Asmanon par hai likha FF CHAP:5 (PG:33)

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Ariya Aslam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: parmarA
bache thoda time to de beta

take ur tym alka di..

Edited by Anisha22 - 11 years ago

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Very good continuation Anisha ! You have given justice to what you told that day ! ⭐️👏

Nidhi blaming Ashu n then apologised.. n later Ashu's continuous calls to Natasha.. ! I liked this effort of fighting the situation by Ashu.. He has been tormented inside by the news.. n now responding n manaoing Nidhi n then Natasha.. He must be going thru a great crisis.. !

And now, what a scene.. I liked the end.. there is no doubt that Natasha is going to blame both of them now..

But what a scene... pen falling down.. Ashu n Nidhi picking it up,, n their heads collapsed.. n Natasha just on the dot.. angrily calling Ashutosh.. !

Waiting to see how our poor Ashu with Nidhi will face her... !

Nice going sis.. keep it up ! 👏

Edited by bawaswift - 11 years ago

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Ariya Aslam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Very good continuation Anisha ! You have given justice to what you told that day !⭐️👏
Nidhi blaming Ashu n then apologised.. n later Ashu's continuous calls to Natasha.. ! I liked this effort of fighting the situation by Ashu.. He has been tormented inside by the news.. n now responding n manaoing Nidhi n then Natasha.. He must be going thru a great crisis.. !
And now, what a scene.. I liked the end.. there is no doubt that Natasha is going to blame both of them now..
But what a scene... pen falling down.. Ashu n Nidhi picking it up,, n their heads collapsed.. n Natasha just on the dot.. angrily calling Ashutosh.. !
Waiting to see how our poor Ashu with Nidhi will face her... !
Nice going sis.. keep it up !👏

thank u for the appreciation bhavit bhai em glad u liked the chap..all thanks to my sis who gives me such ideas nd cliffhangers..agar wo na hoti to i would not have been able to cntnu this ff..
Syedzoya (Appia) thank u soo much for being there to help me..

Edited by Anisha22 - 11 years ago

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ttrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

U posted ch-5 too!! Me off to read 😃

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Ariya Aslam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: ttrocks
U posted ch-5 too!! Me off to read😃

yup i posted it yesterday.. nd ok ji take ur tym enjoy reading..

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syedzoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Very well written chap 👏 So nidhi's misunderstanding gets solve and she joins the office back.The cliff hanger was superb natasha's eyes become red now what will happen? Overall a beautiful chap & Song selection was too gud.Waiting fr the next one...

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Ariya Aslam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: syedzoya
Very well written chap 👏 So nidhi's misunderstanding gets solve and she joins the office back.The cliff hanger was superb natasha's eyes become red now what will happen? Overall a beautiful chap & Song selection was too gud.Waiting fr the next one...

thank u appia jaan nd this cliffhanger was ur idea luv u..nd u have to wait till sunday to get next update... 😛