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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Read last twochapters in one go Alkaben!!

What a beautiful story!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Loved both the updates!!

Edited by ttrocks - 11 years ago

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menaka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

how i miss this 😭

read up to part 02

came here after along time may comment other posts and read the rest chap

sorry Alka i miss ur os 😛

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parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

sorry friands again late.

Ch 14

Col Mathur: Buaji,main do din me aaa raha hu.Shayad New year bhi apne yaar ke saath manaoo?lekin humare bete aur betiyo ke liye yeh surprise hona chahiye.Us ulluu ko samaza dena.

Aur DB se Col Mathur ne kuchh kahaa.DB hasne lagi.

DB : main samaz gai Mathur.Bus ab aapke ane ki der hai.

Nidhi apne kamareme aayi aur usne apna mobile uthaya.

She was missing Ashu so badly.Soch rahi thi itni raat ko disturb karoo ya nahi?

Tabhi Nidhi ka mobile baja.

Nidhi:Ji,aap?

Ashu:ha main,tum muze hi yaad kar rahi thi na?

Nidhi:ji aapko kaise pata chala?

Ashutosh:kyonki mere dil ne tumhe yaad kiya.Dil se dil ka connection.

Nidhi:woh toh hai.Neend nahi aa rahi hai.Bus aapko yaad kar rahi hu.

Ashutosh uski aawaz aur bechaini se bechain ho gaya.

Ashutosh: aisa mat bolo Nidhi.Ab hume yeh sab zelna padega.Achha tumhe neend aaye iske liye kya kar sakta hu main?

Nidhi:violin pe kuchh sunaiye na?

Ashu:aapka hukum sir aankho par Nidhi.

Aur Ashu ne violin bajana shuru kiya,"Tu is tarah se meri zindagi me shamil hai."

Nidhi us dhoon me so gai.

Dusre din subah.

Nidhi aur Mallika taiyaar hokar hospital ke liye bnikal rahe the.

Col Verma: Nidhi,Mallika do din baad matlab 29 ko mera dost aur uski family aa rahi hai.shayad new year yahi celebration kare.

Nidhi ne hairani se baba ki taraf dekha.

Mallika:kaun hai woh baba?

DB: woh humare padosi the pahele.

Nidhi:di,aap car nikaliye.Main apna mob room me bhul gai hoo.

Mallika:theek hai baba,main chalti hoo.Hum manage kar lenge.

Jaise hi mallika gai,Nidhi baba ke pas aayi aur boli,"baba,kahi yah woh Armaan jiju ke

Baba ne baat bich me kaat di,"bola na yeh mera dost hai.baki sab unke aane ke baad."

Nidhi was surprised."theek hai baba,.Main bhi chalti hoo.

Baba DB ko:yeh nidhi ke sawalo ke jawab dena mushkil ho jata hai.

DB: aakhir beti kiski hai.

Nidhi in KGH

Nidhi ne apne cabin ka lock khola aur dekha toh wahaa table par ek card the

Nidhi ne dekha toh woh card aur Buque Ashu ne bheja tha.

Use tajooob hua ki ashu ka yeh card cabin me kaise aaya?

Tabhi mallika ne intercom se nidhi ko bulaya ek surgery ke liye aur woh daud ke chali gai.

Surgery pure 6 ghante tak chali aur Mallika Nidhi aur dr Kulkarni ne milkar woh surgery successfully complete bhi ki.

They all wer much tired.

Dr Kulkarni:Chalo beta tum thak gai hogi.Kuchh kha lete hai canteen me.Agar tum dono chaho toh ghar jake aaram kar sakti ho.travelling ki thakan hogi na abhi?And i must say you both are best doctors of India.Muze dr Williams ka phone aaya tha.Kya tarif kar rahe the woh aapki.I am very lucky to have honest doctors like you with me.

Mallika:sir yeh sab aaphi se sikha hai.And hum aapki doctors baad me hai pahele apki betiya hai na?

Dr Kulkarni:oh Ya!aap toh meri pyari betiyan hai.Best in the world.

Malllika:sir,hume rest ki jaroorat nahi hai.6 baje hum chale jayenge.Aap bhi humare saath canteen me aa rahe hai and thats final.No arguments ok!

