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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hall mahemano se bhara hua tha.Sari najar aaj ke sitare ko dekhna chahti thi

Tabhi woh sitara hall me entre hua.

Aaj is desh ki beti ne desh ka naam rohsan kiya tha

Saree najare Miss Nidhi verma ki taraf dekhne lagi.Aaj ka woh sitara thi.Usne swimming me Gold Medal jeeta tha.All feel so proud for her.

Chief guest Miss Shaila Jadhav [IPS officer] stand up and started clapping at her arrival in Tagore memorial hall,Lucknow.

She now became central eye of the audience.After Shailaji's clappping everybody started clapping and they all are giving a stading ovation to that pretty girl.

Nidhi came there with her coach and would be husband Ashutosh Mathur.She was so nervbous that she holded Ashutosh's hand so tightly.Ashutosh calmed her down and drive her in first raw.

Aur woh lamha aaya jab Nidhi ka naam jor se pukara gaya.Lekin Nidhi ne kuchh react nahi kiya.And Ashutosh ne use isharo se samazaya aur stage par badhne ko kahaa.She shake her head in No stye.

Ashutosh lead her to the stage and Shaila ji again stand up from her chair and came to Nidhi.She gave Nidhi her hand and lead her towards stage.Nidhi was announced as The Twinkling star of our nation"and she gave Trophy to Nidhi."

Now Shaila understand Nidhi's condition and she just gave a small speech.

Miss Shaila: Ladies and Gentleman.Thank you so much for coming to cheer up the most talented sportperson.Miss Nidhi Verma.I know what you are thinking?Why Nidhi is special that so many girls won Swiming gold medal?but i want to prove you all wrong.Nidhi is special bec she can't speak and can't hear.She has only one language.It is swimming.And not only that she made a world Record by winning this race.Aur jyada na kehete hue i want to call her coach and would be husband Mr Ashutosh Mathur and her doctor Dr Armaan.

And Ashutosh started most tragical story of that angel Nidhi Verma

Ashutosh:Aap sab log toh janate hi hone ki main aur Nidhi Verma shadi karne wale hai.Main Nidhi se isiliye shadi karna chahta hoo kyonki maine zindagi me itni himmatwali ladki nahi dekhi.

Main Nidhi ko bachpan se janata hoo.Woh bachpan me bilkul theek thi.Uske chahere par humesha muskaan reheti thi.Apne ma ki pari thi woh.Use khel kud ka shauk tha.Toh Nandini anty ne use swimming me daal diya.Main usse do saal senior tha.Hum saath me khelte the.padhte the.

Lekin achanak ek din woh ho gaya jiska kisiko andaaja bhi nahi tha.Nidhi bahar aangan me khel rahi thi aur ghar me Nandini anty khana bana rahi thi aur uncle bahar TV dekh rahe the.Achanak se ghar me Cyliner Blast hua aur Nidhi us din anath ho gai.Uske chaha aur chachi aaye aur Nidhi ko apne saath Kanpur le gaye.Tab woh lagbhag 12 saal ki thi.

Aur main bhi apni padhai puri karne ke liye Dehradun chala gaya.Toh mera aur Nidhi ka contact tut gaya.

Ashutohs lead into deep thought.All the incidents of Nidhi's life were moving in front of him like a horror movie.

After his completion of MBA he came to Lucknow.He remembered his Childhood friend Armaan.He knew Armaan now became great and successful surgeon.So Ashutosh went to meet him in Kotnis General Hospital.

He just entered inthe hospital aur Hospital me chahel pahel chal rahi thi.

Dr Armaan was standing in the coridor and woh bahoot gusse me lag raha tha.

Dr Armaan:Sister Freny,maine aapko kya kaha tha?ki Nidhi ke aaspaas koi bottle nahi rakhana.Kaha tha na?toh fir.Uska hum dinrat ilaaj kar rahe hai aur aap toh careless ban rahe ho.Pata hai na uski halat kitni najook hai?

Ashutosh came to Armaan.

Armaan was shocked to see Ashutosh in KGH.He just signed nurse to stay with Nidhi.

Dono ek dusreko gale mile aur Armaan Ashutosh ko apne cabin me le gaya.

Ashutosh asked Armaan,"Armaan,yeh wohi Nidhi hai kya jo humare samne wale makaan me reheti thi?"

Armaan: Ha Ashutosh,wohi ladki hai yeh.Bechari bahut buri halat me hai.Kitni pyari bachi hai Ashutohs aur un shaitano ne kya haal kar diya hai iska dekh?

Ashutosh:Matlab?

