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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pighla hai Paththar Aankhon se aaj
Aansuon ka khula hai aaj hi raaz

behti hai ganga usse behne do

mujhe chupchap andhere me hi

rehne do...

dard hai paththar isse pighal jane do..

beete ko bula ke sunhere kal aane do...

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pansy123

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice poem

Hope stretching wings to overcome desperation ultimately. 👏

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rayafan17

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Very nice Rabzy .. Let the past be swept away for a new beginning..

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lovely poem Rabzy 👏

Let the past be over to start the life afresh n new ! Every sunset has a promise of a new dawn !

Naye pal ke liye beete ko bhulan hi hoga ! ⭐️

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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: bawaswift
Lovely poem Rabzy👏
Let the past be over to start the life afresh n new ! Every sunset has a promise of a new dawn !
Naye pal ke liye beete ko bhulan hi hoga !⭐️

sahi kaha bawa thanks :)

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bc123456

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Posted: 11 years ago

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menaka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow 👏

I am week in Hindi but can read these types of Short poems 😳

words are really related with my Language so can understand well 😛

so loving poem ⭐️

u are a great poet 👏

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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: bc123456

thanks

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Rabzonedge

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ariyadasa
wow👏
I am week in Hindi but can read these types of Short poems😳

words are really related with my Language so can understand well😛

so loving poem⭐️

u are a great poet👏

hht aiya r

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Hina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice poem Rabzy!! 😉

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