Is this a story? -Epilogue page 57 - Page 23

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

First of all thank you for the lenthy and in-detail analysis Babita🤗



Thank you so much Babita. Man proposes and God disposes... let us see... what God has got for them😆

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Ch-1: Can't agree more Mudraji... If the husband knows cooking, wife's life become all miserable in kitchen dept. 😆 Yahan pe toh, BB runs a successful S.I. take away so Nandini's deision of not letting Ashu step in kitchen is super-perfect!! 😃

Nandini might think whatever she wants.. aage dekhna padhega whether Nidhi likes it or not😆😆

Also, if a person cannot even tell the difference from moongdal sambar to Tur dal sambar... what would he serve to his clients? Who would look after the take-away business??? All those secret formulas he has made for preparing special meduvadas and rava dosas will no longer be passed on to his son.

Sure, Nandini is spoiling her son!!

At that moment, he decided that.. no matter what..he is going to pass on the secret ingredients to his son!

BB's worries are so justifiable!! 😃 But it seems he doesnt have voice against Ashu's mom in this aspect 😆

Infact, this is from Kungfu-Panda (I think movie- II).. paasing on the secret ingredients😆😆

Ashu is mom's Rajabeta... an over pampered child!! 😃 But this Maa is very particular in passing down the traditional values... She is making Ashu arrange in any other corner of house and giving his room to guests. (There is an advt. of insurace - max newyork or statefarm maybe, where the boy gives his pillow to guests and then BG voice says "We understand how imp. passing down the values is... explaining your child to give his beddings to guests" etc. etc. )

You caught me Tupu😆😆😆
Mom instructs Rajabeta to appear smiling and happy in front of guests!! 👍🏼 She prefers Nidhi over his son... Ashu is only child and over-pampered one so can't share his mom's love/preference with anyone. He is bound to develop some jealousy/hatred towards Nidhi now 😆

Ashutosh was aghast.. he opened and closed his mouth three times like a gold fish in the aquarium to say something...but nothing came by...He already started hating Nidhi and her father and her grand mother... Hell... Let all of them go to hell... and prayed God that whichever groom they are trying for the alliance should find this girl ugly... Secretly, thought he would offer 11 rupees of mannat in the local temple's hundi.

OMG... Maha kanjoos Ashu... only 11 Rs. mein Bhagwaanji maan jaayenge kya?? 🤣🤣🤣 And he prays that the prospective alliances should find the girl ugly and her rishta shouldnt get fixed anywhere... means she must be punished by God for depriving him of his room and his privacy when he is only for 2 weeks in India 🤣🤣🤣

Mom's verdict No proteinaceous food both the time and Ashu thinking: "
How can one cook science into everyday's life... Akhir koi khana bhi itna scientifically banaate hai kya?" is so hilarious. 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Yup, I loved that Rohan segment. How his mother "demonstrated" the marriage material her son had 😆 and how DB was coaxing everyone for Nihan alliance 😆 Alas, Ashu isnt interested in Mallika's khichdi with ghee-tadka... so, Mallu may stay empty-handed here as well and may have to stay happy with looking Ashutosh's bare pair-darshan 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: ttrocks

CH-2: BB is impressed with Mallika and eager to know her khichdi recipe but Mallika ignores him royally. She is interested in Ashu only (Ashu's bare legs... 😆)

Ashu's Mom isnt impressed with Mallika or her khichdi and Ashu too isnt interested in either og them

Mothers usually try to sense their child's interests😉😆

😆 Thsi is awesome: 'Mallika! we have already finished our breakfast. By the way, Ashutosh is interested in instant oats that cook in 12 seconds rather than khichdi which take 12 hours preparation'. 👏👏👏 🤣🤣🤣

Can imagine Ashutosh seething with anger here:But a Grand mother entered inside and looked at Ashutosh disapprovingly. 'Nandini! children always appear as kids to parents' eyes... but that doesnot mean, you can hide your son's age by asking him to wear only a chaddi... girls are here... tell him to wear something decent and cover himself fully' 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ashu's dialogue about Queen Elizabeth and she having brought Kohinoor with her takes the cake!! Absolutely loved that part Mudraji!! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ttrocks

CH-3 Review:

Loved Armaan's quip: 'Dont forget what history says... Kohinoor was never ours...always been somebody's property...!' Hats off to you for including such perfect dialogues Mudraji!! 👏👏👏

Thank you so much Tupu... Really really thank you for catching this point... We hear several times that English has takenaway our Kohinoor... but in reality, our own kings have gifted them so many valuable things for very small returns.. This fact make me feel very depressed... I dont know whether to agree with the insecurity of our kings or disagree with the lack of vision..😳

