Pyaar ki Intehaane 2 Last chap on pg 42 and Epilogue on pg 44 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you a ton Bawa for your awsome comment

Always my pleasure Alka di 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved both the siggies, Alkaben. 👏 👏 The animated one has Ashu checking his paunch... So cute scene!! The update is also really cute & beautiful. Brilliantly written!! 👏 Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hu majama panh tume kya chho?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Loved both the siggies, Alkaben. 👏 👏 The animated one has Ashu checking his paunch... So cute scene!! The update is also really cute & beautiful. Brilliantly written!! 👏 Loved it.

Thank you Tupu for your comment.I too found Ashutosh too cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update alka ji.liked the way ashu made the CD for nidhi .such an emotional chapter
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
@All,I am writing my chap today.But it may be take some time.Bec i am making Ashni's seperation and their duty concern in unique way.More than that i want to include some drastic truth related to the duty of a major and Military jawaans.It is the reflection of our nation and society.
So wait for my chap.I am sure you will enjoy it lot.

Thank you all.Have a beautiful day ahead.
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

@All,I am writing my chap today.But it may be take some time.Bec i am making Ashni's seperation and their duty concern in unique way.More than that i want to include some drastic truth related to the duty of a major and Military jawaans.It is the reflection of our nation and society.

So wait for my chap.I am sure you will enjoy it lot.

Thank you all.Have a beautiful day ahead.

Wow... ! Will be waiting for this chapter Alka di 😊
Take your time... n you too have a lovely day ahead 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Hu majama panh tume kya chho?😆


hu aya cho 😉 😆

translation i m here 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late friends.








Chand aur sitare mehfoos hai
Aasmaan ki godi me

Moti ka sookum toh
Sagar ki gehrai me hai

Hum yuhi unka karte nahi intejaar
Humara jahaa toh unki bahe hai.

Nidhi joined KGH.Dr Kulkarni and whole staff of KGH give her beautiful welcome.All gave her roses and card.

She touch dr Kulkarni's feet and took his blessing.

Dr Kulkarni:Lagta hai meri beti muze wapis mil gai.Bus ab ho jao shuru betaji.Sare patient aapki raah dekh rahe hai.

And she gave him cute smile and start walking towards He cabin.

She entered in her cabin.That was like her second home.

She sat on her chair and she was feeling like she is in her mom's lap.

Use baar baar Ashutosh ki kami mehsoos hone lagi thi.Use apne kano me violin ki dhun sunai de rahi thi aur woh use bechain kar rahi thi.Use woh unki shadi,suhaagraat aur fir chhotasa aur pyaarsa Honeymoon ek sapne jaisa lag raha tha.

She was feeling restless.She tried to call Ashutosh.But his mobile was not responding.She took it easy.May be he is not in coverage area.

Dr kulkarni knew her condition so he called her and said,"Dr Nidhi aapki duty aajse abhi se children ward me lagai jati hai.So go back to your work.Will meet you in canteen in Lunch hour.

Nidhi ke chahere par smile aa gai.

She took the charge of Children ward,"The favourite corner "

She was still waiting for Ashutosh's call.


At home "Verma House"

DB,Col verma and Col Mathur.sitting on hall and talking about the orphan house.They are reading the map and struture of orphan house.

Ek kabadiwala ghar ke bahar aakar khada ho gaya.

DB: Are nahi hai kabadi ja yahaa se.

Kabadiwala:Paper do toh chalega

And he entered in the house.All were shocked to see him.

He just entered in hall and gave salute to col verma and mathur.

"Sir,sorry muze aise aana pada.Humare major sahab ne yeh do cd's di hai aapko dene ke liye.Please yeh confidential matter hai toh you know aapko kya karna hai?

DB:Andar aao beta.Chai...

That man:sorry DB.Duty par hoo.Bus yahi dene aaya tha.

And he walked out.

Col verma and Col Mathur entered in Col verma's room and locked that room.

Col verma opened that packet.One cd was for Nidhi and another for them.

Col Verma carefully played that cd on his laptop and put it on low tone.

Ashutosh: Sorry Baba and sorry col sahab.Main aapko is tarah se cd bhej raha hoo.I am doing fine.Aur Nidhi ko samazaiye meri fikar na kare.I am not able to call you bec i am on secret mission.And my phone maine sim card nikal diya hai for the security reasons.Aur is samay Santoshkumar bi mere saath hai.Unki jaan ko bhi khatara ho sakta hai.aur fir toh aapke calls bhi tape ho sakte hai.Toh aap jara bahar jakar dekhiye gali me Jyada Garbage toh nahi jama ho gaya?aur Nidhi in sabse anjaan hai toh aap uska bhi dhyan rakhiye baba.Aur please ek baar KGH jakar dekhiye wahaa bhi Garbage pada hai kya?Jyada baat nahi kar sakta baba.Meri fikar mat kijiye.Take care of yourself.