Armaan:Tumhe pata hai na uske ma aur baba ke accident ke bareme tu toh tha na wahaa tab?ghar me Cyliner blast hua tab?

Ashutosh:Ha aur uske chacha aur chachi use apne sath Kanpur le gaye the shayad.She was just 12 yrs old at that time.Abhi toh woh pure 21 saal ki ho chuki hogi na?

Armaan:Ashutosh,aaj tu agar use dekhega toh pahechan nahi payega.Kya kya gujari hai uske saath.Yahaa se jate hi uske uncle aur anty jaise shaitaan ban gaye.They beated her so many times that now she became scare when someone even touch her.And unhone uski shadi karwa di sirf 18 saal ki umar me.Pata nahi aisee kya dushmani thi uncle aur anty ki is se?woh ladka achha tha.Nidhi se pyaar karta tha.Lekin use bhi inhone bigaad diya.

Ashutosh:Lekin Nidhi ki yeh halat fir kaise hui?

Armaan:Us ladke ne ek baar Nidhi pe haath uthaya.Use itna jor se thappak mara ki Nidhi behosh ho gai.Uske kaan pe effects hua ki use ab kuchh sunai nahi deta.Iske baad bhi woh use doctor ke pas nahi le gaye.

Tabse yeh itni sahem gai hai ki woh kuchh bol pati hai na sun pati hai.Woh ek aahat se hi dar jati hai.Bottle dekhkar chillane lagti hai.Yahaa tak Psycatric ko bhi dekhkar dar jati hai.

Ashutosh:Armaan,kya main uske pas ja sakta hoo.Shayad muze pahechan le.Hum sath me bachpan me bahut khele hai yaar.Koshish karne me kya har hai?

Armaan Ashutosh ko Nidhi ke ward me le gaya.Anji bahar baithi thi.

Armaan:Ashutosh,yeh Anji hai Nidhi ki dost.Wohi Nidhi ko yahaa lekar aayee hai.Kanpur se bhagakar.Ise bhi dhamki di hai unhone.

Ashutosh:Anji,Thank you so much.Nidhi ko yahaa la ne ke liye.Aur ab tum chinta mat karo.Hum sab milkar Nidhi ki dekhbhal karenge aur use theek bhi karenge.Aur yeh mera wada hia tumse ki ab Nidhi ki dekhbhal main karooonga.

Ashutosh ne Armaan se kahaa,"Armaan,sabse pahele ek Advocate ko hire kar.Aur Divorce ki process karwa.Aajkal ladkiyo ke liye law bahut strict ho gaya hai.Uncle ki property na mile koi gal nahi.Bus ise Divorce milna chahiye.Aur baki ka main dekhta hoo ki kya karna hai.Iske husband us Jagan ko toh aisee jail karwaoonga ki kabhi bahar hi nahi aa payega.

Armaan:Theek hai ho jayega.Lekin iski treatment.

Ashutosh: Pahele main Nidhi se milkar aata hoo.

And he entered in Nidhi's room.Use apni aankhope bharosa nahi hua.Bilkul murzayee hui thi Nidhi.Bilkul bejaan ho gai thi.

Ashutosh slowly came to Nidhi and just called her,"Nidhi"bilkul dheere se pyaar se.

But he come to know that she couldn't speak and hear.He just put his hand on her hand.

She wake up with fear.


Ashutosh:Nidhi,pahechana muze?main Ashutosh hoo.Tumhara bachapan ka dost.Tumhe yad hai?

Nidhi signed him as No.

Nidhi signed him as she think he is a doctor and he is here to give injection to her.

Ashutosh again signed her that he is not a doctor and he will not inject her.He is her friend and he also signed her to trust him.

Now Nidhi was relief and she started to trusing him.

Ashutosh stand up to go and she picked his hand.And just signed to him to sit for sometime more.

Ashutosh told her in sign that he will be back in short time and will bring her to his home.She became happy .

Ashutosh came out of her room and the first work he had done that he called his younger sister Dr Mallika.Who is Psycatric by profession and he explaned her everything.Dr Mallika tell Ashutosh to bring her in Delhi where Ashutosh and Mallika living.

Ashutosh then came to Armaan and tell him that he is taking Nidhi with him to Delhi and dr Mallika will take care and will give full psychological treatment to her.Armaan agrred to this and told that he will be regularly visit Delhi to see her progress.

Aur Ashutosh Nidhi ko Delhi le aaya.Woh Nidhi ko lekar Dr Mallika ke pas gaya.

