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Diksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Thanks for the PM Shirley, 😃

Will read 2morrow & update...😳

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suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Just read it Shirley... must say a nice start dear... I like Ashutosh as usual and Nidhi also...pretty bold though... will give detailed review later...now thru phone...

will be waiting for next chapter...

would like to add something... donno if its because of your time constraints or what but I found it too fast...

Edited by suku_07 - 11 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

OK dear. Have a sound sleep and land on this thread afresh.. 🥱

I just got, but now you must be sleeping😃

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gargpoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

very nice chap. di..liked nidhi's character..the way she was trying to get the real reason of her dismissel was too good..

waiting for next..

thanks for the PM

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

kyun aapko bhi amnesia ho gaya 😆

main... main kaun hoon? main kya hoon? kahan hoon? kyun hoon? kab hoon?

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Strong and a fabulous start to the OS ! Hats off to Shirley and Deepali ! ⭐️👏
Very well written Shirley ! Cud view MB and KK at the Conference hall and cud feel the same atmosphere at Mumbai Conference !

Ashu's hesitations and Nidhi's anger cud be clearly seen here. Still in love they are.

What cud be there she cud let him see in the pendrive ?

waiting for the next to watch.. 😊

Thank you Bhavit.

yes, the magical beginning episodes..

yes they still love each other..

I hope you will like the next ch.

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sshirley

main... main kaun hoon? main kya hoon? kahan hoon? kyun hoon? kab hoon?

amnesia kis liye?😆

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: sss97
Awesome. Dr Hardstone is totally back ... wish to see him in the same way and Nidhi is married????. Nice twist waiting to see whats there in the pendrive

Thank you so much ji.

Dr. Hardstone is back and angrier this time..

Yes its been 5 years.. what she had to go by? she dint have any reason to believe that he too loved her.. acc. to what happened until the prologue episode. right? besides, 5 yrs have passed so, she's now 29. Its difficult to stay unmarried for a gal till that age. esp,. with her DB constantly insisting.

can you guess the contents of the pen drive?

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sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Its beautiful Shirley, how can one be disappointed with your writing. Its lovely, bringing back memories of those initial episodes, and am sure you will weave the magic further. Good luck 😊

Thank you so much for your trust In my writing. the only reason I am worried is that it is a hitherto untried concept. but I liked the concept too too much. besides I love challenges