Originally posted by: bawaswift
Good narration to the horrifying events ! π Loved the way you have made all the characters in their place. All horrified in a way or the other. ! Nice chapter Sagi ... liked it ! βοΈ
I laughed at Mansukani's fears.. which are more than even Mallika πAnd Nidhi s fearing a black cat.. A cat it was ? or... π²Me too fearing here.. of some untoward black magic.. π€’Most horrified is the skeleton on the bed.. and for Mallika, its gonna say sumthing.. all are dead..Mansukhani's reaction was the strongest. The visual image captured by his retina was conveyed to his midbrain, which promptly perceived it to be highly disturbing. The midbrain activated a section of neurons in his medulla, as a result of which some nerves supplying to his pelvis started firing actively. Out of these, a particular nerve was the hardest hit; at a result of which his detrusor contracted without warning, the sphincter relaxed and a trickle ensued down his legs.
He looked down his trousers in sheer disbelief and to his girlfriend. Her vision was locked on to the specimen on the bed.
She clutched his hand tightly as the jaw moved a little. It was as if the skull was about to say something...
Ueee.. Ma...
Chalo ji.. Ashni are also here.. n Vardarajan is safe ... hehe..
Nice depiction of how these inmates are gonna make their life easier by making it more difficult.. ! Sneezing part is the best.. All knows abt a presence of other.. but unknown to any of it.. .!
Now Ashni , the couple in love.. who dont have to do anything of that treasure.. are here.. Will be waiting to see how the things shape up next.. !
Thanks Sagi ! π I am having nightmares right now... π€’