why was Ashutosh shouting on her... Why did he make her cry...

And I was jaw dropped... Wasn't that obvious... 😆

Nidhi's fumbling and Ashu's unexpected behavior brought tears to her eyes. Aww..

But loved the tears so cutely wiped by her man. Charming and cherished moments.⭐️ Beauty lies in the scene so nicely woven. His way of proposing gives an intense feeling of knowing him better. Fulfilling a wish, with exactly the same way!

-- Hehehehe... He didn't intend to make her cry... He was just creating suspense... Didn't wanted to open up the surprise before the intended place... And once the fears are gone, people do wonders, and so did Ashutosh...😃

A man of his words and so straight forward!!! His going the simple and a choicest way to address her family for her hand makes him a sincere and a balanced person. His honesty spoke so much and ended in the marriage to his soulmate. Love claimed each other and Nidhi cud not stop saying it again - Love you bhai ke dost!

-- Beating around the bush is not my cup of tea bhabhi... I have never enjoyed the prolonged confessions and all that the daily soap people show... And that is why I came up straight to the point with Nidhi's confession, and here, with Ashutosh's asking for her hand from her family...

What a completion which looks like a beginning. Superloved.❤️❤️ Thanks for this extra dose today itself Aazu.🤗 I was feeling homesick here, and after reading this TS, am feeling so happy inside today. Luv ya loads dearie for your finest pen and your thoughtful lovely articulation. Flair of writes. Great finesse. 👏

-- Thank u so much bhabhi...

Oh! I can't tell you how much I felt for u that u were homesick...

If my writing gave u any bit of solace, its peace-worthy for me...

Thanks for all the love bhabhi...

Aur Shubham kaisa hai? Masti chalu hai uski?😆

Usko uske buaa ke taraf se bohot saara pyaar deejiyega...🤗❤️