Aur uske code word ki bhasha dono samaz gaya aur unke kadam KGH me badhne lage.Lekin usse pahele woh apne ghar ke gate ki taraf aaye aur dekha toh Do aadmi Motor cycle pe us ghar ke chakkar kaat rahe the.

So they came to know what is Ashutosh talking about?
Nidhi was too busy with her duty and schedule.

But still she was waiting for Ashutosh's call.Pure din Ashutohs ka call nahi aaya toh woh mayus hokar sham ko ghar pahuchi.

Aaj uska mood bilkul theek nahi tha.She was missing her hubby badly.

DB:Nidhi,Beta.Bahut thaki hui lag rahi hai.Tabiyat theek nahi hai kya?

Nidhi:Nahi DB.Main theek hu.Bus thodi thak gai hoo.Baba aur papa kahaa hai?

Tabhi col verma aur col Mathur hall me aaye.

Col Mathur:Nidhi,kaisee ho beta?Din kaisa raha?

She was in dilemma to tell col Mathur or not.But col mathur understand her.

he signed col verma.

Col Verma:Nidhi,beta apne kamare me jake fresh ho ja fir neeche aa.

Nidhi moodlessly went to her room.When she returned from washroom She saw col Mathur was sitting on the chair.

She came to him and just started crying.She sat next to him on sofa.

Col Mathur put his hand on Nidhi's head and asked,"Kuchh kahena hai Nidhi?tum muze keh sakti ho.But i want to tell you something.

Nidhi:ji,papa woh unka phone aaj dinbhar nahi aaya aur isiliye muze tention ho rahi hai.

Col Mathur:Nidhi,beta aaj Ashutosh ki cd aayee hai.Woh usne apne camp ke ek sathi ke haath bhijwai hai.

Nidhi gave him questioning look.

Col Mathur:Beta,dekho main jo kaheta hu use dhyan se suno.Ashutosh abhi secret mission par hai.Woh Santosh kumar hai na?tum toh mil chuki ho na unse?

Nidhi:Ji baba unhone hume party di thi Kanpur me.

Col Mathur:ha wohi.Woh aur Ashutosh abhi secret mission par hai.Aur jyada detail toh muze nahi maloom lekin shayad Ashutosh agle do hafte tak phone call nahi kar sakega tumhe.

Nidhi:Kya?aisa kyon papa?

Col Mathur:Nidhi,kabhi kabhi aise logo ke peechhe kuchh antisocial activity karnewale pad jate hai.Fir woh phone ke jariye wahaa ka destination jan lete hai.Fir kidnapping,pareshan karna.Family ko torture karna shuru ho jata hai.Toh un sabse bachne ke liye hi hum log mission par apna simcard band kar dete hai.

Nidhi feel proud of her husband and his duty.She just gave grand salute to her FIL.

Nidhi:thank you papa.Ab main pareshan nahi hongi.Bus unka intejaar karungi.

And she smiled at col Mathur.

Fir Nidhi aur col Mathur ne Dher sari bate ki.Nidhi ka mood thoda theek hogaya tha.

DB ne sabko khane ke table pe bulaya.

Jate jate Col Mathur ne Nidhi ko cd di aur kahaa,"Nidhi,ab tum Ashutohs ki biwi ho.So,you know what to keep secret and what to not?Ashutosh ki koi bhi baat kisise bhi bina bharose ke share mat karna beta."

Nidhi:Ji papa main dhyan rakhungi aur aleart rahungi.

After their Dinner Anji came to Nidhi and col verma,col Mathur and solanki family joined in gossiping in the garden area.

DB planned that all will sleep on terrace and Nidhi and Anji will join them.

Anji:Nidhi,kitne dino ke baad hum sab saath me soyenge na chhat pat.

Nidhi:Ha Anji bada majaa aayega.Lekin tumse ek request karoo?if you don't mind?

Anji:bol de ab.

Nidhi:Anji,main bus aadhe ghante me sabko terrace par join karti hoo.Muze Tumhare jiju ne CD bheji hai woh dekhni hai.Please.

Anji:Usme kya hai Nidhi.Take your time.Chal main bhi ghar pe jakar change karke aati hoo.

