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Posted: 12 years ago
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@aarti I think this is the second time right ?? Please see my request on the version 1 thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

@aarti I think this is the second time right ?? Please see my request on the version 1 thread


Yes Deepali. First time I was near Starbucks and their network clashed with the mobile network, so it was chaos and hubby's ph got jammed.

Next time I was im mall and posted and a few minutes later realized that it was not done.

Ok, let me see what you have written. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

This is what happens when you rely on an outside network... I lost my comments here as well. 😡 Will have to rethink what I wrote. Aati hoon. 🤔



... you know!! it happened to me twice ..when I posted the story for OS contest... sometimes really frustrating..especially... emoticons and all...Grrr😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan


Yes Deepali. First time I was near Starbucks and their network clashed with the mobile network, so it was chaos and hubby's ph got jammed.

Next time I was im mall and posted and a few minutes later realized that it was not done.

Ok, let me see what you have written. 😃



I am dying to see your comments on this aarti... please write

hoping...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



haha!! Nidhi fan madam!!

making mistakes in the work is different... one is not irresponsible... may be one is incapable ... or the circumstances...so many things matter...

someone is 24 years old... academically intelligent one ...doesnot know why she should complete the studies... Left the job just like that... and again joined for the reason... "him"...

all her pranks ... I cannot digest even today... far from anything realistic... All her actions might have utilised for catching his attention... but simple term 'irresponsible'

Comeon yaar, her father pushed her into medicine and her heart is not there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Comeon yaar, her father pushed her into medicine and her heart is not there...



agreed... father pushed at 18.. but,
she did not realize over the six crucial years of her growing up life?😲




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



agreed... father pushed at 18.. but,
she did not realize over the six crucial years of her growing up life?😲




But you cannot put your heart into something forced on you...
OK, Is Mallika good or bad? Minus Suhasini what she would have done?
But that file etc were done before Suhasini?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

But you cannot put your heart into something forced on you...
OK, Is Mallika good or bad? Minus Suhasini what she would have done?
But that file etc were done before Suhasini?



If the theory is correct about Nidhi's heart rather than the brain / logic / reality, then Mallika is good...
She had her heart on Ashu and who ever comes in between, she does whatever she could do...

But, to me...Mallika is jealous, blind, weak-minded and volatile from the beginning.
File is not important according to the nurse...as records could have been reconstructed from the computer.. but Mallika made it look like a responsibility lapse of a new intern...

she assured the nurse...about the child's safety..while switching medicines to test Nidhi... that means she was (in the pre Suhasini era).. not alltogether bad...

Nevertheless, I sympathize her for being a loner all the time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok Mudra, finally I got a moment to come back here...

So first thing is where Ashu's thoughts in the earlier version had more clarity I think here they are more ambiguous. Where in the first he knew for certain he was attracted to Nidhi here he is unsure about his feelings. Where first his withdrawal from Mallika is a foregone conclusion in his mind here he seems to be mired in indecision.

And I thing that I am not clear about is the medical case that Ashu is thinking about, is that Nidhi or someone else?

Just because you mentioned the person is 25 makes me think that Nidhi here is affected by a rare condition and in the process of finding a cure Ashu is finding himself being attracted to her.

Or it could be someone else who is under Nidhi's care and she has suggested something. He wants to confiem with his noted but at the same time does not want to share Nidhi's suspicions with Mallika coz he knows she never gives a youngster, an intern the benefit of doubt. She is egoistic and believes that a younger person cannot have a more intelligent brain than her intelligent and experienced brain...

These are the two ways I can analyze your OS, though the withdrawal from MAllika seems to be the common occurrence...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh! I think Aarti... there is a confusion...

these two are two versions of the common situation...

"Ashutosh lied to Mallika that he would freshen up... but the fact was, he wanted to see Nidhi... in the Raja-titli scene"

I have written two diagonally opposite circumstances. In the first version, Ashutosh is a darling... the character appears in all our FFs.

second version is a demon compared to the ideal..😆

Ofcourse, I always prefer second version..😉😆

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