FF: Intehaa Pyaar Ki: Chapter 4 Page 98, June 16. - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Hello Shirley, Thank you for this new ff!! I had read your earlier ff in bits and pieces but could not reply back to you partly owing to my busyness and partly owing to my laziness. 😃 But this time, to not miss replying to you, I am also reserving a place here. Will be back asap. 😳

Waiting Tupu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hi Shirley!!

Congratulations on your new FF!!

Hi,
Thank you Mudra,
Sirf congratulations?
No reaction, feedback?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Good start Shirley :-) but Ashu proposing Mallu :-( ye kya ho gaya!!!
Par chalo dekhte hain aage kya hota hain till then i zip my mouth varna phir kuch anaap shanaap na kehdu :-(

BTW is it going to b just a love story or some mystery in it? When is the next update?

Thank you Mithalee.
Dekhte jaiye kya hota hai.
Next Update - depends on a lot of things. But in any case, probably not before Monday. Believe me, I am trying to do my best to give frequent updates - lekin main aapki 'un' jki tarah nahi na - cant think and type at the speed of lightening.
@bold - what do u want.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sshirley




Thank you Mithalee.


Dekhte jaiye kya hota hai.


Next Update - depends on a lot of things. But in any case,probably not before Monday. Believe me, I am trying to do my best to give frequent updates - lekin main aapki 'un' jki tarah nahi na - cant think and type at thespeed of lightening.


@bold - what do u want.



Na na take ur own time yaar,ready to wait b'coz I know the wait will b worth it...

And as for the mystery or love story dekho aapko kaisa jamta ho,ussi hissab se u take it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

wonderful beginning...I am hooked...CV isn't so sure about Nidhi-Rohan relationship...Ashu did have some doubts regarding whether Mallika was the one...So will something happen and make Ashni end up together...how will they break up with their partners? Ashu is already possessive about Mallu..


Thank God you included Mallu in this FF..I was dying for her

@Green -Thank you for saying that - .
@violet - don't all parents have some doubts about their child's choice?
@ Bold - oh really? is it necessary? u don't like AshMal and NiHan pairing - who knows I may have written a story where ashni are just content being friends
@orange - well, again is it necessary?
btw, Vidishaa, the other day I went to a musical nite - wahan bahut time ke baad vo gaana suna - bin phere hum tere - do u like this song? 😉
@pink - phir toh, hopefully you are gonna love this ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: deepa17

You know Shirley.. loved your font selection.. so now I don't need to change it when I copy it over.. first chapter is already where it should be .. in my kindle..Thanks guys. for such great fiction that even though I have the current two best sellers to read.. I am reading your stories (S & S company).👏👏

well, Deepa, the font is Calibri 11.
@bold - really? I m completely flattered.
S& S company? Thank you so much. But, I can't even hold a candle to Suvika
Oh and I believe it is discerning readers like you who make writers out of us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Mithalee



Na na take ur own time yaar,ready to wait b'coz I know the wait will b worth it...

Thank you Mithalee
And as for the mystery or love story dekho aapko kaisa jamta ho,ussi hissab se u take it...

I asked your preference
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Sshirley,Thanks for the FF.Congrates.Like this start.But here some confussion for me.Why you choose Mallika for Ashu and Rohan for Nidhi?I hte Mallika in serial but want to know the good side of her.And baba and ashu's relation is too cute such as armaan and ashu's.I love your start of ff.And then Nidhi and her gand.I want to know about Anji too.So overall if it good chap.But frankly speaking i like If Ashutosh proposed nidhi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sshirley

@Green -Thank you for saying that - .
@violet - don't all parents have some doubts about their child's choice?
@ Bold - oh really? is it necessary? u don't like AshMal and NiHan pairing - who knows I may have written a story where ashni are just content being friends
@orange - well, again is it necessary?
btw, Vidishaa, the other day I went to a musical nite - wahan bahut time ke baad vo gaana suna - bin phere hum tere - do u like this song? 😉
@pink - phir toh, hopefully you are gonna love this ff.


I am fine if Ashni are just friends...but believe me, a lot of people will bombard you with pm to pair them...

An analysis of Ashmal relationship would rock...I have always wondered what would have happened if Nidhi married Rohan and Ashu got married to Mallu...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Purvacaitra arambham karoti👍🏼
B back with review!

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