KTLK FF:Mere Jeewan Saathi[Th:2] Recap & Ch12-Pg132

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: saibanu
Thank you for the update Azeeen , I will come back tomorrow with my review !

No problem Sai, but did u red the chapter..?

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saibanu

@saibanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
No problem Sai, but did u red the chapter..?

I read few lines now Mom is calling for dinner ..will read after that 😉

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: saibanu

I read few lines now Mom is calling for dinner ..will read after that😉

Ok-Ok! U carry on... Read when u are able to ... Tc...

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deepali.rock

@deepali.rock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

solid dhamaaka..blockbuster chapter..mallika ka patta kat gya..but hamesha ke liye or will she strike back??

loved each and every word but somehow wasn't convinced with mallika and her regret??wo naatak toh nhi tha na..so that she gets time to plan her nxt move??ya uska pakka waala tata bye bye hogya??

next rohan and neeti together or not??

eagerly wating for ashni baby..and I also want a girl like ashu said..

chapter was long enough but still chota laga..wanted the story to go on and on when the chap ended..

take care of your health?? back better or not??

will wait for next chap..

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: deepali.rock
solid dhamaaka..blockbuster chapter..mallika ka patta kat gya..but hamesha ke liye or will she strike back??
loved each and every word but somehow wasn't convinced with mallika and her regret??wo naatak toh nhi tha na..so that she gets time to plan her nxt move??ya uska pakka waala tata bye bye hogya??

--Hello Deepali, 11 chapters ke baad, 12th chapter mein aapka swaagat hai... 😆
Thank u if u liked d dhamaaka...
And sorry, if Mallika's exit din convince u... This was my end to write the resentful and cruel mallika... Haan yaar, humseha ke liye gayi hai... Likha toh tha, she left never to return...

next rohan and neeti together or not??

-- Yup! Roothi chhori ko manaana hai boss!

eagerly wating for ashni baby..and I also want a girl like ashu said..

--Dekhte hain... Baby toh next update mein... Lekin boy hoga ki girl, woh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata... Better wait n watch... 😆
chapter was long enough but still chota laga..wanted the story to go on and on when the chap ended..

ab yaar, iska kya ilaaj hai... Main toh kitna bhi likhoon, tumko chota hi lagega, if you'll like it... So better wait for d next update...

take care of your health?? back better or not??

-- Hmmm... Yaar back pain phir se poore zor-shor se laut ke aaya hai... Quite much in pain...

will wait for next chap..

Dekhte hain yaar, wen can I update next...

Thanx 4 d review Deepali...

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

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Posted: 11 years ago

#966

A very beautiful chapter Aazeen! Sorry my review is too long🤔...there were so many wow moments I dint knw where to draw the line

Maa toh maa hoti hai na... Aur Maa ki jagah koi le sakta hai bhala?

Zara main bhi toh dekhoon, Ashutosh ne meri beti ka kaisa khayaal rakha hai...

The soft kisses when you need them most , the grip that steadies you on rocky roads the hand that feeds nd nurtures you , the shadow that walks besides u , nothing can b more comforting than a mothers hug

A: Agar, tumhare yahan girls nahi hoti, toh humare yahan ke boys se shaadi kaun karta...? See, its so convenient, ki ladkiyaan saari, Verma Mansion se aayengi Mathur Mansion... No second thoughts...

This was very cute...😛

A: Rohan humesha se hi, apne experiences, apni sharton par jeeya hai... usne kabhi humare experience se sabak lena nahi chaaha, balki, khud cheez ko experience kiya... Aur mujhe maaloom hai, ki wo har ghalti ka ehsaas thokar lagkar hi seekhta hai... Mera yaqeen hai, jis waqt wo Mallika se aazaad hoga, uske paas blame karne ke liye koi nahi hoga, and then he will take the absolutely correct path...

We can't be perfect all the time, we all make mistakes. Rohan is a strong character who wanted to accept responsibility , he wanted to take the blame for his actions . Accepting responsibility is a measure of one's self-worth, their level of security, and the true sign of strength and courage. Having this ability can empower you to grow in ways that would bring you great rewards and accomplishments in your life.

Yaqeen maaniye Aunty, maine jab se pyaar ko jaana tha, tab se sirf Ashutosh ko chaaha hai... Apni chahat ko kisi aur ki mohabbat bante dekh bohot takleef hui... Aisa laga, jaise Nidhi Ashutosh ke kareeb aati gayi, aur usne mujhse, meri wo eklauti-beshkeemti cheez cheen li, jispar, sirf mera haq tha...

As a lover it was difficult for Mallikanotto project her boundless feelings of fondness onto her beloved Ashu. But when it becomes blatant that these feelings aren't recognized and if so, certainly aren't reciprocated the ensuing disappointment and hurt can be immeasurable.

