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Posted: 11 years ago
Lolz then put them on mam aur I should shout that Mudra write the last part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
May be it is not enough to love someone... it is also necessary that one should make the other person believe that he loves... and sure, Ashutosh missed this lesson...

At the same time... Love alone is not enough in the life... Life is bigger than the love... Rohan learnt this lesson...


I love these lines Mudraji. It is so true.

Mujhe nahin pataa tha aap itna acche FF likhti hain. Abhi tak sirf funny posts banati rahin. Why keep this talent hidden from us for so long.
Khair...
But, ab jab shuru kar hi diya hai toh I expect more FF's from you soon.

I just Have one complaint. The story is not finished. I know you have asked the readers to write the ending, but abhi tak no one has come forward. So, please finish kariye na.

Anyway, I loved it. Great job.




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra



Thank you very much for reading Libra. I cant say, how much it mean to me😊.
This is a great to hear from someone of your stature.😳

May be it is not enough to love someone... it is also necessary that one should make the other person believe that he loves... and sure, Ashutosh missed this lesson...

At the same time... Love alone is not enough in the life... Life is bigger than the love... Rohan learnt this lesson...


I love these lines Mudraji. It is so true.

Actually, love is a thing that works out well when it is balanced with other related things in life. I was really searching for this in every story. KTLK promised initially with other relationships like friends, father-daughter.. etc... I think that was one reason why I wrote this😊


Mujhe nahin pataa tha aap itna acche FF likhti hain. Abhi tak sirf funny posts banati rahin. Why keep this talent hidden from us for so long.
Khair...
But, ab jab shuru kar hi diya hai toh I expect more FF's from you soon.

I love to write fun posts only Anu. Bas, kabhi kabhi serious posts ban jaata hai... Infact in this I have not mentioned Mallika... and people were so surprised..asking me whether it is mine or not.. 😆😆.. But FF likhna bahut mushkil hai... plot has to be real big.. that is not seriously not my cup of tea.😕

I just Have one complaint. The story is not finished. I know you have asked the readers to write the ending, but abhi tak no one has come forward. So, please finish kariye na.

I am not convinced with pairing her with Ashu. Because, he might have loved her.. but never 'bothered' to find out what she must be going through. May be i incline towards Rohan.. but now that Rohan has a very high respect towards Ashutosh and started regarding Nidhi at some other height... So, cannot pair with Rohan even...

This is just one angle. The show's Rohan is a very weak character... so we never bothered about ..whether Nidhi thought about him even for a while... I am not complaining but even in our stories, we never have a character that is equivalent to Ashu. So many times it just happened like films... when there is a hero.. he has all good characteristics and heroine has no other option...

on the other hand, Mallika and Nidhi were there initially... even before we could understand why Ashu chose Nidhi and not Mallika, CVs have made her a mad personality... and she lost the charm.


So I could not think of writing anything as conclusion.

There was a suggestion by Sujatha.rao... but, I think I have not conveyed all this through the story... ofcourse, writing FF is something that not everyone can do...😳


Anyway, I loved it. Great job.

Thank you once again. It is my pleasure that you took time to read it.😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry Mudra! 😒 I think I will read this only after I go back. Have been completely occupied with my two kids who have been suffering from stomach infection last week 😭 and now I have to somehow finish packing to leave tonight. 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Mudra,
I am sorry for the delay. And extremely sorry that even this is gonna be a short one.
I just loved it.. s I already told u in my previous comment.. I loved the basic idea..
I also liked how you avoided every clichd situation.
Superbly written... u had a good grip, i.e. knew perfectly well wat u wanted to convey.
To answer your question, I ask just 1 question.. is it necessary for a gal to be married? Is marriage the be all and end all of life?
Why can't she just be on friendly terms with both?
Also, I'm unable to think of a choice because I have insufficient info. Like I have no idea what the brief AshNi married life was like earlier?
That is perhaps the only complaint (if I may say so), I have from this OS - that you never told us what AshNi's relationship was like before they got divorced.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

Sorry Mudra! 😒 I think I will read this only after I go back. Have been completely occupied with my two kids who have been suffering from stomach infection last week 😭 and now I have to somehow finish packing to leave tonight. 🤔



No problem Aarti.. I can understand... phursat kabhi kar leejiye...
Please take care 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Actually, love is a thing that works out well when it is balanced with other related things in life. I was really searching for this in every story. KTLK promised initially with other relationships like friends, father-daughter.. etc... I think that was one reason why I wrote this😊

How true Mudra ! ur reply n logic is even more beautiful than the story. There's no fairy tale formula for true love. It begins and blossoms with partners committing and recommitting to each other, both in vow and in action. It] is when two people make a commitment to each other and choose to act in ways that sustain their feelings for each other and their connection to each other over time."