All were on terrace and Nidhi came to her room.She close her room and started that CD.

Ashutosh was on screen in full uniform.She feel proud for him.

Ashutosh:Doll,[ Kaan pakadkar] I am sorry.Par kya karoo?aapki yaad itni aati hai ki aankhose aasoo nikal aate hai.lekin yeh jimmedari bhi nibhani padegi na?after all aap hi ne sikhaya hai na ki duty comes first.Par sach kahoo?aapko dekhne ka milne ka bahut man karta hai doll.Humne saath gujare din,woh lamhe,woh rate yaad karta hoo toh apne aapko bada khushnasib samazta hoo.I love you so much doll.Bus thoda sabr aur.Aur haa,meri yaad me roti mat rahena aur apni sehet ka dhyan rakhna.Khana waqt par.Jab main wapis aaoo meri doll muze waisee hi chahiye.Hasti muskurati.

And he hugged himself with tear in his eyes."Doll.main toh aapki tasveer bhi saath me nahi rakh sakta.Lekin aap humesha mere dil aur dimag me rahegi.I love you and i am missing you badly.Love you

And he gave cute flying kiss to Nidhi.

And then he sent some beautiful moments of their love journey which made Nidhi more emotional.

She just started crying and kissed back to screen,"Ashutosh,i love you and i am missin you.I will wait for you.I am proud of you.

And she made her way to terrace to meet her friend Anji.
On terrace Nidhi and Anji sharing some childhood moments which they enjoyed.

Anji:Nidhi,kya hua tumhe?kyo udaas hai tu?

Nidhi:Are kuchh nahi Anji.

Anji:kya tu jijiu ko miss kar rahi hai?are main bhi kya betuka sawal kar rahi hoo.Of colurse tu jiju ko miss kar rahi hai.Hai na?

Nidhi:Ha Anji.Main unhe bahut miss karti hoo.Woh bhi muze miss karte hai.Muze unki bahut yaad aa rahi hai

Aur Nidhi ne Anji ke kandhe par sur rakhkar rona chalu kar diya.Anji ne thodi der use rone diya fir puchha,"Bus kar ab Nidhi.Rone se tu chhutegi nahi muzse.Pahle yeh toh bata Suhaagrat kasee thi?Aur short and sweet Honeymoon kaisa tha?

Nidhi uske sawalo se sharma gai.

Nidhi:Nahi bataoongi.

Aur dono me nok zok shuru ho gai.Nidhi ne sharmate hue Anji ko sab batana shuru kiya aur use isi dauraan kab neend aa gai use bhi nahi pata chala.

Next Morning

Nidhi was sleeping calmly and Col Verma and Col Mathur came to her.

Col Mathur:Dekh Yog.Nidhi kitna miss karti hai Ashutohs ko.Uske aankhose aasoo abhi bhi uske aakhose zalake hue hai.

Col Verma:yahi toh baat hai na Alok.Humari yahi majboori hai.Hum humare apno ko samay nahi de pate.

And they both put their hand on Nidhi's head.

Tabhi DB aa gai.

DB:Ha dono milke lagao najar bachi ko.Kitni pyaari lag rahi hai na shadi ke baad meri bachi?kisiki najar na lage is pari ko.

And she too put her hand oh Nidhi's head.

This time Nidhi opened her eyes and shocked to see all of them near her.

She waked up with shock.

Nidhi:Baba,papa DB aap sab yahaa?kuchh hua hai kya?

DB:Are kuchh nahi hua hai.Bus sabko chai pine ke liye bulane aayee thi sab tuze dekh rahe the.

And she relaxed and went to her room to get ready for KGH.

After taking breakfast she started her car to KGH.Col Mathur said,"Nidhi,main aao kya tere saath?bus dr Kulkarni ko milkar wapis aa jaoonga."

Nidhi:Sure Baba

And they both entered in KGH.

Today Nidhi got duty as the Assistant doctor for Neurologist Dr Sannidhya .

One patient came to Nidhi and said,"Oh madam ji.Munne bhi doctor ko dikhana hai.Kutte milenge yeh dr babusa?

Nidhi couldn't understand his language.

Suddenly Dr Rangnath came towards her cabin.

Dr Rangnath knocked her cabin,"Come in she replied as she saw dr Rangnath is coming.

Nidhi:Dr Rangnath,yeh kya bol rahe hai muze samaz nahhi aa raha hai.

Dr Rangnath saw that guy.

That guy was six and half feet hight and turban on his head.He wear Royal blue Kurti and Mehroon colour dhoti.He had beautiful spects on his eyes.

