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Posted: 11 years ago
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As I walk along the paths of life ,
Think of days long gone by ,
Of a love , lost in the distant sky ,
Why ? As the sorrow strikes I ask
Answers I have none ,
Will a hand ever reach out for mine,
Or will I always find emptiness there
Will my tears be in vain ,
Or will I find the strength again
Sadness, happiness,
Life will go on ,
Tears and smiles will walk hand in hand ,
For destiny waits for no one
And tomorrow will always come .



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bc123456

As I walk along the paths of life ,

Think of days long gone by ,
Of a love , lost in the distant sky ,
Why ? As the sorrow strikes I ask
Answers I have none ,
Will a hand ever reach out for mine,
Or will I always find emptiness there
Will my tears be in vain ,
Or will I find the strength again
Sadness, happiness,
Life will go on ,
Tears and smiles will walk hand in hand ,
For destiny waits for no one
And tomorrow will always come .



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is there more doc ji?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



is there more doc ji?


Do u think I have gone bonkers Please can we play an animal game😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No..No .. not at all... but, this sounded incomplete somewhat.. please extend!

Animal game is a good idea.. what animal?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice continuation doc

Tomorrow .. All look forward to it .. Hope all have a better tomorrow than today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OK😃

You will make ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



OK😃

You will make ?

Please do I am waiting for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfect continuation Doc 👏👏 👏👏
Very thoughtful lines indeed ! Life is such... It gives all the sad n happy moments.. and we always try to come out of the sadness ! Tomorrow is always there... N will be !

Life always give you a second chance.. n its called tomorrow !
Life moves on within... Its the strength that makes us to get the better tomorrow ! ⭐️
Bravo Doc... You have once again give such wonderful poetry... I wish to get them every day now... Thoughts so warm n real ! 👏


⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just because today is not better, tomorrow will not be the same. Tomorrow is always best with good and happy life.👍🏼
Very nice part in the continuation Dr. Babs 👏 🤗
Your thoguhts are so lively that gives a truth feel of life. Like it the most. The courage, strength and determination leads us to the better of the change in tomorrow.
Things will get better - may be tomorrow or after that, but that will happen. The new tomoorow with great hopes will come eventually.
Beautiful thoughts as ever. Loved them. Keep giving us the feel of this closeness from you, really cherishing your poetic hidden talent 👏👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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great poet Doc 👏

As I walk along the paths of life ,
Think of days long gone by ,
u know Doc i never think on past 😛
Of a love , lost in the distant sky ,
Why ? As the sorrow strikes I ask
Answers I have none ,
Will a hand ever reach out for mine,
Or will I always find emptiness there
Will my tears be in vain ,
Or will I find the strength again
This is the best part , My answer is , Should Find the Strength . Why should i waste my tears for a thing which is already got a full stop ?😡
Sadness, happiness,
Life will go on ,
Tears and smiles will walk hand in hand ,
For destiny waits for no one
Not believing in destiny at all Doc 😛
And tomorrow will always come .

Lovely thought DOC keep writing , always love to read ur meaningful , short and sweet poets a lot 🤗




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