Dr Kulkarni:ha bhi aata hu,tumse kaun jeete behes me?

Nidhi 5:30 ko apne cabin ki taraf badhi aur usne dekha ki Anji uske cabin ki taraf badh rahi thi.

Anji:chal achha hai tu bahar hi mil gai.Tuzse ek kaam hai.

Nidhi:kya?

Anji:sham ko maine aur Dr Rangnath ne disco jane ka programme banaya hai.Aur tumhe aana hai.

Nidhi:Anji,disco,aaj?nahi mera man nahi hai.

Anji:woh muze pata hai.Batane ki jaroorat bhi nahi hai.Tabhi toh tumhara mood theek karne ke liye hi toh ja rahe hai hum log.

Nidhi:lekin main kabab me haddi kyon banu?

Anji:badi aayee kabab me haddi wali.Main tumhe isiliye toh lene aayi hu.

Nidhi:theek hai main aati hoo.

Woh cabin me aayi aur usne woh card apne drawer me rakh liya aur woh Anji ke saath chali gayi,of course mallika ko lekar

sham ke 7 baje

Nidhi:Anji yeh kya kar rahi ho?yeh paheno woh paheno.Disco me ja rahe hai bahar ghumne nahi.

Anji:theek se taiyaar hone ko keh rahi hu tumhe.Wahaa kitne ladke honge pata hai na?

Nidhi:toh ek kaam kar,tu hi jana andar.Main gadi me hi baithoongi

Anji:gussa mat kar chal.Abhi Baba ko bhi batana hai.Mere paps toh manne se rahe rangnath ke mamle me.Lekin meri padhai khatam hone tak ka time hai manane ka aur verma uncle ne kahaa hai ki woh papa ko mana lenge.

Nidhi:maine baba ko bol diya hai.Unhone ha kahaa hai.Lekin jaldi wapis aane ko bhi kahaa hai.

Anji:lekin tu chal toh sahi pahele.

Anji aur Nidhi hall me aaye.Mallika sofe pe paper padhne me busy thi.

Nidhi:di,aap bhi chaliye na humare saath.

Anji was shocked after hearing this

Anji [Mun me]:marwayegi kya?sara plan chaupat kar degi yeh ladki

Mallika:Nahi nidhi,main aur disco.No way.tum jao aur enjoy karo.Main ghar par hi theek hu.

Nidhi:are you sure di?

Mallika:ya sure.Par tum log jaldi aa jana haa?

Nidhi aur Anji reached at Three star disco.Rangnath was waiting for both of them.

Nidhi:hello Dr Rangnath.The Admin of KGH

Rangu:kya nidhi?tum bhi majak karne lagi?main pahele aapka dost hu baad me admin.

Nidhi:aur shayad jaldi hi jiju bhi ban jayenge.

Anji:tu bhi kya Nidhi.

Nidhi:chalo andar chale?

Anji:hum log andar ja rahe hai lekin aap nahi.

Nidhi:kyon?pas lagta hai kya?

Anji:pas nahi passport lagta hai.Aur aapki aaj ki sham humare liye nahi hai unke liye hai.

Nidhi:kiske liye?paheliya mat buza theek se bata.

Anji ne ek car ki taraf ishara kiya,"woh aaye hai doli lekar tumhe le jane"

Nidhi watched at that sign.Ahuoths was there with his car.

Nidhi:Anji,yeh sab tumhara plan the na?

Anji:mera nahi humara.

Ashutosh car se utara.Aur Nidhi ke pas pahucha.

Nidhi:yeh Anji hai major ashutosh.

Ashu: main janata hu inhe.Dekh aaj raha hu.Hello Anji

Anji:hello jiju.Main jiju keh sakti hu na?

Ashu:agar aapki friend aapko permission de

Nidhi:sabke samne nahi,matlab abhi nahi.Meri taraf se ha hai.

Anji ne Rangnath se bhi parichay karwaya

Rangu: Nidhi,tum log ghumne jao.warna yahaa khade khade hi time nikal jayega.inhe Kanpur wapis jana hai.

Ashutosh nidhi ko lakar car me baithe.

