If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 35

Originally posted by: gargpoo

wow! bawa bro u r a fantastic writer👏👏

u described ashni's emotions very well..they both love each other...but don't express their feelings because of lack of communication..

why did rohan call?

awesome update bro...waiting for next!!😃

Originally posted by: pansy123

Way to go 👏 superb writing... really liked the way you brought out their deep feelings...hope you enjoyed writing.

For all who wrote here

Originally posted by: suku_07

Woohoo finally read you update...This was awesome Mudra ji... Actually I must say one thing...When this you post/update one should expect the unexpected...

It was very nice they way you entered the new characters and gave them a exit too and child with her grand parents...👏 Awesome and still you say you cant write 😡

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

WoW!!! Simply WOW.. Bawa!

This update was so well planned... and written.. Noone can say, thisis your first!!

But ofcourse, I knew about you.. your replies are so good.. so no wonder writing so well

I liked this statement very much

On their meeting at the Cafe Meet, she talked to him as a mother, rather than as a person whom Ashu has been in love with. But was she not a mother first now ? Her life belongs to Aryan, more than anyone.. !!!!!!!

and the happy moments together are very soothing... see. we cannot bear AshNi fighting ...

and a perfect twist now..in terms of Rohan asking for his son.. it is very understandable that Aryan's lil brain could not accept his parents fighting..poor fellow.. you brought out that point ..👏👏

Thank you very much for the kind words Bawa... and if I were to write the continuation, I wouldnt have written this well... Big Hatsoff to you for really carrying out the story so beautifully ahead👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Hey Bro - This is simply Wow ! 👏👏👏. You have taken it forward splendidly from where Mudra had stopped. Loved the way Mudra gave a whole new dimension to the story - her scientific bent of mind shining through 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.

Bawa your writing skills are superb - my my did not imagine that you could write so well. This Forum has really brought out the Writer in you. And many thanks for adding my name in your thank you list - you were feeling so low yesterday and today you have bounced back with a bang !!!

So now it is very clear that Aryan is Rohan and Nidhi's son - but Rohan is married to Anji. Ashu and Nidhi are married and Aryan has found a loving Dad in him but Ashu is torn between his twin responsibilities towards Wendy and Aryan - understandable in the circumstances. He feels guilty about Wendy's life and wants to be her mentor and guide - more so as a father figure. At the same time he is making all efforts to be with his love Nidhi who has stolen his heart with her love, grace and above all her motherly feelings for Wendy whom she has nursed back to health.

The story is moving forward beautifully - A big thumbs up to all the writers who have written so far - Pansy, Alka, Suku, Mudra and now Bawa. Way to go Bro - keep writing.

Originally posted by: deepa17

To me both of you did a brilliant job did not feel that I was missing out on not having read the earlier parts ..

Great job.. Now I know who to pester to write a full blown FF...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Thanks Deepali for liking it.. Mudra di have been fabulous here.. !😊

I have not read the last line of yours...😛😆cos its for Mudra di...👍🏼

Originally posted by: deepa17

Excuse me why have u not read the last line.. The comment was addressed to both of u so why would the last line be applicable only to teacherji