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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful and heartrending OS AlkabenπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Even today and in very educated and well off families too, all the talks of respecting women, women emancipation, women empowerment etc. etc. are only namesake. Injustice to women and girl is still very very common 😭 Thousands of such cases we see all around us and still we can't do anything. 😭😭😭 But God has his own ways of punishing such criminals of women. The story your OS depicts, is really an eye opener for the ppl who neglect girl child in allurement of boychild.

Mr. Anil Kamath deserted Nidhi and her mother Niraji only because Niraji bore a girlchild and Mr. kamath wanted a torch-bearer for his business empire 😑 The situation in which he is shown today doesnt generate any sympathy for him but a feeling that this is poetic justice to him for his sin.

Life always comes a full circle and nature always puts one face the same troubles that one gives to others. Mrs. Kamath isnt bothered about her son on deathbed. Rajesh is prodigal and has turned alcoholic . With both kidneys failed, he is very badly ill. Mr. Kamath got a son but couldnt make him take reins of his business empire. Today, Mr. Kamath begs for life of his son to Nidhi whom he had disowned long ago and didnt even lloked back at. As Nidhi says, it's his own karma in this very lifetime, he is paying for.

As a single parent, Nidhi's mother brought her up with great care and made her a very successful Dr. Today, Nidhi has her own identity and a very respectable position in society πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Dr. Dubey too proved a good samaritan and took care of them. It's so great to see that Nidhi is getting Niraji married with Dr. Dubey on coming Valentine's Day!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Such an admirable step by a daughter!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Nidhi's anger very well reflects in all her talks with Mr. Kamath. Dr. Ashutosh too proves a great support to her. For a while, her suppressed anger for all these years gets the better of her and she gets agitated but immediately the Dr. in her takes over and she starts Rajesh's treatment. Here, I really liked Nidhi refuting Mr. Kamath to treat Rajesh as her brother and firmly maintaining that she would treat him as her patient only and will try to save him till his last breath.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Thank you for this superb OS Alkaben. πŸ€— U r such a creative genius!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awesome storyline pls continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Wow Alkaji a very emotional and touching OS.
You have taken u a nice topic.
Good theme, Good writing, good presentation. Hats off.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
How r U dear? It is learnt that U are not well. TC.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Dil maange more AlkajiπŸ˜›

I will write another os πŸ˜†.Thank you teacherjee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: pansy123

Lovely OS Alka ji πŸ‘ Aashayen...reminded me of these lines

The sky waits for this spell to be broken,
for history to tear itself from this net,
for Silence to break its chains
so that a symphony of conch shells
may wake up to the statues
and a beautiful, dark goddess,
her anklets echoing, may unveil herself.

Thank you pansy for liking my os.Too beautiful lines.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very nice story Alka Di πŸ‘

Very thoughtful and raising an issue of hating the girl child..
I am shaken at once with Nidhi's mind of state, so true and natural.. and her agony to see her biological father...
I will write more tomorrow..

Thank you Bawa.This is a real story of a girl child.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Very beautiful and heartrending OS AlkabenπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Even today and in very educated and well off families too, all the talks of respecting women, women emancipation, women empowerment etc. etc. are only namesake. Injustice to women and girl is still very very common 😭 Thousands of such cases we see all around us and still we can't do anything. 😭😭😭 But God has his own ways of punishing such criminals of women. The story your OS depicts, is really an eye opener for the ppl who neglect girl child in allurement of boychild.

Mr. Anil Kamath deserted Nidhi and her mother Niraji only because Niraji bore a girlchild and Mr. kamath wanted a torch-bearer for his business empire 😑 The situation in which he is shown today doesnt generate any sympathy for him but a feeling that this is poetic justice to him for his sin.

Life always comes a full circle and nature always puts one face the same troubles that one gives to others. Mrs. Kamath isnt bothered about her son on deathbed. Rajesh is prodigal and has turned alcoholic . With both kidneys failed, he is very badly ill. Mr. Kamath got a son but couldnt make him take reins of his business empire. Today, Mr. Kamath begs for life of his son to Nidhi whom he had disowned long ago and didnt even lloked back at. As Nidhi says, it's his own karma in this very lifetime, he is paying for.

As a single parent, Nidhi's mother brought her up with great care and made her a very successful Dr. Today, Nidhi has her own identity and a very respectable position in society πŸ‘ Dr. Dubey too proved a good samaritan and took care of them. It's so great to see that Nidhi is getting Niraji married with Dr. Dubey on coming Valentine's Day!! πŸ‘ Such an admirable step by a daughter!! πŸ‘

Nidhi's anger very well reflects in all her talks with Mr. Kamath. Dr. Ashutosh too proves a great support to her. For a while, her suppressed anger for all these years gets the better of her and she gets agitated but immediately the Dr. in her takes over and she starts Rajesh's treatment. Here, I really liked Nidhi refuting Mr. Kamath to treat Rajesh as her brother and firmly maintaining that she would treat him as her patient only and will try to save him till his last breath.πŸ‘

Thank you for this superb OS Alkaben. πŸ€— U r such a creative genius!! πŸ‘

Tupu we disscussed about this issue.This happens in India.We can see this type of cases in Crime Petrol CID or criminal mind.I don't know when that day will come when men will learn to respect woman?
Thank you for your detailed and beautiful comment dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: swati62

Awesome storyline pls continue soon.

Thank you swati but no second part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Wow Alkaji a very emotional and touching OS.

You have taken u a nice topic.
Good theme, Good writing, good presentation. Hats off.πŸ‘
How r U dear? It is learnt that U are not well. TC.

Thank you Leenaji.I am feeling better now Thank you Leenaji
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you Bawa.This is a real story of a girl child.

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