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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS Aashaye

Jab baten hoti Mahila din ki
Kya hum yeh janate hai?
Kitne dil chhalni hote hai
Kya hum janate hai?
Nari ki surakha ki
Udati hai dhajjiya
Kya hum yeh janate hai?


In KGH

Dr Nidhi and Dr Ashutosh was coming towards OT.They feel releived after that successful operation.

Dr Nidhi: Operation successful raha na sir?

Dr Ashutosh:Ha Nidhi operation toh successful ho gaya.But let's see how he will respond to that medicines.

Tabhi Inquiry counter par ek aadmi jor jor se chilla raha tha.

Dr Rangnath ne dr Nidhi aur dr Ashutosh ko aate hue dekha aur woh unke pas pahuch gaye.

Dr Rangnath:Dr Ashutosh,ek aadmi apne bete ko lekar aaya hai.He want to meet dr Nidhi only.Uska kehena hai ki uske bete ka ilaaj dr Nidhi ke alawa koi nahi kar sakta.Aur use apne bete ka ilaaj dr Nidhi se hi karwana hai.

Dr Nidhi :Toh bhej dijiye uske bete ko.Haa sirf patient ko uske father ko bahar hi rokiye.

Dr Nidhi :Addressing to dr Ashutosh : Kya aap help karenge meri sir?

Dr Ashutosh : Hey doc!yeh sir sir kuchh jyada hi ho raha hai ha.Chalo main aata hoo.

And they walked towards Nidhi's cabin.

Nidhi : to assistant dr: Iski file do.Sab test firse karna.By the way ise hua kya hai?

Dr Rohan : dr Nidhi,uski dono kidneys fail ho chuki hai.Aur he is an addicted person from his report.Woh bahot Alchoholic hai.

Dr Nidhi : Name?

Dr Rohan : Rajesh Anil Kamath.Famous business tykooon Anil Kamath ka beta.

Dr Nidhi :What?Anil Kamath?

Aur uske gusse ka para satwe aasmaan par chadh gaya.

Dr Nidhi :Iska ilaaj main nahi karoongi.Kahi aur le jaiye ise.

Dr Ashutosh understand everything.He came close toh her and put his hand on her shoulder.

Dr Nidhi: Ashutosh yeh Anil kamath ka beta hai.

Dr Ashutosh :But pahele yeh ek patient hai Nidhi.Aur mat bhulo hum drs hai.

Nidhi ne apne emotions ko control karke uska examine kiya.Lekin uska pura badan gusse se tap raha tha.

Fir bhi usne patient ko dekha aur uska ilaaj jald se jald shuru karne ko kahaa.

Dr Nidhi: Rajesh ki ma ko cabin me bhejiye.

Aur ward boy unhe bulane chala gaya.

Ashutosh was still tense.He came to Nidhi and put his hand on her shoulder and said,"Calm down Nidhi,itna gussa achha nahi."

Nidhi: Ashutosh,you know everything.Fir bhi yeh sab keh rahe ho tum?

Ashutosh khamosh ho gaya.

Tabhi Ragini kamath ki jagah mr Kamath cabin me aaye.

Nidhi : [ward boy se] maine ma ko bulane ke liye kahaa tha.Inhe kyon lekar aaye?

Mr Kamath : Sorry doctor.Uski ma nahi aayee

Nidhi was shivering with anger.

Ashutosh :Aaiye mr Kamath,abaithiye.

Mr Kamath: Dr Nidhi,mera beta buch toh jayega.Aap hi hai jo use bacha sakti hai.

Nidhi : [controled her anger] dekhiye hum apni taraf se puri koshish kar rahe hai.Report aane ke baad pata chalega.

Mr Kamath : Dr saheb,woh mera eklauta beta hai.Pata nahi kahaa se sharab ki buri lat lag gai.Bahut laad aur pyaar se pala hai humne use.Paise ki koi kami nahi rakhi.
Pata nahi kis janam ke papo ka badla le raha hai bhagwan humara.

Nidhi : Mr Kamtah.Is janam ke papo ka fal hume isi janam me milta hai.Sochiye aapne kaunsa aisa paap kiya hai jo aapko yeh din dekhna pada.Waise iski ma kahaa hai?

Mr Kamath : Uski ma hogi apne club me.Use toh beta kya karta hai?kahaa hai kuchh pata nahi hota.Bus club,parties yahi uski zindagi hai.

Dr Ashutosh:sham tak report aa jayegi.Tab tak use yahi admit kar dijiye

Mr Kamath : Dr Nidhi,,maine aapke bareme bahut suna hai.Aap paras hai,jispar bhi haath rakh degi woh sone ka ban jayega.Bhagwaan aap jaisee beti sabko de.

Ab Nidhi ke gusse ka jwalamukhi fat gaya.Woh jor se chillayee.