<Anu: Aisa hai Mallika, ki na toh Ashutosh koi bazaar mein bikne wali cheez hai, jiske liye, aapne ek keemat chukaayi, aur sajaa liya apne ghar mein, Aur na hi wo koi barter mein milne wala ehsaas hai, ki tumne Ashutosh se pyaar kiya, aur wo bhi tumse karne lagey... Rohan ko tumse pyar hua, kya tumhe bhi ussey pyaar hua? (On her nod in negative) Phir, tum kaise expect karti ho, ki, jis Ashutosh ko, tumse shaadi se pehle pyaar nahi hua, wo, kisi aur se shaadi hone ke baad, uss atoot rishte mein bandhne ke baad, tumko mil jaayega? Beta, shaadi, ek mazboot rishte ka naam hai, jiski neev vishwaas par tikti hai... Aur wo toh tumne dekh hi liya hoga, Ashu aur Nidhi mein... Tumhe lagta hai, ki, tum koi aisi-waisi harkat karti, aur wo dono alag ho jaate?

Beautifully drafted lines Aazeen! Anu as a woman as a mother as a true friend ...when heavy n sudden trials falls upon her children , when adversities take over properties , when troubles thicken around , she counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness nd causes peace to return in her children's lives!

And Rohan fell on his feet, crying terribly... Ashutosh was silently weeping too... He himself sat infront of Rohan, on his knees on the floor... He held Rohan's face in his hands and embraced him to his heart

There is sacredness in their tears. They are not the mark of weakness but of strength. Their tears speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They r messengers of overwhelming grief nd unspeakable love!

The entire story is about familial bonding where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation. It's a place where people share and understand each other. Its relationships are nurturing. The people in it do not need to be perfect; instead, they need to be honest, loving, supportive, recognizing a common humanity that makes all of us vulnerableThe fact is, there is no foundation, no secure ground, upon which people may stand if it isn't the family. If you don't have the support and love and caring and concern that you get from a family, you don't have much at all.

A very emotional story. Loved every bit u wrote👍🏼

Edited by deepaligupta197 - 11 years ago

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#967

Deepali di, I'll come back to u tomorrow... I'll mess up with the fonts in I reply wid my moby...

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#968

Very nice update.. Loved the length.. But kahiin darr hain ki .. Is it going to be the end.. Soon..

Loved this Rohan ..

Waiting for Ashni jr

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: deepa17
Very nice update.. Loved the length.. But kahiin darr hain ki .. Is it going to be the end.. Soon..
Loved this Rohan ..

Waiting for Ashni jr

Thank u Deepali di...Thank u for liking the update and the length...

Rohan ke baarey mein mujhse kisne kya kuch nahi kaha... Kisi ne usey bewakoof kaha, kisi ne foolish,kisi ko wo spineless lagta tha, ya toh kisi ko wo pasand hi nahi aaya... But, there are certain people in life, who learn from their experiences...
But, these people when make decisions, they are very firm to the roots... Rohan bhi aisa hi ek insaan hai... Wo dusro ki baat outrightly ignore nahi karta, but, maanta khudke dil aur dimaag ki hai...

Ye darr toh har cheez ke saath hai... Jo cheez aayi hai, usey kabhi-na-kabhi khatam bhi toh hona hoga na... It cannot go on forever... But, there are still going to be a few more updates... And if this is the length of my updates, then even lesser... But, I still believe, its 2 updates before an epilogue... Kam ho jaayein toh, main kya keh sakti hoon...

Zindagi choti ho ya badi, zaroori baat ye hai, ki achhi honi chahiye...
Main agar 100 chaps bhi likh loon, and you people don't like reading it, toh kya mere post karne ka koi worth hai?
On the contrary, main agar sirf 5 chaps bhi likhoon, aur wo aap logon ko pasand aaye, it makes my writing worth...
And I do think, as a story, these many chaps are considerably enough to say it was a Fanfiction...! That is more important...

Yup! Ashni Junior on the way, shayad next update mein, you can find him/her... Kya lagta hai, ladka ya ladki? Hmmm?

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Mithee, sudhar jaao, waise bhi, apna dostana apna ko world Phamous ka raha hai...😆

thike ji Mithalee ab sudharne vali hain,toh ab main tumhe call nahi karungi aur naahi tumhaara call receive karungi...from today u r just like any another frnd to me😛 Jinka phone main mood hone par receive karti hoon...thenga Aazuu 👍🏼

Aur hum aapko bata de hum sahi salaamat ghar pahuch gaye hain...

Edited by Pardeshi.Mithu - 11 years ago

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