KTLK FF:Mere Jeewan Saathi[Th:2] Recap & Ch12-Pg132 - Page 98

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

A very beautiful chapter Aazeen! Sorry my review is too long🤔...there were so many wow moments I dint knw where to draw the line

Arrey Deepali di, kaisi baat kar rahi hain... u'll write long reviews, and I wont get happy, aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Ofcourse, I'm delighted... Keep them coming...😃

And thanks a lot, that You have genuinely liked my chapter... I'm so-so happy to know, that, you have found so many wow moments in it... Now I wonder, maine pehle kitna kharaab chapter likha tha, and this re-written one has surpassed my own level to write... Thanx to that one person, who made me re-write this chap, until I wrote something acceptable...😃

Maa toh maa hoti hai na... Aur Maa ki jagah koi le sakta hai bhala?

Zara main bhi toh dekhoon, Ashutosh ne meri beti ka kaisa khayaal rakha hai...

The soft kisses when you need them most , the grip that steadies you on rocky roads the hand that feeds nd nurtures you , the shadow that walks besides u , nothing can b more comforting than a mothers hug

Absolutely Deepali di...! Maa ka muqaabla saare jahan mein nahi hai, no one can be as good as a mother... Really... This mother in this ff has inspired me a lot...

A: Agar, tumhare yahan girls nahi hoti, toh humare yahan ke boys se shaadi kaun karta...? See, its so convenient, ki ladkiyaan saari, Verma Mansion se aayengi Mathur Mansion... No second thoughts...

This was very cute...😛

Thank you di...😆 I know, many of you all have used these lines in the reviews, so I thought, why not Ashni accept it too...😉

A: Rohan humesha se hi, apne experiences, apni sharton par jeeya hai... usne kabhi humare experience se sabak lena nahi chaaha, balki, khud cheez ko experience kiya... Aur mujhe maaloom hai, ki wo har ghalti ka ehsaas thokar lagkar hi seekhta hai... Mera yaqeen hai, jis waqt wo Mallika se aazaad hoga, uske paas blame karne ke liye koi nahi hoga, and then he will take the absolutely correct path...

We can't be perfect all the time, we all make mistakes. Rohan is a strong character who wanted to accept responsibility , he wanted to take the blame for his actions . Accepting responsibility is a measure of one's self-worth, their level of security, and the true sign of strength and courage. Having this ability can empower you to grow in ways that would bring you great rewards and accomplishments in your life.

You remember Deepali di, I have always stood in Rohan's defence, when anybody used to raise fingers on this character... This guy was criticised more than Mallika in my ff... But, unlike people, who learn things from their elder's experiences, Rohan is like me... I too never learn lessons, just because one says- My experience speaks... I have made my own experiences...

hum zyadatar baaton ko maan lete hain apne badon ki, but, sometimes, when you are too immature, the only way to get mature is hold responsibility... "Usko uske haal par chod do" is the only solution then... Mere saath bhi hua, and with time, I've corrected my mistakes... Apne badon se maafi maangne mein koi sharm nahi hai, khud ki ghalti ki responsibilty lene mein bhi koi sharm nahi hai... And frankly, I'm proud, maine khud ko beech majdhaar mein phansaaya bhi, aur surakshit nikal kar wapas bhi aayi hoon, that makes me, look like-ME... I'm holding my own identity... And thats enough, no matter, what people think, I'm lame, spineless, foolish or something... At the end of the day I'm me... Rohan is the same... These kind of people can be as timid as a lamb and can be as fierce as a lion... Thats the character sketch...!

Yaqeen maaniye Aunty, maine jab se pyaar ko jaana tha, tab se sirf Ashutosh ko chaaha hai... Apni chahat ko kisi aur ki mohabbat bante dekh bohot takleef hui... Aisa laga, jaise Nidhi Ashutosh ke kareeb aati gayi, aur usne mujhse, meri wo eklauti-beshkeemti cheez cheen li, jispar, sirf mera haq tha...

As a lover it was difficult for Mallika not to project her boundless feelings of fondness onto her beloved Ashu. But when it becomes blatant that these feelings aren't recognized and if so, certainly aren't reciprocated the ensuing disappointment and hurt can be immeasurable.

