Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED* - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

163

Views

11.7k

Users

15

Likes

642

Frequent Posters

Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Oh, just saw this one. Felt so bad and sorry dear.You must have typed it again. The spamming notices and the net sometimes play a very negative role for us.

Well aisi hi haalat ho jaati hai meri...😆
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: babita68

It's okay Aazu. 😃 Take your time to reply. Infact., don't take much of stress. Give all your attention to your exams now. And all the very best. 👍🏼Take care 🤗

You have asked me what i do. I am a student of Computer engg. 1st year and have given the last sem. exams, and will enter the second year next week. 😃

Thank u so much dear for all the wishes...
And wish u all the best for ur second year... Abhi toh long way to go for u...😃
Anjani9 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Okay kill me guys!
I know I'm super late...
Par itna mauka nahi mil raha tha ke main sukoon se aap sabko reply kar paau... And I didn't wanted to let u guys' genuine reviews to be answered in haste...
Aap toh jaante hain Bawa Bhaiyya main aapke reviews sabse aaraam se answer karti hoon...
Chaliye, I'm back... coming with all the replies...😃

😆
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you very much bhabhi...😃
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hmm,,,, dekh rahaa hoon... but why ghabrao dear... ??/ exam hi toh hain... koi Ashu ka confession thode hi hai.. 😛
Hey ... All the very best for your exam beta... 🤗 May God be with you.. n tu koi answer na bhoole.. 😊 Achhe se karna.. aur bhai ka naam roshan karna... 😳😃

Best of Luck !!! 👍🏼
-- Thank u sooo-sooo much bhaiyaa!!!😃
( Main na kal post karoonga reviews... shhh... me bahut sara busy today.. ittta sare kaam hai ki kya bataaoon... 😳
But then what me doing here.. ?? Hehe.. simple.. aadat se majboor.. 😆
dont tell anyone.. ok... 😛 )

😆

Your secret kept!😆
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Amazing Aazuu

Beautifully written loved the song seselection...wished it had continued more...

How r u dear?,

Thank you so much Diksha...😃
I'm as usual yaar!
Anjani9 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thank you so much Diksha...😃

I'm as usual yaar!

As usual??? 😕
Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Cute, Short story...love it..😳

Thank you so much di...😃
Anjani9 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Your secret kept!😆

Aazeen02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Part two...


Beeaauutiful indeed... 👏
-- Thank you sooo much bhaiyya!😃

The two hesitant lovers.. One insecure.. n the other not sure of the support even..
The cute but a boosting love letter from Nidhi.. made Ashu's heart popping out.. 😃 He is loved... Loved by the girl he loves... Wow.. the man is the most luckiest ...😳
-- You know why your reviews are so important to me? This is from the point of view of a guy, who can understand manly emotions than we girls can do as to writing a story!😃
Thanks for your analysis for the parts I wrote from Ashutosh's pov!😃

And kya confession bhara letter with all odds gone ,,, n all the right things noticed.. ! Her words are just ... n can be described as emotional n practical at the same time... ⭐️
-- A writer is generally what he/she is... Shayad that' the practical me there... But sooo happy that my straight forward story also could be appreciated... I'M SOOO GLAD!!!😃

It was very touching to see Ashu in happy tears with all his insecurities flown away... and his own confession to Nidhi while addressing to the hugged letter shows his inner feelings so aesthetically.. wow... !!!⭐️
--As I was saying to Swati Bhabhi also, that's the most powerful, and impactful scene for me... It's all you guys' support that could make it so happily possible...😃

Aazu.. your hold upon your readers is just Awesome.. ! Enhancing the beauty of your written ability.. n you say the me humble.. huh... ! Dont underestimate my sis' abilty.. kya... 😳

Excellent.. !!!
-- Thank you very much bhai... And... Sometimes I feel like believing ur humbless towards my stories, though I know I could have done better with them...😆



Thank u for all ur valuable comments bhaiyya... they mean a lot to me... really!😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".