Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED* - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part three...

The evening gone and wo nahi aaye.. 😳 I loved your description of Nidhi's mind n heart fighting n she got the red face not due to sun rays.. but from the deed she thought was a missed one.. 😉
Aur humre Ashu ji... Unka toh kya hi kehna.. !🤗 He is the most blushing man in the show.. but here he took n steal the show.. It was a dying moment for Nidhi.. but he made things much more beautiful n special for her.. ❤️
The bending on the knees with a ring in his hand.. Can die for the moment.. Very special day for Nidhi.. for Ashu.. n for Nidhi's parents as well...!!!👏
It was a treat to read Nidhi crying all her pains away.. n then asking Ashu why he opted for this odd behavior.. ! A relieved moment.. Loving n blessed moment.. An Ashni moment.. 🤗Thanks dear... 😃
Loved Ashu going straight to her parents the same day or time.. n asked for her hand.. !!! Superb... !!! Man ,, he is terrific.. loving.. n very just.. ! ⭐️👏He stood for his love.. n his truth gave him his Nidhi... Wonderfully expressed... 🤗
Aazu.. I can see Nidhi saying .. Love you bhai ke dost.. !! 😃 This is very natural for the girls specially.. they never come out of the real values.. n this quality makes them more loving to all..

A very pleasing n cute story Aazu... ! Really relished every part n enjoyed the combination of your mind n heart speaking thru your characters.. !!! 😳😃
I appreciate your ability to flavour the story with all dips of priceless moments captured.. !!!
Just continue the flow my dear sis... ! Its a reverence that make me say that.. Cos you are a very good writer.. n i wanna get n seek every story that catch your mind n you can pen them down.. !!
Keep writing.. ! I proudly says.. me your bro.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
cute story aazeen
waiting for more stories from u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thank u so much Shobha di for such lovely words...😃

I shall write more soon...😃

yes aazeen waiting for more stories from u .you are a wonderful writer.your stories are so real
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aazeen, Wish it's longer...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay kill me guys!
I know I'm super late...
Par itna mauka nahi mil raha tha ke main sukoon se aap sabko reply kar paau... And I didn't wanted to let u guys' genuine reviews to be answered in haste...
Aap toh jaante hain Bawa Bhaiyya main aapke reviews sabse aaraam se answer karti hoon...
Chaliye, I'm back... coming with all the replies...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: babita68

Here I shoot for part two :

--First of all apologies behen... Maine sach mein kaafi late kar diya...😳
The summary to the start or i would say-- the realization of love is very beautiful and well knitted. 👏👏The two ends met to meet again, with all their hearts melting for each other every time. This is quite a romantic part becos the hesitations lead to more of them. But I loved the initiative Nidhi has taken, and what a take. 👏👏
-- Hehehehe... I am time and again telling, this Nidhi is a practical girl, and whatever she thought, she decided to face the consequences...😃

The mesmerizing love letter.❤️ OMG! What a love written in few words and confessed with all her heart shown. Her simple words told so much and took Ashu into the dreams and made him sitting on cloud 9. Awesome !!!😃
-- That is how I think the steps towards love should be taken.. I feel like laughing at what TV shows show... Life runs a more smoother way...😃

The Ashu we know has all the hesitations till the end. But here even the confession is lovely and Ashu is much more happiest of all. Much loved is his said even to the letter so close to his heart. Well the lover is amazed to see how his beloved has been so intelligent of date. 😛😉 But then his tears made all his tensions out, and the love accepted. ⭐️
-- Thats how it feels when a thing is burdening ur mind, like love confession was doing on his... But when someone loved takes you out of the miseries, all you can feel tears stinging... Thats how Ashutosh felt revieved...

main kya kahun Aazu. It's such a lovely shot that a few tears came from mine too. 😳😆
All your written fabulous. Thanks, loves 🤗
-- Zyada emotional nahi ho gayi aap?😉😆😆 Itna koi emotional nahi tha ke aapke aansu bhi nikal padein...😆😆
But Shukriya bohot-bohot for such lovely words u bestowed me with...🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: babita68

Do Dil mil rahe hain !!!

