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Veenaper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

The fourth chapter is truly awesome. Nidhi's jealousy and inherent fears have been depicted extremely well. Mallika listening to Nidhi's advice and then Jyotika making Nidhi understand her mistake and she in turn giving Mallika the much needed space - you have brought it out so beautifully.

The highlight ofcourse was Ashu Nidhi convo - he not forgetting to remind her about being punctual and she being impressed with his adherence to the rules. Ashu bringing out the depth of Arman-Mallika friendship and comparing it to her parents' relationship was amazing. Nidhi in tears for failing to read her sister's turmoil and Ashu in dire straits not able to stop her from crying and saying that he can even control a battalion but not a woman's tears - this was superb. Loved Ashu offering his hanky to dry Nidhi's tears - both of them are surely warming up to each other.

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Super loved this update Alka 👍🏼. The way Arman bares his heart out and proposes to Mallika - the lines are outstanding and suits his character so well. Mallika and Nidhi are perfectly understanding each other's needs. The shopping and Jyotika's comments about the colour combination catch Ashu and Nidhi unawares.

The engineering major brothers are highly decorated officers of the army and both the sisters impressed with their achievements. Ashu and Nidhi seeking out each other - he noticing the favourite colours that she has worn and she admiring his handsome persona - superb narration.

Waiting eagerly for the 6th chapter.

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: kritika4ever
@Bawa, all your reviews are nice!
Where are Veenaji's reviews?

Hi Akruti, so nice to see you hear. I have given all my reviews at one go. So sorry that I am a late entrant to this fabulous OS - but henceforth my reviews will be on time.

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Beautiful pics of the festival of Rann of Kuchh ...thank u for giving us an insight to one of our country's rich heritage😃

Wow Alka this is absolutely fabulous - thank you loads for this.

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Diksha

@Diksha_1991

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Wow!! Fabulous update. 👏 👏

Loved it..

Waiting eagerly next update..

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Thank you deepali for liking my siggie.I will try to make diff siggies but not sure bec of diwali preparation.Your comments are always awsome🤗

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Beautiful pics of the festival of Rann of Kuchh ...thank u for giving us an insight to one of our country's rich heritage😃

Thank you again deepali.Yes,it is really our rich heritage

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Veenaper
Hi Alka, I read all your chapters at one go. This is really a heart warming OS. Extremely sorry for coming in so late but henceforth my reviews will be very regular. Bawa has been talking so much about your OS and I am now glad that I have read this.

First Chapter - What struck me most is the beautiful relationships that you have brought out. Mallika and Nidhi are sisters and qualified Neuro Surgeons too. Mallika is adopted by CV and both he and DB have brought up her and Nidhi with the same love and care - CV and DB's love towards Nidhi was one of the highlights in the show and it is so nice that you have continued with it. DB's concern towards the girls and their food made me smile - she was an extremely affable character. Loved the fatherly figure that these two girls have as a Dean and equally loveable is his wife Mrs. Kulkarni. So they are heading for a camp in the Rann of Kutch along with 3 other Doctors. Beautiful first chapter.

welcome veena i am glad that you came and read my os.no sorry business please.

Yes,i wanted to show the dignity of one good father who never fails to love and understand their daughter's desires and dream.And DB who can't put diff in Nidhi and Mallika.

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Veenaper
The second chapter is a lovely journey where new relationships are unfolding. Loved the introduction of Arman and Ashu -, engineers and both of them are Majors in the Indian Army - wow in Army uniform they must be looking stunning specially Ashu. I have always had a fascination for our armed forces. So here Ashu is a heartstone and Nidhi too is equally khadoos. You have kept Arman's character intact - loved him in the show and here too he is such a friendly person full of jest and camaraderie. Mallika and Arman know each other from college but meeting after a long gap. But the highlight of this update was Mallika's heartfelt words about her family - how thankful she is for what life has bestowed on her - more than what she aspires. So sparks are flying between Arman and Mallika but Ashu-Nidhi are taking time to warm up.

Loved this update Alka.

Yes veena,i was also imagine the same.Ashu a 6 foot man and with army uniform.I too love and respect our army a lot that i am truely proud of our Army.Mallika and Armaan are childhood friend bec they were studying in same boarding school.Yes that's true.We saw in our ktlk that ashu never thinks that in reality he got Baba and they gave him education and dignity in society.But he always thinnks what he lost but not respect what he get.

Thank you for your lovely feedback dear

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Veenaper
The third chapter is more about Ashu and Nidhi opening up to each other albeit slowly. Mallika offering to share lunch with Arman and Ashu - so pineapple pickle is a favourite for both Ashu and Nidhi - what a sweet coincidence !! Nidhi acknowledging that her sister looked happy after a long time and also feeling jealous that Mallika's attention is divided between her and Arman - you have brought this out beautifully. Nidhi tending to the sick jawan and Ashu watching her studiously without her knowledge and also keeping an eye on Arman-Mallika.

Loved the strict Ashu - not willing to bend the rules and Arman offering to drop the girls at their hotel. Alka you are certainly breathing life into all the characters.

They both are khadoos but they love their profession and their family a lot.And mallika is too cute in my os.Aapko suchmuch usse pyaar ho jayega.Jealousy is the cuteness by Nidhi's side.Ashu never tried to understand but his dreams for his life partner you will see in upcoming episode.He even don't know himself that what he want from life?this will be turning point for his life.

Ashu is strict and well manners guy and so nidhi.Armaan is as cute as in real ktlk

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