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Posted: 10 years ago
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Remember me


I dreamed ...

When world slept

The diffuse color of your eyes

Then light in your eyes

Your smile

The angelic...

Oh my beloved ...

You are so beautiful

Like night

The skies

And bright stars!

Can you see my smile even when I am asleep?

My fingers circling over

Over and over

Over Your memories

Your thoughts

You're Words

Ohh dear ...

You are so far away ...

Yes you are

But

So near ...

How can I say?

How much I long

Long ...

To see you

To hold you

Take this kiss upon your brow

And smile ...

In your blissful solitude

Remembering me ...

Oh yeah

Remember me ...!

My dear

My beloved...



Ariya , you asked for a romantic poem , i tried my best to write one , hope you like it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sai you have shown depths of your writing with this one

This is what came to my mind .. A line from a hymn / song "all I ask if you is to remember me "
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How Lucky i am , made the First comment too 👏🥳
Love it a lot 🤗🤗

u are a great writer👍🏼 . can' t imagine the way u write , Superb My friend 👏, Really happy to be a friend of a such talented people 🤗

u Rock Sai 👏






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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Very beautifully written poem sai👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good poem Sai 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic Sai.

Very very romantic smooth delicate and strong👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Sai... how are you dear... 😃
Nice poem... so heartfelt... so touching... very beautifully written... keep going...⭐️👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice , well written, enjoyed it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Sai you have shown depths of your writing with this one

This is what came to my mind .. A line from a hymn / song "all I ask if you is to remember me "



Thank you Deepali di 😃
I am glad to know it came out well 😃

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