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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

hey ! i am very much liking this Mudraji...ff writer...our new discvery.


overnight you hve become a seasoned writer or you were 'chupe rustam' ?

kya twisted cliff hanger dala hai...now pl don't stop.

you know so much about Anthrax and pneumoconiosis...any connection with mining ?

👏

She is Chhupa rustam ff writer Dr. Vidya!! But I knew 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neelimapn4

Interesting twist and turn, Mudra...

Very much eager to know what happens next..
Has Nidhi really moved on?? Does she love Rohan??
I doubt...



Thank you very much Neelima.

It is really nice to see some one appreciating this way... and always I had the feeling that one may not like a romance less story... and you donot know how good I am feeling right now..

Thanks a lot...

I thought I would windup soon.. but I am so caught up with this and that is making the story more elaborative... probably two three more parts...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Superb update Mudraji. Take my bow... 👏👏👏



Thank you So much Tupu.. Thanks a zillion for the pm as well.

the usual request.. would please post the pm here??😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

hey ! i am very much liking this Mudraji...ff writer...our new discvery.


overnight you hve become a seasoned writer or you were 'chupe rustam' ?


Hawww... you are making me furiously blush...Dr Vidya..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

kya twisted cliff hanger dala hai...now pl don't stop.

you know so much about Anthrax and pneumoconiosis...any connection with mining ?

👏

FF writing is too difficult.. and time consuming... so I would like to finish it off as early as possible.. but somehow the feeling of not doing justice to the story is making me write a bit more...😳..and doing it in bits and pieces whenever I am getting even a two minutes time...😳😕

I dont know anything about medicine.. left studying biology after 10th standard... I dont know anything about what you said...... and I was to pm you or Dr.babs about this... I wanted to mention a broad area covering breathing problems and Neurology..but couldnt get anything in the super shortest possible time which I kept for research...

(neurology is just because KTLK's Ashutosh is a neurologist and breathing problems caused at the sites of severe mining- which is ignored completely by the government)

my main idea is to show the modest Dr.Ashutosh in a larger than life stature ..😊






Thank you very much for liking this and please pointout the mistakes .. so that I can correct😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

She is Chhupa rustam ff writer Dr. Vidya!! But I knew 😳



awww.. how do you know bhai???😆😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
You Monkey...can't you write FF in the title?I missed it coz I thought that it was a normal post..I loved all the parts. When is the next update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot for this fantastic update Mudraji. Dont know about others but am really loving this story... Had read the update in the evening (my time) while I was coming back home after finishing some work and got busy with household chores thereafter but these two painfully connected souls Ashutosh & Nidhi didnt leave my thoughts even for a second... Professionally, both might have sought refuge in their work but neither has really moved on in the matter of hearts... Both are standing at the point where they had parted ways 10 yr back, it seems...

If only Dr. A could tell his father how much he still loved nidhi & missed her... Everything that u have written to describe Ashutosh's feelings (and actually everything about him) is just too awesome... Cant express how deeply I felt for him... 😭 And about Nidhi... My heart really goes out to her... Totally innocent and yet the biggest sufferer... 😭

Loved Nidhi's part of story so much... Wonderfully u pointed out the difference between two personalities & how it ultimately resulted in a failed marriage... So true, Ashu has an aura around himself... That u can revere...idolize him... but sharing life with him that too for "immature in thoughts" girl like Nidhi... Not shocking that the union failed... And anyways it was for producing superbabies... Neither really knew the other before marriage, everything that happened after marriage must have been one or the other kind of adjustment... Love may have bloomed but before they could realize it, they happened to get separated 😭😭😭 Dr. A literally escaped coz he wasnt able to bear it and so did the girl...

Rohan is a guy who is also a dreamboy for any girl and he is in love with nidhi... Hopefully he does so even after knowing her sorrowful past.

Dr. A is back in kgh missing his nidhi more than ever & the first sight that he happens to catch is indeed hers but... in rohan's embrace... (My heart literally cried when he thought about his connecting flight from Delhi & last news from Nidhi that she had picked up her studies again in Delhi & when she excelled in her studies inspired from Dr. Ashutosh... 😭😭😭 )

Every second, I am recalling a fabulous & my all time fav. Movie Chandani... Ur story is diff. but the dilemma of female protagonist is same... Nidhi is another chandani here... Ashutosh isnt Rohit(rishi kapoor) & Rohan isnt lalit(vinod khanna) but both are the best suitable alliance for Nidhi and in the end any one of the man is going to loose

A food for thought story for me indeed... Thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi



Thank you So much Tupu.. Thanks a zillion for the pm as well.

the usual request.. would please post the pm here??😳

Posted Ma'am. Typos corrected 😆 & few lines added 😳 Would pm U rest of the things including how I knew u are a wonderful writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

You Monkey...can't you write FF in the title?I missed it coz I thought that it was a normal post..I loved all the parts. When is the next update?



🤣

Absolutely loved my title...


I wanted to get your attention to my posts and finally caught you..😆😆

and, it is other way round with many people here.. if it is an FF, they dont touch it at all..

next part is coming up...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Thanks a lot for this fantastic update Mudraji. Dont know about others but am really loving this story... Had read the update in the evening (my time) while I was coming back home after finishing some work and got busy with household chores thereafter but these two painfully connected souls Ashutosh & Nidhi didnt leave my thoughts even for a second... Professionally, both might have sought refuge in their work but neither has really moved on in the matter of hearts... Both are standing at the point where they had parted ways 10 yr back, it seems...

If only Dr. A could tell his father how much he still loved nidhi & missed her... Everything that u have written to describe Ashutosh's feelings (and actually everything about him) is just too awesome... Cant express how deeply I felt for him... 😭 And about Nidhi... My heart really goes out to her... Totally innocent and yet the biggest sufferer... 😭

Loved Nidhi's part of story so much... Wonderfully u pointed out the difference between two personalities & how it ultimately resulted in a failed marriage... So true, Ashu has an aura around himself... That u can revere...idolize him... but sharing life with him that too for "immature in thoughts" girl like Nidhi... Not shocking that the union failed... And anyways it was for producing superbabies... Neither really knew the other before marriage, everything that happened after marriage must have been one or the other kind of adjustment... Love may have bloomed but before they could realize it, they happened to get separated 😭😭😭 Dr. A literally escaped coz he wasnt able to bear it and so did the girl...

Rohan is a guy who is also a dreamboy for any girl and he is in love with nidhi... Hopefully he does so even after knowing her sorrowful past.

Dr. A is back in kgh missing his nidhi more than ever & the first sight that he happens to catch is indeed hers but... in rohan's embrace... (My heart literally cried when he thought about his connecting flight from Delhi & last news from Nidhi that she had picked up her studies again in Delhi & when she excelled in her studies inspired from Dr. Ashutosh... 😭😭😭 )

Every second, I am recalling a fabulous & my all time fav. Movie Chandani... Ur story is diff. but the dilemma of female protagonist is same... Nidhi is another chandani here... Ashutosh isnt Rohit(rishi kapoor) & Rohan isnt lalit(vinod khanna) but both are the best suitable alliance for Nidhi and in the end any one of the man is going to loose

A food for thought story for me indeed... Thanks a lot!!



Cant thank you enough for all the encouragement Tupu🤗

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