In repaid of my late latiffi i will post my part 2 of chap 14 today for sure

part 2 is on same page.Please read it too

Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

hi alka

I am loving this ff so much.. this is ur best ff in my opinion

I liked the way u showed the bittersweet pain of separation.. love has really changed ashu a lot..

liked the way he senses that nidhi wants to meet him right away n he goes to her hotel.. loved that scene..

so, both the fathers know each other and r actually happy about one match.. don't think, ashni would face any family opposition to their match..

over all, a well written ff .. looking fws to next ch..

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#365

chap 14 part 2

Nidhi:aap abhi is waqt?

Ashu:kyon nahi aa sakta kya?

Nidhi:nahi aa sakte hai na?lekin itni raat ko wapis jayenge?

Ashu:tum chahe toh muze rok sakti ho.

Nidhi:aapko iska jawab pata hai.Lekin aapko itni raat ko yahaa nahi aana chahiye.

Ashu:yeh galat baat hai Nidhi.Tumse dur reh nahi sakta.Tum pas aane nahi deti.Theek hai,main chala jata hoo.Tum jao apne dosto ke pas.

Nidhi:Are aap toh gussa ho gaye.Muze aapki fikar hai isiliye keh rahi hu.Sorry lo main kaan pakadti hu.

Aur usne apne kaan pakad liye.

Ashu uske haatho pe apna haath rakhte hue,"Nidhi,sorry nahi.Lekin main toh sirf tumhe dekhne aur milne aaya hu.

Nidhi :i missed you so much.

Ashu:i missed you too.

Aur Ashu ne nidhi ko kaske apni baho me le liya.

Ashutosh: Achha bolo,kahaa chalna hai?

Nidhi:jahaa aap le chale.Ek aapka saath humko do jahaa se pyara hai.

Ashutosh:oh god yeh bollywood ke gane.Lekin achha gana hai.

Nidhi:yeh mere dil ke jajbaat hai major.

Ashutosh:fir major.Ashutosh nahi keh sakti na?

Nidhi:nahi kehena bhi nahi hai.Bus raah dekh rahi hu ki kab aapko officially suniye ji keh saku

Ashu:me too waiting Nidhi.

Nidhi:suniye maine baba se baat ki aur baba do teen din me aapke baba ko phone karenge

Ashutohs:Nidhi,maine bhi baba se baat ki unhone bhi yahi jawab diya.Dekhte hai kya hota hai?

Nidhi: Achha yeh bataiye aapne woh buque kaise bheja mere cabin tak?

Ashutosh:oh Nidhi!ab kya bataoo?tum kuchh sochti nahi ho na?Anji ke jariye Dr Rangnath aur Ranganath ke jariye cabin me.Rangnath aur Anji se phone par baat hui aur mera kaam ho gaya.

Nidhi: lovely flowers aur card.Sorry,mere dimaag main aisa kuchh nahi aata.

Ashu:koi baat nahi Nidhi,tumhe pasand aaya yahi bahoot hai.

Nidhi:aapke baba ke saath aap bhi aayenge kya?

Ashu:tum chahti ho ki main aaoo?

Nidhi:jaroor chahti hu.Lekin aap chahte hai?

Ashu:main toh ek taang par khada hu aane ke liye.Lekin pata nahi.

Nidhi:Ek baat kahoo?

Ashu: ha bolo.

Nidhi:I love you aur main aapko bahoot yaad karti hu.

Ashu:nidhi rona nahi.Main toh ab tumse milne yuhi daudkar aata rahunga.Bus kahi dur posting nahi hui toh.

Nidhi:main dua karoongi.

Ashu:by the way,maine aapke ILU ka jawab nahi diya.

Ashu ne Nidhi ka chehera apne hatho me liya aur uski aankho ko halke se chuma aur bola,"I love you Nidhi so so much.Mere zindagi ke yeh sabse haseen pal hai yeh.

Nidhi:mere bhi.

Ashutosh:chalo Nidhi,main ab chalta hoo.Tum apna disco enjoy karo.

Nidhi:aapke bina kya enjoy karoo?sab khali lagta hai.

Ashu:zindagi pyaar ka geet hai,ise har dil ko gana padega.Nidhi,ab iska kya ilaaj kare?main tumhare baba se humari baat karoo?

