MIS-UNDER-STANDING....OS Suku Aunty's update on Pg 81

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Sagi, I am giving out the chapter reviews as I read them but please read them only when you can. I do not want you to interrupt your exam preparations... hope I am not sounding too harsh.

Chapter 2

Fantastic continuation. 👍🏼 Its a perfect set up for the ensuing misunderstanding. You have Ashu in a rather foul mood spewing invective about his wife and DD taking it all the wrong way. And then you have DD showing up in all the right places at the wrong time or is it the wrong places at the right moment... all in all logical, yet confusing. 😃

And the final nail in the coffin... a patient in serious condition who has the right credentials as far as her name and age go and DD assumes this to be the woman he has to look for. Very good.

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Chapter 3

Very good!! 👏 Nicely described the extent to which a person's misconception can cause harm. In this case DD had assumed that Ashu had to have a wife in her late 30s and was unwilling to think beyond that. So in his mind he even assumed that Ashu has tried to murder his wife and what he shares with Nidhi has to be nothing more than an affair. This is a nice drift from the show's track, wish even they had extended this fun part a little more. 😃

And nice work to connect DD's strict rules and austerity measures to become an impediment to his own needs. 😉 Very well done Sagi. This part was totally enjoyable. And the cherry being the the RAnganath part... loved this! 👏

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Chapter 4

Nice, the plot thickens with Ashu and Nidhi getting involved in it. And with the half baked facts from Ranga we have both the doctors assuming the worst of each other! A completely crazy situation. And I liked your descriptions of various actions, all of which had a touch of humor.

Good continuation. 👏

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Chapter 5

Very amusing and had a lot of events packed into it. And all the events have seemingly taken place at the same time in the hospital. DD's actions are hilarious, getting a rose, singing Abhi toh main... which soon becomes grapevine fodder... haha!!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this and finally DDs monologue and the revelation of the name, overall good progress. 👏👏👏 Ashu and DD spying on each other and in the process acting suspiciously, nice done.

Overall a wonderfully conceived OS. ITs very difficult to write or present humor and you ahve succeeded in it. After reading this it has made me think that it would indeed have been nice to see an extended EMA-misunderstanding track in the show. Good job Sagi. KEep it up! 👏👍🏼

All the very best for your exams. 😃

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gargpoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

hilarious update sagi😆..loved it

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Writerji is busy with studies...

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Sagi97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: moushu
Thoroughly enjoyed the os. your description of each and every scene is so well written that i could actually visualize them.Hope you will write more marvelous Os once your exams are over. All the best dear.

Thank you very much.