I am not convinced with pairing her with Ashu. Because, he might have loved her.. but never 'bothered' to find out what she must be going through.

Very true! True love means having the courage to let go of past hurts and being able to forgive one another when one of you makes a mistake. We all make mistakes in life; some mistakes are bigger than others, but couples who are truly in love find ways to talk about those mistakes and move past them in healthy and productive ways. If one partner is constantly reminding the other person about a mistake from the past, the relationship won't survive.

May be i incline towards Rohan.. but now that Rohan has a very high respect towards Ashutosh and started regarding Nidhi at some other height... So, cannot pair with Rohan even...

Well said !Occasionally, when friends have shared time and experience, they begin to feel enamored with one another. This is why the labels of love and friendship are important. Confusing romantic love with friendship may result in hurt feelings, and the end of a meaningful relationship.

This is just one angle. The show's Rohan is a very weak character... so we never bothered about ..whether Nidhi thought about him even for a while... I am not complaining but even in our stories, we never have a character that is equivalent to Ashu. So many times it just happened like films... when there is a hero.. he has all good characteristics and heroine has no other option...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Mudra,

I am sorry for the delay. And extremely sorry that even this is gonna be a short one.
I just loved it.. s I already told u in my previous comment.. I loved the basic idea..
I also liked how you avoided every clichd situation.
Superbly written... u had a good grip, i.e. knew perfectly well wat u wanted to convey.
To answer your question, I ask just 1 question.. is it necessary for a gal to be married? Is marriage the be all and end all of life?
Why can't she just be on friendly terms with both?
Also, I'm unable to think of a choice because I have insufficient info. Like I have no idea what the brief AshNi married life was like earlier?
That is perhaps the only complaint (if I may say so), I have from this OS - that you never told us what AshNi's relationship was like before they got divorced.



Hi shirley,

how is the college going on?
I know it must be hectic.. and after the first week it self you get the work of life-time😳

Thank you for reading even with your hectic schedule.

A big Thank you for liking the post.
and yes, a very thought provoking question. why one should get married?? ... it is a convenience in the society. We need some rules and regulations for the human needs and behaviour.

So marriage is necessary but may not be sufficient to grow /live as a human. Friends are important... I think I am sounding like KPji's 'soulmate'.

As you say, Nidhi doesnt need to marry either.. She couldnt find an a perfect answer for herself.

And about AshNi's relationship during their marriage...
I think I just concluded in one or two lines. two years is a very short time to understand in the arranged marriages and Nidhi lost it with her immaturity. Ashutosh lost it being 'introvert'.

Thanks once again🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Actually, love is a thing that works out well when it is balanced with other related things in life. I was really searching for this in every story. KTLK promised initially with other relationships like friends, father-daughter.. etc... I think that was one reason why I wrote this😊

How true Mudra ! ur reply n logic is even more beautiful than the story. There's no fairy tale formula for true love. It begins and blossoms with partners committing and recommitting to each other, both in vow and in action. It] is when two people make a commitment to each other and choose to act in ways that sustain their feelings for each other and their connection to each other over time."

I am not convinced with pairing her with Ashu. Because, he might have loved her.. but never 'bothered' to find out what she must be going through.

Very true! True love means having the courage to let go of past hurts and being able to forgive one another when one of you makes a mistake. We all make mistakes in life; some mistakes are bigger than others, but couples who are truly in love find ways to talk about those mistakes and move past them in healthy and productive ways. If one partner is constantly reminding the other person about a mistake from the past, the relationship won't survive.

May be i incline towards Rohan.. but now that Rohan has a very high respect towards Ashutosh and started regarding Nidhi at some other height... So, cannot pair with Rohan even...

Well said !Occasionally, when friends have shared time and experience, they begin to feel enamored with one another. This is why the labels of love and friendship are important. Confusing romantic love with friendship may result in hurt feelings, and the end of a meaningful relationship.

This is just one angle. The show's Rohan is a very weak character... so we never bothered about ..whether Nidhi thought about him even for a while... I am not complaining but even in our stories, we never have a character that is equivalent to Ashu. So many times it just happened like films... when there is a hero.. he has all good characteristics and heroine has no other option...



Thank you very much Deepali...


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