Nidhi:bus aap yahi kehkar meri bolti band karte hai.Chaliye aap bhi ab jaiye.Lamba rasta hai aur aapko jyada der nahi karni chahiye.Pahuchkar muze phone kijiye.

Ashutosh:sure.

Aur usne pyaar bhare najaro se Nidhi ko dekha.Woh udaas ho gai.Ashutosh ne apne aankho se usko ishara kiya rona nahi aur woh haste hue car se utar gai

Nidhi:Take care

Ashutosh:you too.

Do din yuhi beet gaye.Aur fir woh din aaya jab Col verma ke ghar par col Mathur aanewale the apne beto ke saath.

In Kanpur

Col Mathur:Armaan,Ashu,Hiraman taiyaar hue ke nahi sab?

Armaan:baba hum toh taiyaar hai.Lekin aap toh bataiye ki is baar aapko New year celebration kaise ho gaya?

Col Mathur: bus ab thode dino me teri shadi ho jayegi.Fir kab mauka milega hume saath me waqt gujarne ka?

Armaan:baat tho sahi hai.Lekin hum ja kahaa rahe hai?

Col Mathur:mere dost ke wahaa Lucknow me.

Armaan [Khush hokar] :Lucknow me?

Ashutosh [shocked with joy] Lucknow me?

Col Mathur: sunai kum deta hai kya?chalo ab

Armaan: lekin unka naam kya hai baba?woh kahaa rehete hai?humne Lucknow dekha nahi na abhi?

Col Mathur:woh sab baad me gadi nikalo aaj main chalaoonga car.

Armaan:kyon baba?

Col Mathur:bus man kar raha hai.Tum dono bhai peechhe baithna.

Car Lucknow ki taraf badh rahi thi.

In Lucknow,Verma House

DB: Dekho Nidhi,mallu aaj ghar par mehmaan aa rahe hai toh Lunch ke liye ghar aa jana dono.

Nidhi:DB,Baba ke dost aa rahe hai na?toh humara kya kaam hai?

DB:thappd maroongi ek.Woh pure parivaar ke saath aa rahe hai.

Mallika:theek hai DB hum aa jayenge.

Aur dono ghar se nikal gaye.

Unke jate hi DB ne darwaje se name plate hata di.Ghar ki sari tasveere bhi hata di.Aur kitchen me khana banane chali gai.

Col Verma: dekh solanki,abhi kisiko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki Mathur aa raha hai apne beto ke saath.Hum sab bacho ko aaj surprise denge.

KS: matlab?

Col Verma: agar baat banati hai toh hum New year ke baad turant hi Armaan/Mallika ki engegment kar denge.Lekin it is top secret.Kisiko batana nahi.

KS: kya baat bhai?tu bhi bada chhupa rustam nikala.

Yahaa sab log Lucknow pahuche.

Armaan:ab toh bataiye ki hum kahaa ja rahe hai?

Col Mathur:sabr kar bhai.Bus hum pahuch hi rahe hai.

Aur Col Mathur ek bunglow ke bahar gate par aakar ruk gaye.

Unhone jor se horn pe horn marne shuru kiye.

Ashutosh:baba,aahista,warna police pakad legi

Col Mathur: chup kar oye!mere yaar ka ghar hai yeh.

Tabhi col verma ,aur Kapil solanki daud ke aaye gte par.

Col verma ne gate khola aur car andar aayi.

Jaise hi Col Mathur bahar nikale unhone col verma ko dekha aur dono dost kaske gale mile.

Col Verma:are yara,taras gaya tha tumhe dekhne ke liye.

Col Mathur:main bhi.Bua kahaa hai?

Tabhi bua aarti ki thali lekar pahuchi.Col Mathur ne bua ke pair chhue.

DB:jita rahe mera bacha!kitne dino ke baad dekh rahi hoo.Kaisa hai tu?

Col Mathur:theek hu buaji.Ab aapke saath rahunga toh badhiya ho jaoonga.Are main apne beto se milwana bhul gaya.

Yeh Major Armaan hai.Armaan ne bari bari Col verma aur DB ke pair chhue.DB aur COl Mathur toh Armaan ko dekhte hi reh gaye.

Col verma: yeh toh bilkul tere pe gaya hai be.

Col Mathur:beta kiska hai?

