Kashmakash S2 Th 3 Chap 8 Pg 129 June 26 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger

Pata nahi Suku Aunty...Sujatha aunty to kuchh aur keh rahi hai...


we can make your game as the GOTW once Sagi..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger

Pata nahi Suku Aunty...Sujatha aunty to kuchh aur keh rahi hai...


If you want you can try it once otherwise you always have a option to leave... simple 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


we can make your game as the GOTW once Sagi..


Deffo... Sign up for July's GOTW..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


Deepa..everything ok??


I am worried...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo guys..am off for a while now. will be back a bit later..

Sagi..have fun and don't stay up too late. ok?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07


Sagi has school Suku...one of you guys make it on her behalf na...

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 7 REVIEW

Hello...Ready with andas and tamatars..for me being so late😆..

This fic is having a totally different impact on us as compared to other writings...for two reasons

First is that it has this seamless flow like that of a fairytale ki man karta hai ki padte hi jao.. it takes us into that fictitious world jisse hum baaahar nhi aana chaahte..and even your cliffhanger can't dampen that spirit😆...

Ab aap hi batao aise difficult situation mein how are we expected to analyse the chapter and post our review😡

And secondly, some scenes are similar to season 1, it actually confuses me..because the differences and similarities automatically pop up in my mind and i end up getting confused😆..i bet how are you writing it without confusing yourself???

The love confession part was same..but it was a treat reading it again..have always loved this part..loved Nidhi in this scene..
Her courage and determination were just out of the world, out of the box..and no matter what i love this nidhi so so much..(i am gonna end up getting confused..shirley ko kehti hun i hate nidhi and aapko i love her🤣..agar kisi din ulta bol diya to samajh jaaana plz😆)

And this Ashu, Omg..pakka she devil ashu hai

This Ashu is harsh and gentle in his own way..and both forms are for Nidhi's good only..atleast that is what he thinks..

But Ashuji ko kya pata ki pyaar ki dor itni aasaani se nhi todi jaa sakti..aur nidhi tootne bhi nhi degi..hope so..

And Ashu's pain of his childhood is much more evident in this season..it can be seen quite clearly

What i liked about this fic was that you didn't bring in armaan or rohan to solve their issues..armaan is their but the story is not dependant on him..you let ashni take the charge this time..

You skipped nidhi's project part in this one..that used to be my favourite from among the preconfession scenes..missed that here😡

Ashu waves his hand as if pushing away her words: Nidhi, enough now, I don't want to talk about this any more and I don't want YOU to talk about this anymore. I will forget that we ever had this conversation and I suggest you do the same. (He closes his eyes tightly. Say yes Nidhi..just say yes and leave me.)

Nidhi: No sir.

Ashu's sincerity, his love and pain was all so visible here..

When Rihaan said that Ashu has a soft corner for Nidhi, it was really sweet..it must have given Nidhi a tiny winy ray of hope???..His words were actually a mirror which reflect upon reality

." No. No Nidhi. It is not love. Yeh pyaar nahi hain. Yeh pyaar nahi hosakta. Its just infatuation..a crush. And you will realize it soon enough. I will make you realize it

The last line had a huge impact..can't put it in words.. He is fighting with himself over here..

The flower vase scene was another strong punch..these small things, these gestures, these actions have already defined their relationship..but he isn't willing to accept that..

Iss ladki ka mein kya karoo? I removed the flower vase the day after she told me that she loves me..thats the first thing I did. I wanted her to stop wishing me with those flowers. But the next day she had put the flowers in a glass of water. The next I had removed the glass and she got a new flower vase of her own. I know what she is doing. She is telling me that she is not going to give up. I have stopped interacting with her as much as possible given the fact that her duty now is in my department. I have made sure my lunch timing never coincides with hers. And still I see her looking at me with her wide eyes and a tentative smile on her face. (He covers his face with his palms) Nidhi..please Nidhi..don't do this to me. Just back off. Please! I can fight myself. I can fight you. I can't do both. Don't tempt me with something that I can't have Nidhi. I can't do this! Please..leave me alone!

This was the essence of whole chapter..condensed into one..his feelings so tender ,so raw..and so intense..Hats Off!!!!!!

And baba..my heart went out to him..seeing his son undergoing so much pain..its not easy for any parent..

Why doesn't he open up? He never opens up. Kuch achcha hain toh share karta hain. Lekin saara dard apne andar dabaa deta hain. My 35 years of love is not able to wipe out the first 7 years of horror of my son's life: Teek hain.

Even in sleep you frown beta. Aisa kaunsa dard hain jo tu sab se chuparaha hain?

This feeling of not being able to help your kid in distress..utter helpnessness is really disheartening..

The phone scene was very delicate..i wished i could just snatch te phone from his hand and make him to talk to nidhi😭..but she devil touch ke bina to chapter adhoora rehta na😡😛..

Armaan coming into picture itself gives relief...Ashu confessing before Armaan was good..atleast that was hassle free..thank god for small mercies..is armaan residing in delhi aur Mumbai??

Why Nidhi? Why do you love me? The more I push you, the more you pull me along with you! Meine apne kile ke darwaaje band karliye the Nidhi..lekin tumne ek suraag banaakar mere dil tak pahoonch hi gayi!

These lines are windows to his heart, his soul, his love...And ultimately seeing Nidhi's conviction of pursuing him and loving him..he leaves..

Is he still running bcoz of child abuse or age gap or both???

Now what?? Ashu is gone.. not only this Ashu is stronger..so is Nidhi..

Last time she had Armaan, Mansi, Baba and most importantly Ashu's love..but what would happen this time around..she is all alone..all by herself..
Another thing..this update showed heartstone version to nidhi but sweetheart version to ashu himself
Edited by deepali.rock - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


Ok will do... I only signed up for one and that over now, will ask Deepa if she can make it...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
review on previous page..pehliwali reservation kahin kho gyi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
congo suku..aaakhir tu red ban hi gyi

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