OS: Rishhton Ka Ilzaam..:Last ch. on p-78 - All rev./com. responded - Page 30

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Yes baby its Extraaa Marital Affair... For Example
I being married to Mr Khan and at the same time having an affair with Ashutosh 🤣

And Shirley ji I have a BIG NO for EMA! I mean padne ke liye it's fine... Kuch tadka toh banta hain Boss 😉 And why aren't you sleeping????? Huh? abhi tak kyu jaage ho????

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hi Shirley

Thanks for the pm.

I read the update and I should say, its powerful! Yes. I am unable to find any other word for it.

There are two things. One is your writing and second is the story and the scenes in it.

Your writing is absolutely awesome!! and it is powerful!! You have almost made me feel every emotion they felt. 👏👏👏

and then, the story. I didnot like it. Call me Indian orthodox buddhi or anything! But, No.

She is married and please dont tell me how disgusting it is to keep someone else in the mind and pretending to happily married with someone else! I dont find any mistake from Ashutosh. May his love is platonic and all good intentions... and I assume he did not marry anyone else.

I agree, unintentionally he cut her wings and emotionally killed her. But, I guess people when they have some other lives to lead, time heals the wounds and slowly, drift away! especially married to someone else and have accepted another life!

Ofcourse, this is only my view! Sorry. I am unable to connect to this EEMA.. emotional EMA. (EMA doesnt always a physical relationship!)

It is all your powerful dialogues that , I have this developed this much revulsion for Nidhi.
May be in the next part, they realize all this and again I would change my opinion...Then, it all will be your great writing!👏

Congratulations to Deepali for coming up with new dimensions to the story!👏

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Hi Mudra

Thank u for ur kind words of appreciation...but this story is entirely Shirley's effort . Her talent for writing vivid and effortlessly beautiful stories is astounding. The level of emotions conveyed in each story just took my breath away over and over again. She has a gift for bringing everything to life with her words and can write even the simplest scene in such a way that the words just sink right into your heart.

and how!!! I always admire how well she weaves the emotions supported by words!👏

And definitely no u r not orthodox...with Indian values culminated in us I agree 100% on ur denial to an emotional EMA as well

But we are all hurt as we journey through this life. Sometimes we are able to let go of the hurts, no matter how severe. At other times, we hold on to them and let them blot out the joy and beauty of other life experiences. The unfaithfulness of a spouse, the injustice of an employer, the abuse of a parent, the rejection by a friend are examples of hurts that can cling and sting years after they're experienced.

Something about first love defies duplication. Before it, your heart is blank. Unwritten. After, the walls are left inscribed and graffitied. When it ends, no amount of scrubbing will purge the scrawled oaths and sketched images, but sooner or later, you find that there's space for someone else, between the words and in the margins.

I simply wonder "How Nidhi is different from being an unfaithful spouse!" .. When I talk about a person, who is hurt due to unfaithfulness of the spouse, that person might be having that lasting bitter taste in the mouth forever!

But here, as a groomed person.. if Nidhi is unfaithful, shouldnt she question herself and control herself ?? She simply aggravated by following him everywhere...



But the q is Could a scar be like the rings of a tree, reopened with each emotional season?

preserve it because it's perfect in the moment but that preservation is impossible because the perfection is only after an instant passed through. Love like travel is a series of moments that we immediately leave behind. Still we try to hold on and embalm against all evidence and common sense proclaiming our promises and plans.

Ofcourse, I am no greater thinker of how love progresses... but, I was questioning about the moral responsibility .. especially when married to someone else! I think there is a fine line one should put with a clear vision! Hence I am not sympathetic towards the heroine.

When I found myself cataloging Nidhi's perfections, I tried, in vain, to negate each one with a flaw. But these, too, served only to make her more human .

Obsessive despair is endlessly inventive -- it has a genius for knowing what a sufferer least wants to hear. It's like being trapped in a box with a loudspeaker that amplifies your own voice, continuously broadcasting your shortcomings.

May b venting out d pain , anger n frustration both leads had bottled up past 5yrs help them improve their quality of life. Pain is a feeling. Your feelings are a part of you. Your own reality. If you feel ashamed of them, and hide them, you're letting society destroy your reality. You should stand up for your right to feel your pain. True , wounds do heal wd time but the scars remain forever!!!

Well put up!👏.. agree

There is no right or wrong way to grieve " but there are healthy ways to cope with the pain. You can get through it! Grief that is expressed has a potential for healing that eventually can strengthen and enrich life. May b that is wat the update is all about.

This is the next part coming up!! I expected!!😃 waiting for Shirley's magic around this

PS: m really sorry if I hurt u in anyway

Noway Deepali!! You have made me all the way geared up for the next update... and Deepali! I respect you a lot. Please dont say this!

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Originally posted by: bc123456

Shirley absolutely amazing , loved every bit of it , u are a wonderful writer , in my last review u had asked why I felt that Nidhi was not happy with Rohan , because someone who is happy and contented career doesn't become the most important thing , true u want a career , but not over your love , your first priority is always the one u love , and finally she knows that Dr Ashutosh too loves her , but life is tough , and one wrong decision of his has wrecked so many lives , Nidhi cause she can't get over him , Rohan cause he is married to someone who carries a torch for someone else , his parents who welcomed her into their home , how many people are going to be hurt , let's see what happens next

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

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O hello aunty ji 😉I know what extra maternal affair is 😛btw who is mr khan ? 😕

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

I too have deep respect for u Mudra 🤗n feel comfortable enuf to have a healthy discussion with u😃

I guess both of us will have to wait n c how Shirley takes the story forward...n yes it is Nidhi here who needed to draw the boundaries but not to forget that she is the young(29) n the one who had to suffer the pain w/o reasons. Ashu may have had his reasons to push her away which means she was a mere puppet . As it is said "the truth will set u free, but first it will piss u off. Truth has overthrown tyrants n freed prisoners from the age of their self- created misery. It helps souls rise from the ashes of their horrible lives n build something better , stronger more beautiful.

It's only till Nidhi realises n accepts the facts of her life as to how things have changed. Her pain probably restricts her mind from whole - heartedly accepting her marriage n hence this comportment. Wud u really call it an EMA at this point of time?