Col mathur:aur yeh mera chhote,Major Ashutosh.

Ashutosh ne bhi Col verma aur DB ke pair chhue.

Dono dost bato me ulaz gaye aur DB ne CS se kahaa,"inka saman upar ke kamaro me rakhwa dena.Aur Alok ka saman apne yog ke room me.Dono der raat tak bate karenge muze pata hai.

DB:Armaan.Ashutosh,aap dono fresh ho jao beta.

Armaan:yeh kaise mystry hai Ashu.Hum kahaa hai kiske ghar me hai hume pata nahi.

Ashu:lekin bhaiya.yeh toh socho ki hum agar Lucknow me hai toh bhabhi aur Nidhi se mil sakte hai na?

Armaan:are haan yeh toh maine socha hi nahi.

Ashutosh:chalo bhaiya fresh ho jate hai aur fir Lucknow darshan ke liye nikalte hai.

Armaan aur Ashutosh apne apne kamare me fresh hokar hall me aaye.

Sab hall me gappe lada rahe the tabhi DB ne aawaz di.

DB:bachiya aa rahi hai.Chalo main khana laga deti hoo.

Nidhi aur Mallika ghar ki taraf badh rahi thi.

Nidhi:yewh baba bhi ajeeb hai na di?jinhe bulana chahiye tha unhe nahi bulate aur apne dost aur family ko bulaya aur hume petrol jalakar ghar jana pad raha hai.

Mallika:jane de na Nidhi.Ghar ke mehmaan hai woh aur woh bhi baba ke dost mil lete hai.

Nidhi:milna toh padega warna baba ka gussa.

Nidhi aur Mallika ghar par pahuche.

Nidhi:humaree name plat kahaa gai di?

Mallika:shayad bacho ne girayee hogi.

Nidhi:main DB se puchhti hu.

Mallika:aahista Nidhi ghar me mehmaan hai.Unki car bahar padi hai.Chal andar.

Aur Nidhi ne bell bajai.

DB: Armaan,main khana serve kar rahi hu please darwaja khol beta.

Aur Col Verma aur Col Mathur ne ek dusre ko dekha aur hasne lage.

Armaan ne darwaja khola aur samne Mallika ko deka.

Mallika:Armaan tum yahaa?

Armaan:Mallika tum yahaa?

Aur andar se col verma aur col Mathur chillaye,"Mallika Armaan surprise."aur DB bhi unke hansi me shamil ho gai.

Col Mathur:ashu armaan yeh mera sabse pyara dost hai yog verma

Aur ashu aur armaan is surprise se dang reh gaye.

Nidhi Ashutosh ko apne ghar me dekhkar khush gai.aur Ashu Nidhi ko dekhkar bahot khush ho gaya.

Hope you will enjoy both the parts.

Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#366

Me Second...😆

Off to read. Thanks for the update 😃

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Lovely Update Alkaji 👏 👏 👏

In one word Fab 👍🏼 (Both Part 1 & 2)

Will be waiting for next update

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Thank you for the update...read part 1...going to read part 2 now...

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Chapter 14..

Very cute chapter Alka di... I must say you have done the magic with your words in this OS.. Naah.. FF.. ⭐️👏

So there will be a surprise for Nidhi, Mallika, Ashu n Armaan... Ye Baba toh bade hi chupe rustam nikle.. 😉😛

Just loved Violin at phone.. The way Ashu played for Nidhi... n she went to sleep.. I just loved this scene.. How romantic..!!! Ashu knew she was missing her,.,, n before she cud call.. he made one.. Wow ! Fabulous thought.. liked the way you have presented the scene here.. ⭐️

Glad that Mallika n Nidhi are at excellence in their professional field.. Liked their dedication to the noble job.. !

And what a treat to Nidhi... ! Ashu made plans with Anji n Ranga to have their date fixed.. ! Wow ! This army personnel is quite ahead by his actions.. Aisa lagta nahi tha... but love has changed him a lots here..

Cute scene where Anji asked him to be called as Jiju.. n he replied back,., if Nidhi give permission..😉 How lovely n cute romantic scenes coming up.. ! Have read the next one.. will review in a while...😊

Thanks and you are not late Di.. You are well in time.. as time permitted you and you have come up with double bonus.. 😃