Dr Rangnath:Are kya bhaya?kya chahiye aapne?

That man:Munne tumhare dr sa ko apni khopadiya dikhani hai.

Dr Rangnath:Are magar ee toh batao Maharaaj!ki teri khopadiya me ki hoyasi?

That man"Mari khopadiya raat me raag sunesi.Aakha din mune dil me jaltarang sunai de si.Anne mune neend na aawe hai Maharaj.

And he winked at Dr Rangnath.Dr Rangnath still didn't understand.

Nidhi:Dr Rangnath,please handle him.I will be back in ten minutes.

And she left.

Jaise hi dr Nidhi cabin me se bahar nikali.Us aadmi ne dr Rangnath ko gale laga liya aur bola,"Kyon Maharaaj?kaisee lagi mari acting?"

Dr Rangnath saw him carefully.He was Major Ashutosh.

Ashutosh:Sab baad me bataoonga.Lekin abhi yeh samaz lijiye ki kisiko mere bareme pata nahi chalna chahiye.Main bus yahaa nidhi se milne aaya hoo.Security reasons hai.

Dr Ragnath:Koi bat nahi Ahutosh.Bus aap yahaa rukiye main Nidhi ko bhejta hoo.

Ashutosh:Thank you.Lekin use batana nahi abhi.

And he left the cabin.

Within two minutes Nidhi came to her cabin.She saw that strenger in her cabin again.

Nidhi:aap ab tak yahi hai?

Ashutosh came to near her and said,Toh fir katte jaoo aapne chhodkar?

And he just put his hand on her shoulder.She Jerked her shoulder.

And tried to shout.Ashutosh put his hand on her mouth and at last said,"Doll"

His doll word is enough her to identified Ashutosh.She just turned towards him and saw in his eyes.

Ashtuosh gave cute smile toher and she hugged him tightly.
Nidhi came to Ashutosh.And just said,"Major saab,kaise hai aap?na phone karte hai na yaad karte hai."and she started crying.

Now Ashutosh couldn't controlled himself and he came to Nidhi and started kissing her madly.

Nidhi too waiting for this moments.She too hugged him tightly and enjoying his love.His touch and kiss giving her a new strength of life.

Tabhi Nidhi ne Ashutosh ka chehera apne hatho me liya aur kahaa,"Jee,ab meri baari and she put her lips on Ashutosh's Lips."


Nidhi:Ji,aap is tarah?aap theek hai na?Main aapse jyada sawal nahi karoongi.Bus aapko jee bharke dekh toh loo.

And she looked at Ashutosh without blinking eyes and tears started from her eyes.

Ashutosh huged her tightly and pushed her toward him that he was missing her touch her smeel her love.

They both remained silence for some time.

Ashutosh:Kaisee hai meri doll?

and he caressing her hair.Nidhi is still in dreamland.She still not believing Ashutosh is here.

Nidhi:Jee,main woh main woh.

Ashutosh:Kya doll?main main kyon darling?

Nidhi:aap yahaa kaise aur kyon aise aaye hai?

Ashutosh:Bus tumse milne ka man kiya toh aa gaya.Bus mera kaam khatam ho jaye toh fir main ghar aaoonga aur hum dusre long HM par chalenge.Ok.Waise kisiko batana nahi ki main aaya tha.Aur haa sawadhani rakhna.Koi kuchh mere bareme puchhe toh anjaan logo ke saath kuchh bhi share mat karna.

Nidhi:Woh baba ne muze samazaya tha.Are haan baba bhi yahi hai bulaoo kya?

Ashutosh:Main unse mil chuka parking me.Bus baat nahi hui.Ho sakta hai baba ka bhi koi peechha kar raha ho.Toh bus unse mila aur andar chala aaya.Chalo ab main chalta hoo.

Nidhi:Itni jaldi?

Ashutosh:Doll,tumhe pata hai na main duty par hoo.

And he came to Nidhi and took her face on his hands.She pouted at him.And he laughed,"Bilkul doll hai meri.Bus ab rona nahi aur main jaldi aa jaoonga."

And again she hugged him tightly.

Nidhi:Ab kab aayenge milne muze?

Ashutosh:Bus jaldi.Lekin apna aur sabka dhyan rakhana.Samziu

And he tried hard to control his tears.But


Dil ka dard Kabhi hawao ko
Kabhi fizao ko rulata hai
Jab ankaha dard nasoor banata hai
Toh aankhe bhigo deta hai

Sorry if i made any mistake in Rajasthani boli.

Next update: What was Ashutosh's mission and what he had done?





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