Kashmakash S2 Th 10 Epilogue Pg 69 Aug 2 - Page 16

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Deepa, aap ko mera pm nahi mila kya?

Here I m, waiting for ur reply, kya hua? phir se khafaa ho gaye kya humse ?

Originally posted by: deepa17

No khafa aapse..ok..Can i do an Aishu here?? when is your next update?

Originally posted by: deepa17

Kaun sa comment.. Shirley..

Originally posted by: sshirley

yest. u said, 'no more Shirley the friend..' I saw it in the morning and m restless since then

Originally posted by: deepa17

Spur of the moment wala tha re.. Sorry.. 🤗

Chapter 19 review: Ashu backing off on getting the news of his daughters birth and his self thoughts in the cabin, well written, he needed a buddy like Armaan to jolt him out of his thoughts and fears, his love and concern for nidhi helped him rush towards nidhis room. He was naturally overwhelmed on seeing his daughter , nidhi so happy to see him looking at their daughter , before sleep took over.

. But he didn't touch our baby. (Then she shakes her head) I am moving too fast. Yesterday with so many people around, he hardly had a chance to see the baby's face. Today..today he will hold her. –

These lines show what Nidhi has gone through during the entire pregnancy , the ever optimist who thinks seeing their sweet , innocent baby , he will overcome his fears , and will be unable to keep away from the little one.

But the moment Ashu wakes up , she realises its still all about her and when at the mention of the baby he backed off big time,her shock , her mental state , very well potrayed through your professional writing skills. That along with the fact that he chose to stay in another room away from her and baby really got to her , she had everyone DB,BB,CV, Anji etc but guess she coud not take Ashus behaviour , fears any more, previous chapter I thought she was super strong but here u showed she is not mahaan only human . Post partum depression well researched and written without going into too many unnecessary details.

..(Now YOU happened Ashutosh! You and your seeming indifference is what happened. She is tired. She is tired of fighting and losing the battles. Aakhir kitne din..kitne maheene apne chehre pe muskaan liye ladegi woh? She has finally accepted and given up. 10 days since she looked at your properly. 10 days since she said a word to you. 10 days since she gave you her smile.)-

Lovely lines show the depth of Ashus love for Nidhi and how well they know each other.

CV and Ashu Conv also written well and loved the way he assured CV that he would take care of Nidhi with their help in keeping her cheerful ,active etc.

During Armaans visit, Nidhis indifference to him , her attitude , mental state just got to him and he couldnt stand to see his Nidhi in that state and he knew fully well he was entirely responsible for her behaviour etc. Then the mandir scene, could actually visualise his angst , his fight with his inner demons , his anger , and then a concerned Armaan requested him to go to Nidhi, very well written.

Then his first step towards his daughter, conversation with his daughter in Nidhis presence , his care for Nidhi , feeding her , spending time with her and finally holding her and consoling her , lovely , and finally Nidhi broke her silence and cried her heart out.

The concern for his daughter brought Ashu rushing home, and the final scene with Ashutosh holding the baby was so cute and well written.

Lovely chapter Sujatha, waiting for the final chapter with mixed feelings , dont want this beautiful FF to end .

Originally posted by: sshirley

I thought so, but had to confirm 🤗.

btw, u busy today?

Originally posted by: deepa17

Yes and no... got a little upset.. and then had work.. was just playing GOTW for a bit with NR..

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

Jayasreeji😡 You didn't miss me 😭

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

suku u missed my party