Ashu has fallen for Nidhi... love at first sight!! I had imagined Nadini to be strict mother and that's what she is. 😳

Ashutosh studied Telecommunications but, worked as a management trainee in the industry only to understand the uncommunicated meaning of top management's policies in the business. So Ashu is telecomm. engr but trained in management. He has excellent verbal communication skills. Hope he retains these skills while conversing with Nidhi coz it's often seen that men become tongue-tied while talking to their lady-love... 😃


So far so good... but at present, the turbulance named Nidhi, has kick started chaos within him has got no references to his studies / thesis at all... He found himself in a whirlpool of tingling nervousness, a rigid tongue (tied to the top of his mouth...)..and uncoordinated organs. Actually a serious disfunction of the jaw (already dropped down and touched the floor below) is almost negligible before the havoc created by the madly thumping heart.

Suddenly it has become the top most priority of all his life to don something on his legs but now doesnot know how to do...

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BB wants his son to employ his extraordinary convincing skills to get sweets in shortnotice for
nidhi's prospective alliance and Ashutosh is lovestruck now 😆 How can he do that? So he is seeking ultimate refuge in God and bargaining with $21 "chadhava" 😆😆😆 Great to see he considers the diamond to be his and wants save her from slipping into someone else's hands... 😳😃

Tell me about the fate of a fellow who has to use his best negotiating skills to get sweets to impress another ladkewale...😳😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Edited. Please check here Mudraji: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112627494

That day I was in shopping mall but couldnt resist reading the update and then couldnt control laughing 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ttrocks

CH-4 Review: Anji keenly noticing Ashutosh's shorts, gave an impression that these girls didnt like such kind of dresing but the truth was the exact opposite!! 😃 Ashutosh hurried inside to dress "properly" and lost coherence in speech but got his speaking strength back looking at his mother. Thankfully Mommyji loves Nidhi and prefers her over her son... o.w. Ashu being mamma's boy could create havoc in Ashu-Patni's life 😆😆😆

Anji has been always with Nidhi.. or rather Nidhi cant do without Nidhi. So it should be truly an exciting thing for Anji to see someone wearing their creation😆😆

Girls can never get ready in 5 minutes... 😆 Either they take more or they take less time but never exact 5 minutes 🤣

😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.. very true

Nidhi is a lawyer turned fashion-designer. 👍🏼 Loved Ashu-armaan convo. so hilarious!! 'Hey mere baap... what part of the story you are unable to understand? clearly the train called Nidhi has left the platform.. wear that suit and wait .. probably there is a next one coming along...'...'Also that girl has a track record of rejecting based on the dressing sense plus now you have acquired a new ability of stammering... Let aside Nidhi... I wonder whether DadiBua gets impressed with your personality'.

'Armaan...Please give me some idea.. or atleast I am in need of some sympathy here..and you are...'

'Boy.. your neighbor-wali ghee tadka... I mean, Mallika is ready.. chahe toh baat karloo?' 🤣


The latest negotiation is $51 only for this time's favor. For all subsequent helps provided, the celestial powers will get more bribes from Ashu!! 🤣

So, the shorrts that Ashu had found fantastically designed are actually products of Nidhi's designer collection and that's why Anji was excited when she saw Ashutosh wearing that short. BB bought it from some super-cheap sale... OMG... 😆😆😆

Bhagwan jaane.. whether Ashu really felt those shorts were properly designed or not.. at one moment, he really pissed off to put them in the shredder even😆😆... but compared it with Armani later😆😆


Ashutosh experienced... what it is to be in the moment ..when an ordinary person achieves extra ordinary skills and turns into super-human beings and become Superman / Batman / Phantom / Spiderman(.. and mind you, they all are chaddi-wearing supermans) 🤣

So the 51$ offering got Ashu the desired effect!! 👏 😆 Superb continuation Mudraji!! 👏👏👏 Awaiting next update pretty soon...

Originally posted by: ttrocks

DB smelled a prospective bridegroom material showing interest in her grand child.

Nandini had that motherly instinct to recognize the changes in her surroundings and ready to open her wings over her chickens.. I mean Ashutosh.
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If at all, anyone was unchanged, it was BB. Quickly he cleared his plate.

' How was that Pulihora Nidhi? We add a dash of jaggery towards the end.. that gives edge to the tangy tamerind'

Everyone jumped out of their reveries to the reality and looked at BB, as if he had just spoken something Japanese.

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Awesome Mudraji!! 👏