FF- Destiny's Play Chap 4 Pg 127 June 16

Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chap-2:

You gave 2 shocks or twists in this chapter.

1. Mallika out on 3 yr sabbatical

2. Nidhi is in neurology

So, no Mallika-Jagan marriage? That means she will return???

Love Armaan-Ranga jodi...

Nidhi appeared more stubborn here than Ashu...she avoided meeting him, going Anji's house, moved out of her house. Are you going to give more trouble to Ashu in working with Nidhi???

How Ashu assumed going out of India would solve his problems??? Less work is more headache and thoughts...

Love your writing - the impact of her touch on Ashu...

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ashu should tear off the finger part of surgical glove and use it as you know what

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Vidisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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it might be difficult to squeeze it in the finger part of the glove..and what if it tears...what will Ashman do ?

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruchshah
Sorry for a delayed review..Sujathaji!!!
Within the first 48 hours of updating...not considered as delay. 😆

Ashu coming out with his real reason for separating from Nidhi...was heart breaking... i mean it was selfish on his part...but i guess one always wants to protect one's heart ( i know its not Nidhi's fault that he was hurt in past...but those incidences makes the man)

True. There is no denying the fact that he is man with a baggage. The age difference just added more weight to the baggage.

Nidhi's inner conflict was also painful to read...i like your Nidhi's inner strength..she's made up of tough stuff😃...her going out of Ashu's life n also alienating herself from her baba... to stand in the sun!!!

👍🏼

Armaan is a welcome entry...loved his zeal for life n to see his dedication for his friend...is awesome!

That was how he was in the serial too. I just changed his profession. 😉

Wonder what misunderstanding Anji n Nidhi are referrring to?????

Keep wondering. You will know soon enough. Or try guessing.

The OT scene...was no work of an amateur...shows your learning graph...which has grown exponentially...👏Highly professional description...n some respect for Ashu n Nidhi interwoven in that scene...kudos!!!

Thank you Ruchira 😃

Cant wait for Mon...😳. Thanks for PM

You are very welcome