Ab Nidhi ki har treatment shuru ho gai.Nidhi ko pata bhi nahi chalta aur Dr Mallika apne suz buz se Nidhi ke saath khel khel me apna session pura karwa leti.

Nidhi ka progress achha hone laga.Yahaa Ashutosh apne business ke sath sath Signing language bhi sikhane laga.

He became so powerful in that language.Now he can interact with nidhi so well.

Pure 6 mahine hue the Nidhi ko Delhi aaye.Woh abhi normal ho rahi thi.

Dr Mallika Ashutosh ke pas aayee

Dr Mallika:bhaiya,main aapse kuchh puchhna chahti hoo?

Ashutosh:Ha puchho

Dr Mallika:Bhaiya aap Nidhi ko janate hai na?achhe se?use kis cheej ka shauk hai?

Ashutosh:Ha Mallika,Nidhi ko bachpan se Swimming ka shauk tha.Lekin baad me pata nahi.

Mallika:Toih bhaiya use swimming class me daal do.Usko us se khushi hogi aur yeh bhi treatment ka ek hissa ban jayega.Uska darna kam hoga.

Ashutosh:Theek hai Mallika.Toh main humare yahaa club me hi uska swimming start karwa deta hoo.Aur uske liye main khud uske saath jaoonga.Main risk nahi le sakta.

And Ashutosh take her to swimming pool.First she was scared but once Ashutosh entered in swimming pool she too jumped in that blue water.

Jaise hi usne pani me chhalaang lagai.Uske andar ka aatmvishwas,uska bachpan,Uska shauk use sab yaad aa gaya aur woh jor se rone lagi aur swimming uske dukh bhulane ka sadhan ban gaya

Aur us din se Nidhi ke liye swimming gum bhulane ka jariya ban gaya.Woh itni shiddat se simming karti.Dolphin jump,Lane lagana jaise uske liye baye haath ka khel tha.Now she dace in swiming pool.

Ab swimming uske liye janoon ban gaya tha.Woh swimming pool me hoti toh apne aapko bhul jati.Sab log usko dekhte rahete.Mallika bhi use dekhkar bahut khush hoti.Anji Armaaan bhi aate rahete the.Aur Anji ka dost Rohan bhi.

Ek din us club ke master ne Nidhi ko 6 feet ki hight se jump karne ko kahaa.Ashutohs kuch bolne laga toh master ne Use chup rahene ko kahaa aur signing language me Nidhi ko steps pe jane ko kahaa.Nidhi upar toh chali gai lekin use dive karne me dar lagne laga.Tabhi master ne use bola ki darogi toh duniya darayegi.Aur pure Junoon se usne dive lagai.

Master ne Ashutosh se kahaa,"Mr Ashutosh,Nidhi is a brilliant swimmer.Agar aap kahe toh humare club ka swimming competation ho raha hai toh main Nidhi ko participate ke haisiyat se naam likh loo.Usko aage badhane ka mauka milega.Aap kya kahete hai?

Ashutosh became so happy.He just say."Muze Nidhi ko puchhna padega."

Master:Theek hai aap puchh lijiye.

Ashutosh asked Nidhi about that competition.

Now she was behaving normally.Use sab kuchh samaz me aa raha tha.She just said yes to Ashutosh.

Ab Nidhi pahele se jyada mahenat karne lagi thi

Us swimming competition me Nidhi first number pe aayee.Toh Master ne use State competition ke liye uska naam approve kiya.Wahaa bhi woh first aayee

Ab Nidhi ki zindagi ne raftaar pakadi thi.Aur Ashutosh ne bhi koi kasar nahi chhodi thi.

Ashutohs ne Nidhi ke kaan ko specialist ko dikhaya aur specialist doctors ki panel ne Ashutosh ko surgery ki advice di.Aur unhone yeh operation ke baad Nidhi puri tarah se sun payegi yeh hausala bhi Ashutohs aur Nidhi ko diya.

Sab doctors ne milkar yeh decide kiya ki International Swimming comp jo Durban me hone wali thi Us comp ke baad Nidhi ka operation hoga.Ashutohs and all agreed with their decession.

Ab Nidhi aur Ashutosh ka rishta bhi badhne laga tha.Nidhi ka confidence use wapis mil gaya tha.Aur Ashutosh ne advocate ki madad se Nidhi ko divorcedilwaya aur Jagan ko jail.Jis
din Nidhi ko Divorce mila usi din Nidhi ne International ke liye apna form submit kiya.

Akhir woh din aaya.Nidhi ne Durban me Swimming ka naya world record banaya aur woh duniya ki sabse tej swimmer bani.

Ab Nidhi kisi ki mohtaaj nahi thi.

