Originally posted by: Veenaper
Indu, excellent update once again - you have woven this with a lot of care and delicacy to drive home some very bare truths. Meera trying hard to find some chink in Ashu's formidable armour but he giving nothing away and instead showing not only to her but to all the esteemed guests around what Nidhi actually means in his life.
Super loved your narration firstly with Nishu's manners which naturally was appreciated by all including Meera, Ashni's dance, Nidhi's chirpy answers about her career and Ashu's quiet but firm announcement of the impending news which sent Meera into further gloom. Ashu dancing with Meera and fending off all her advances - making her feel like a rag !! Yes she might have well been a corpse in his arms. Nidhi so adept at noticing the adulation that is coming Ashu's way and so understandingly giving Meera that look - that only if she could understand the love that they share. And in spite of all this she is the one inviting her for the function which surely caught Meera by surprise - that is Nidhi - her maturity always shines through becoz she is secure in Ashu's love.Nidhi like a true mother - her little boy always comes first and she is not willing to attend the function. So Ashni are going to shop at Harrods - reminds me of Princess Diana. Meera all lonely and wallowing in self pity and at long last somewhat acknowledging the magical love Ashni share inspite of the vast age gap and the differences in their career graph - looks like you will bring in some incident or a convo between Nidhi and Meera to make her come to terms that Ashu is indeed unattainable.
VEENA..THANX FOR LIKING THE UPDATE...YES NIDHI IS BRINGING UP NISHU V WELL..N I SUPPORT HER IN STAYING BACK TO BE WITH HIM...WHAT I D TRY TO BRING OUT IS THAT SHE D REMAIN PRESENT EVEN IN HER ABSENCE...FOR A LONG TIME AFTER NARGISJI'S DEATH, SUNIL DUTT KEPT THE CHAIR TO HIS LEFT VACANT...N NARGISJI SEEMED PRESENT IN EVEN IN HER ABSENCE...
MEERA IS REALISING...LETS SEE HOW SHE FINALLY DOES...
PLZ SEE BAWAS PICS..IT SEEMS THEY ARE NARRATING MY STORY