Nidhi :[Shouted] Ashutosh,inhe bahar le jaiye.Kabhi mere samne mat aane dijiye.Warna pata nahi main kya kar doongi.[addressing to mr kamath] Get out from my cabin Mr Kamath.Insaan ke naam par aap ek kala dhabba hai a big black dot of society.

Mr Kamath kuchh samaz nahi paye.

Mr Kamath :Lekin beti...Nidhi shout interupt his sentence.

Dr Nidhi:Shhh.Shut your dirty mouth Mr Kamath.Apni gandi jubaan se muze beti mat kahiye.Main sirf apne ma ki beti hoo.

Mr Kamath: Aapko kya hua hai dr Nidhi?Kya aap muze janati hai?

Dr Nidhi:Please aap yahaa se chale jaiye.Warna i will kill you.

Mr Kamath :Itna gussa?kyon?Maine aisa kya kiya hai dr Nidhi?

Dr Nidhi : Aapne toh aisa kaam kiya hai ki jo sune toh unke rongte khade ho jaye.

Mr kamath:What?

Dr Nidhi:Yaad kijiye mr Kamath.25 saal pahele aapne apni biwi ko ghar se nikal diya tha kyonki usne apni kokh se beti ko janam diya.

Mr Kamath :Yeh sab aapko kaise pata? Nira ne bataya aapko?

Dr Nidhi:Apni gandi jubaan se naam mat lijiye us devi ka.Woh meri ma hai.Usne muze bade pyaar aur ijjat ke saath pala hai.Aaj bhi meri ma ko bahut pyaar karti hoo aur aapse utni hi nafarat.

Mr Kamath :Beta,is tarah se toh Rajesh tumhara bhai hua na?ab toh tum use bacha sakti ho.

Dr Nidhi:Mr kamath,main ek dr hoo.Ek patient ko hum aakhri saas tak bachaneki koshish karte hai.Lekin mera bhai,yeh bolkar muze aap rishto ki duhai nahi de sakte.You are stupid aur aap insaan nahi hai you are criminal mind and criminal.
Lekin muzme meri ma ke sanskaar hai isiliye main aapse adab se baat kar rahi hoo.Jo ladki ki ijjat na kare,beti ko pyaar apna naam na de sake use toh bhagwan bhi jine ka haq nahi deta.Baap ki toh jaan basti hai beti me.Tabhi toh bidaai ke waqt baap chhupchhupkar aasoo bahata hai.Lekin aap toh jallad hai.

Tabhi Heart specialist Dr Dubey wahaa pahuch gaye.

DD: Dr Nidhi,yeh kiski report hai.Matlab yeh Rajesh kaun hai?

Dr Nidhi: papa,yeh mr Kamath hai.[Aur DD chauk gaye]

Dr Nidhi : aur mr kamath yeh mere honewale papa hai.Chaukiye mat.Agle mahine yane 14th feb valentine day par meri mumma aur yeh
Shadi karne wale hai.Chahte toh yeh bahoot saal pahele shadi kar lete.Kyonki yeh pahele meri ma ka sanmaan karte hai aur fir pyaar.
Meri ma aur pa ne muze pyaar diya hai aur padhaya hai.Parents meeting me jab me mere papa ka intejaar karti toh yeh aate the.Aap kitne bade Business tykoon ho lekin mere liye aap zero ho
Big Oblig Zero

Aur teeno mr Kamath ko cabin me chhodkar chale gaye.



Jab betiya chale toh payal chhanakti hai
Betiya uthe toh suraj bhi angadai leta hai
Beti ke sone par baap ki aankhome noor hota hai
Betiya hoti hai baag ki chidiya
Uske par yu na kato
Jo fir khule aasmaan me
Ud bhi na paye.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

How are u felling alka ji

Me feeling good not best.But ok.Thank you Tasha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Alkaji, There are more parts to come???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Alka nice to see ur OS from the beginning
my Hindi becoming so weak Alka but thank God when i reading ur OS again i love to read in Great difficulty

Love it go ahead feel next will be the best 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrates and Thanks Tasha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Alkaji, There are more parts to come???

Thank you Anjani,but no second part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Hi Alka nice to see ur OS from the beginning

my Hindi becoming so weak Alka but thank God when i reading ur OS again i love to read in Great difficulty

Love it go ahead feel next will be the best 👏

Ariya sorry dear no second part.But i will explain this os to you dear.Don't worry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dil maange more Alkaji😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Alka ji 👏 Aashayen...reminded me of these lines

The sky waits for this spell to be broken,
for history to tear itself from this net,
for Silence to break its chains
so that a symphony of conch shells
may wake up to the statues
and a beautiful, dark goddess,
her anklets echoing, may unveil herself.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice story Alka Di 👏
Very thoughtful and raising an issue of hating the girl child..
I am shaken at once with Nidhi's mind of state, so true and natural.. and her agony to see her biological father...
I will write more tomorrow..

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