Ashutosh was giving his speech and the audience listening Nidhi's story so carefully.A pin drop silence was occured in hall.

Ashutosh just stayed,"Betiya boz nahi hoti hai.Unhe padhao.Likhao.Unme aatmvishwas bharo toh woh apna aur desh ka vikas kar sakti hai.Use boz kehekar pure aurat jaat ka apmaan mat karo.Isme un deviyoka apmaan hota hai jiski aap puja karte ho"

And pura hall taliyo se Gunj utha.

Hope you wil like this


Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrates and thank you Tasha
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Alka i am like fainting ☺️

why dear?
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

How many times i edited my Reply 😆

feel Nidhi is disabled and married , good concept 👏

Two people entering to her life , confused 🤪

Congrats and all the best Alka 👏

No problem dear.Nidhi is merried but what happened to her?for this answer you wil have to read update.
Thank you dear
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

u are great Alka , so creative i like all but this one special , u had captured more caps to one siggie 👏




Thank you so much Ariya
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Keep it up good work Alka

Thank you Ariya.
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Friends so tired now.Rest re comment tom.
Good night to everyone and sweeet dream
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Short and sweet Alka. Story of a brave girl who has been through hell that she cannot hear or talk. Very sad that people like that exist who abuse girl and women. Glad she found someone to love and support her and found a purpose in life. 😃

Is this only one part?
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More work but still want to read my Favourite FF
Alka u are back , Great , get used to read Aaradhana , addicted to her FF but still in chap 10 😭 Now u oh God superb


Superb What a opening Alka 👏
Nidhi came there with her coach and would be husband Ashutosh Mathur.She was so nervbous that she holded Ashutosh's hand so tightly.Ashutosh calmed her down and drive her in first raw. ( So beautiful scene Alka LOVE IT 👏

Aur woh lamha aaya jab Nidhi ka naam jor se pukara gaya.Lekin Nidhi ne kuchh react nahi kiya.And Ashutosh ne use isharo se samazaya aur stage par badhne ko kahaa.She shake her head in No stye.( Poor Nidhi but feel u are going to show the loving Bond between them ) 😛

Ashutosh lead her to the stage and Shaila ji again stand up from her chair and came to Nidhi.She gave Nidhi her hand and lead her towards stage.Nidhi was announced as The Twinkling star of our nation"and she gave Trophy to Nidhi." ( Twinkling star so sweet ) 😛

Now Shaila understand Nidhi's condition and she just gave a small speech.

Miss Shaila: Ladies and Gentleman.Thank you so much for coming to cheer up the most talented sportperson.Miss Nidhi Verma.I know what you are thinking?Why Nidhi is special that so many girls won Swiming gold medal?but i want to prove you all wrong.Nidhi is special bec she can't speak and can't hear.She has only one language.It is swimming.And not only that she made a world Record by winning this race.Aur jyada na kehete hue i want to call her coach and would be husband Mr Ashutosh Mathur and her doctor Dr Armaan. ( 😲Ashuthosh not a Doc )

And Ashutosh started most tragical story of that angel Nidhi Verma

Ashutosh:Aap sab log toh janate hi hone ki main aur Nidhi Verma shadi karne wale hai.Main Nidhi se isiliye shadi karna chahta hoo kyonki maine zindagi me itni himmatwali ladki nahi dekhi.( so nice feel the sequence Alka )😭

Main Nidhi ko bachpan se janata hoo.Woh bachpan me bilkul theek thi.Uske chahere par humesha muskaan reheti thi.Apne ma ki pari thi woh.Use khel kud ka shauk tha.Toh Nandini anty ne use swimming me daal diya.Main usse do saal senior tha.Hum saath me khelte the.padhte the.
Lekin achanak ek din woh ho gaya jiska kisiko andaaja bhi nahi tha.Nidhi bahar aangan me khel rahi thi aur ghar me Nandini anty khana bana rahi thi aur uncle bahar TV dekh rahe the.Achanak se ghar me Cyliner Blast hua aur Nidhi us din anath ho gai.Uske chaha aur chachi aaye aur Nidhi ko apne saath Kanpur le gaye.Tab woh lagbhag 12 saal ki thi.
Aur main bhi apni padhai puri karne ke liye Dehradun chala gaya.Toh mera aur Nidhi ka contact tut gaya.
Ashutohs lead into deep thought.All the incidents of Nidhi's life were moving in front of him like a horror movie.( so sad nicely described Alka so emotional but a good opening for a meaningful story )👏
I'll stop from here will read the rest tom surely , tied up with my work 😭

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