OS: Shadows from the Past (Chap 12, Pg. 117, Note, Pg. 130, VM Pg 131)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: lee_Ashni
Wonderful👏 Continue.

Thank you Leena. Glad you enjoyed it. 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
The best reviewer of our forum has stepped into the writing world...

Welcome Aarti di, this is my utmost pleasure reading u...

This OS is very beautiful... Please continue this... You've taken up something, that has been brushed under the carpet... Thanks for bringing it out...

Will love to read ur take on it... Continue soon...

Love ya..
Aazeen..

Hai Ram! Aazeen, itna taareeft bhi mat karo! Thank you so much for liking this part.

And yes, this is one aspect and BB ka ghar that I have always felt was never handled properly. Maybe because it was spread between two actors and the makers had trouble recreating them, but were too lazy to think of other ways of dealing with them. Hence this OS. 😳

Hope I can like up to yours and everyone else's expectations.

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: suku_07
Beautiful OS Aarti ji... I am so glad that you finally took up writing... I am so so excited now...😳
I just loved all your views... eagerly waiting for next part ...😃

Thank you Suku. And I though of you and Deepali (deepa17) when I started writing this part. Both of you have expressed this so many times. 😛

Just hope I can live up to your expectations with my own twist...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Aarti, Waiting for the second part...

Sorry Anjani to keep you waiting, but a lot of things happened as I mentioned. But now I will continue starting this weekend.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Veenaper
Arti, welcome back. Just read your os - brilliant piece of writing. Your way of expressing things always had the hallmark of a gifted writer. Also, the subject you have chosen is noteworthy coz it was left unfinished in the serial - Nidhi was not given her due several times and there was no remorse on Ashu's part.

Waiting for the next update.

Thank you Veena for reading and enjoying this part. As you mentioned even I always felt that Ashni needed to have atleast one heart to heart about those early days, how and why she was dismissed and how they fell in love. But sadly it did not happen. Hence this OS. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sonyjknum
Wow,Aarti,thanks for this gift,loved reading it,I know,you had mentioned in some post that you so wanted Ashu to apologize to Nidhi,am glad you have picked this issue,look forward to more from you

Thank you Sony. 😛 Hope you are doing well. Its been a few weeks since I interacted with you.

I hope I will be able to live up to all your expectations with this OS. Update soon. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pansy123

Hi!

We have never interacted. I'm pansy read your OS. Liked it and want to congratulate on your first OS.

Keep it up.

Hello Pansy. Thank you for reading and commenting on my OS. Even though I have seen your name in a few posts, we have not interacted directly, so thanks for coming here. 😃

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
Congratulations on the beautiful OS Aarti! Amazing n excellent writing skills!
There is no better than adversity. Every defeat , every heartbreak , every loss , contains its own seed, it's own lesson on how to improve your performance the next time. Something we wanted to c in the original track but Ashu's character never seemed to have learned. Wud love to c how u take the story forward!

Thank you for these lovely words Deepali. 😃

Yes, it never seemed like Ashu ever felt guilty or repented for his earlier behavior towards Nidhi. And yet she never complained about those days and loved him wholeheartedly. In fact she never questioned him either. Hence this attempt to project something that I feel should have happened.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Aarti, very happy to see you, and that with an OS,, Wow ! Its so wonderfully written n taken the lost part from the show.. ⭐️ Its so natural for Ashu to come forward, even after a long time,, but sumtimes things happens as such n one recalls the phase with an apology in the mind .. well its in his mind n i wanna see how he comes with it ... Will be waiting for your next update..
Fine words n natural emotions depicted.. very well written Aarti.. 👏
Plzz continue... its a treat to read ! 😊

Thank you very much Bawa. 😊 And you are right, it is indeed a lost part of the show.

I have indeed tried to show that sometimes some events in the past linger on in our mind and come out when we least expect as it happened with Ashu. And how they both will now deal with this... a heart to heart was very much needed in the show, its a void and hopefully I can fill it now,

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: aardhan

Thank you Suku. And I though of you and Deepali (deepa17) when I started writing this part. Both of you have expressed this so many times. 😛

Just hope I can live up to your expectations with my own twist...

Aww thats so sweet of you Aarti ji... Eagerly waiting for more to come 😛