--Magar chupke-chupke...😆

Nidhi's heart said that Ashu will come, and he came with all naughtiness in his eyes and mind.😛 Poor our Nidhi - made her cry and teased her till his own confession. This is even more beautiful. 👏👏I could imagine the Ashu with his tongue in his cheek and smiling even to see his Nidhi in tears. But he made up for it, and the bending upon his knees with all that lovely ambience gives an equal solace to her heart. ⭐️⭐️
-- Arre yaar! bada jurm ho gaya mujhse that I made Nidhi cry so much... Some of my readers got angry for that...😆 Par shukar hai you guys have pitied on me, and taken all of that for good...😃Thank u so much Babita...😃

I loved Nidhi asking for his harshness with tears ans smiles in one go. And Ashu's going to her parents and asking for her hand is the icing on the cake. Every thing happened in one evening and they are happily married now. The last scene after kanyadaan was good. Loved reading them saying the three words with Nidhi not changing her track of calling him bhai ke dost.😳😉
--Hehehehhe.. I loved writing all those small-small things that made it all... Thank u so much for all the lovely words dear...😃
Very well equipped and a blossomed love story given a very nice ending.👍🏼 Thanks Aazu for this special treatment. Like Swati bhabhi said that her homesickness got relieved for a moment. I would also like to say that i felt so moved inside after reading the whole story. We face so much in the day to day life and in the end of day the fab write of yours has given me solace to have it as a balm for many days for now. Thanks for your love for your readers. Take my bow. 🤗
-- Thank you so much for all the humbleness dear...🤗As you guys get a moment of relief reading such stories, its a relief for us writers too... But yeah! I love positivity in the story... Hurting and crying stories make me hell miserable... But thanks a lot anyways... Loves dear!!!😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

So sweet of you Aazu 🤗 I find you very simple, yet very energetic girl. Bas ek click ki kami rehti hai to make you moving -- am i right? 😳

Frankly speaking Bhabhi, I am a pure Arian... For me nothing more than appreciation can do... I don't need huge favours to make me happy... just lots of encouragement, and some appreciation... I am all done...😛
You know whenever I cook food, and I lay the table... Be it my family or my guests... Though I say it jocularly- "pasand aaye toh taareef keejiyega... Aur nahi aaye toh bhi taareef keejiyega..."😆
Ya phir better... "Jo achha lage wo maine banaaya hai, aur no nahi lage, wo mummy ne banaaya hai"🤣
Bas! Thats me...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

😆 Shud i take it as a compliment or i have become a Like like him 😉😆
Well thanks i wud say. Chalo kahin toh chhaye 😃 Thanks dear for this observation 😆

Bhabhi, I was trying to give your hubby a lolipop stating he also writes a good review...🤣
Na-na... mazaak kar rahi hu...
Actually Bhabhi aapse itna interaction kabhi zyada hua nahi meri stories par... Toh I had not much idea about ur reviews on my stories... So, thats the 1st compliment I have passed your way...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Lo abhi diya aapke bhatije ko aapka dher sara pyaar ❤️ Uski masti chalu hai bilkul papa ki tarah 😆 @ Green! Phir toh bachhe ke seedhe hone ke aasaar kam hain... uske papa abhi tak masti karte nahi thakte hain, toh baby ko toh full license mila hua hai...😆😆😆

Thanks dear for giving me solace with your writing. Yes i do feel so joyous and in the company of some of my space that i've and cud come out of that sadness at once.
-- I understand Bhabhi... Kab tak aane ka mood hai india?

Thanks dear ❤️🤗
And all the very best for your exam day after. Give your fullest and i know you will pass them with flying colors. 👍🏼
Thanks a ton for all the wishes bhabhi... Need them...😳

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