True... But, you know what, I feel, ek aise rishte ke dreams mein dwell karna, jismein na humara past hai, na future, And in the meanwhile, wasting our present is useless...

For example, I want to once meet SK by chance, and he talks to me very nicely... Ab main unse milke kya baat karungi, uske sapne dekhne rehte waqt, main apne aas-paas ke log, who are there just for me, main unka saath gawa doongi... Isn't that foolish of me...

The relation, that we are trying to put seeds into, that is never going to yeild fruits, is the waste of the seed, the potential of the soil and the gift of nature... Better is to put the seeds into that suitable soil, that is made for it...

<Anu: Aisa hai Mallika, ki na toh Ashutosh koi bazaar mein bikne wali cheez hai, jiske liye, aapne ek keemat chukaayi, aur sajaa liya apne ghar mein, Aur na hi wo koi barter mein milne wala ehsaas hai, ki tumne Ashutosh se pyaar kiya, aur wo bhi tumse karne lagey... Rohan ko tumse pyar hua, kya tumhe bhi ussey pyaar hua? (On her nod in negative) Phir, tum kaise expect karti ho, ki, jis Ashutosh ko, tumse shaadi se pehle pyaar nahi hua, wo, kisi aur se shaadi hone ke baad, uss atoot rishte mein bandhne ke baad, tumko mil jaayega? Beta, shaadi, ek mazboot rishte ka naam hai, jiski neev vishwaas par tikti hai... Aur wo toh tumne dekh hi liya hoga, Ashu aur Nidhi mein... Tumhe lagta hai, ki, tum koi aisi-waisi harkat karti, aur wo dono alag ho jaate?

Beautifully drafted lines Aazeen! Anu as a woman as a mother as a true friend ...when heavy n sudden trials falls upon her children , when adversities take over properties , when troubles thicken around , she counsels to dissipate the clouds of darkness nd causes peace to return in her children's lives!

Thank you di... Maa wo ek aisi insaan hai, wo ek aisa ehsaas hai, jo har roop dhaaran karne mein saksham hai... She can be the softest silk to her children, and can even turn into the iron sheild it is to protect her children... I often say, have seen my mother that way- Khud ko kuch bhi ho, chalega, par apne bachhe par koi aanch nahi aane denge... That is how a mother is...

And Rohan fell on his feet, crying terribly... Ashutosh was silently weeping too... He himself sat infront of Rohan, on his knees on the floor... He held Rohan's face in his hands and embraced him to his heart

There is sacredness in their tears. They are not the mark of weakness but of strength. Their tears speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They r messengers of overwhelming grief nd unspeakable love!

How true is that... I feel, that was the sweetest gesture in the entire update... Although, this chapter contained some valuable gestures, yet, this one touched some chords of my heart... I have not actually seen such a brother-to-brother love, but, still my heart makes me brim to the core, feeling it that way... They can never be considered as weak gestures... It takes heart and soul, to leave ur dear ones, to fall into the pit of life, that gives experience, because, that experience is always going to be bitter, yet, he had to do it... Ashutosh had that feeling...

On the other hand, a brother, who has just come out of that pitfall experience, on his own, understands this new found feeling... Dono ke dil mein ek doosre ko khone ka darr hai, aur, ye ek doosre ko paane ki khushi hai, jp aansuon ke raaste nikal rahi hai... unn kadvi baaton ko bhulaane ke liye... Ek nayi shuruaat ke liye...

The entire story is about familial bonding where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation. It's a place where people share and understand each other. Its relationships are nurturing. The people in it do not need to be perfect; instead, they need to be honest, loving, supportive, recognizing a common humanity that makes all of us vulnerableThe fact is, there is no foundation, no secure ground, upon which people may stand if it isn't the family. If you don't have the support and love and caring and concern that you get from a family, you don't have much at all.

A very emotional story. Loved every bit u wrote👍🏼

@ green...👏👏👏 Absolutely correct and beautiful words... Very true...

And I totally agree, the family is something, taht contributes to you and your life, that the entire world together cannot do... That is a true family... A loving, supportive family... I do know, every family has some or the other problems, yet, when time comes, come what may, they always are united...😃