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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hi Who R u? do i know u? Kuch yaad nahi aaraha hai...
you don't remember me??teek hain koi nahi...FF start karke review maango tab batati hoon ki mein kaun hoon...

Yes saw the spammin by u, mithalee and even aazeen. When i got up, i was so happy to get 6 pages of opinion. but phir dekha toh most of it was spamming, koi nahi koi nahi, continue ur spamming

[Quoted By Suvika.]

you know i told those two..achchi baat nahi hain..spamming mat karo...but they didn't listen...then i finally gave up and joined them...😛😆[/B]

Suja di, I'm trying to remember, aapne mujhe kab mana kiya tha spamming se???

Waise b main aur spamming karti, Par Mithee gayab ho gayi... Sorry Shirley, tumhare armaano par paani pher diya maine... U thot 6 pages of opinions? Hehehhe...

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hmm, why the questions? Anyways, since you asked, subtle romance is fine and so is going slow. The only thing is the story has to keep moving without stagnation. And Shirley even with subtle romance it should be interesting enough to keep one glued to the screen...

Just make sure you do not so what the show's CVs did when AShni got back together after her father's heart attack... the show stagnated for almost a month, Ashni simply went on dates, Mallika kept instigating some issues and there was no heart to heart or even any improvement in the comfort level between Ashni. In that period people started saying that Rohan-Nidhi and Ashu-Mallika seemed like better suited... so just keep this in mind...

Profession, do what's best suited to the story. Sujatha has written FFs with Ashni in other professions and it worked out just fine. You just have to nail your characterization...

Hope this answers your questions...😃

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Hmm, why the questions? Anyways, since you asked, subtle romance is fine and so is going slow. The only thing is the story has to keep moving without stagnation. And Shirley even with subtle romance it should be interesting enough to keep one glued to the screen...

Just make sure you do not so what the show's CVs did when AShni got back together after her father's heart attack... the show stagnated for almost a month, Ashni simply went on dates, Mallika kept instigating some issues and there was no heart to heart or even any improvement in the comfort level between Ashni. In that period people started saying that Rohan-Nidhi and Ashu-Mallika seemed like better suited... so just keep this in mind...

Profession, do what's best suited to the story. Sujatha has written FFs with Ashni in other professions and it worked out just fine. You just have to nail your characterization...

Hope this answers your questions...😃

@ red, - becoz i need to know what my readers prefer, while planning an ff.

Thanks a lot Aarti for answering my questions so thoroughly and explaining ur expectations so well.

And no, dont worry, neither will my story stagnate at any point of time, nor will my characters lose their consistency ever.

My story is still hazy in my mind as i m quite preoccupied with certain things rite now, but the more i think about my story, the more i m inclined towards the legal field - phir bhi dekhiye kya likhti hoon.

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: sshirley

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deepali.rock

@deepali.rock

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

How many lawyers do we have here?

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Hey, happy to have u back

Good to know that u r up with a story already.

Romance is always up with the mere name AshNi, so wouldn't mind how u bring it out and for them being doctors or lawyer, well would say go how it suits with ur story line becoz that enhances and keeps its beauty.

Hoping to have it soon😊

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Hey, happy to have u back

🤗

Good to know that u r up with a story already.

Well, the story is still kinda hazy in my mind

Romance is always up with the mere name AshNi, so wouldn't mind how u bring it out and for them being doctors or lawyer, well would say go how it suits with ur story line becoz that enhances and keeps its beauty.

Let me develop the story properly in my mind first, then will decide. but m more inclined towards legal, still lets see

Hoping to have it soon😊