New ff - Note page 20 pl. see

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends,

My semester is over today and I m back on this forum for 3 months. During my winter break of 20-25 days, I wrote an ff Jab koi baat bigad jaaye (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kuch-toh-log-kehenge/3346165/jab-koi-baat-bigad-jaaye-ch10-p94-epi-p99), which was appreciated by you all.

As promised, I have a new ff in mind. But I need your opinion on a lot of things. Following is the 1st list of questions for you all.

1. 1. This ff won't have hot intimate scenes. Because, for one thing, I m not comfy writing such scenes and secondly they won't suit my story. Wherever needed, I will use innuendoes.

Now pl. tell me frankly, would u like an ff without such scenes? I promise to give a good amount of subtle romance.

2. 2. The story is such that the falling in love from both sides is gonna be a very slow process ' would you enjoy that?

3. 3. What do u prefer? AshNi in the medical field or AshNi in the legal field?

PLEASE BE VERY FRANK ' so that I can plan accordingly.

Thanks

Shirley

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok...with all the other points...but plz write with legal field...fed up of medical field...plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sshirley


Welcome Back Shirley!! 🤗

1. 1. This ff won't have hot intimate scenes. Because, for one thing, I m not comfy writing such scenes and secondly they won't suit my story. Wherever needed, I will use innuendoes.

Now pl. tell me frankly, would u like an ff without such scenes? I promise to give a good amount of subtle romance.

as long as the story is moving fwd, i have no problem.

2. 2. The story is such that the falling in love from both sides is gonna be a very slow process ' would you enjoy that?

i think so..everyone keeps saying i rush things..so may be i will learn to slow down from your FF..

3. 3. What do u prefer? AshNi in the medical field or AshNi in the legal field?

why are you asking this question?? the professions should suit the story na..or do you have 2 stories in mind for 2 professions??


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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz plz plz legal field...plz plz plz
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Originally posted by: Mithalee

Ok...with all the other points...but plz write with legal field...fed up of medical field...plz plz plz plz


there speaks the law student..

Shirley..Mithalee is studying law..so if AshNi are going to be in the law, she can help you out if required. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tu kuch bhi likh..i m always on my toes to read it. Just love ur work. Missed u so much. As far as legal or medical field, i m comfy with both, depends on what u r more inclined to..so when do we have chap 1?😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.



there speaks the law student..

Shirley..Mithalee is studying law..so if AshNi are going to be in the law, she can help you out if required.😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sshirley,

Good morning.I am so happy to see your post as well as your comments on Suvika, thread. Welcome back.

Your Ff Jab koi bat bigad jaye is so very heart warming that I read and reread it many times and in fact still do it. Your command over the language is commendable and it enhances the beauty of the story and the descriptions.

1. I prefer any romance with subtle expressions as they enhance the beauty of it.
2. A slow process of falling in love is always better than a whirlwind courting and misunderstandings.

3.The love story of Ashutosh and Nidhi with any back ground iswelcome. The fact is that those two names to gather are enough to get us goosebumps.I feel that medical profession suits them better.

Ultimately it is for you to decide what suits better fot the story you have in your mind.

Thank you once again for planning to give the second Ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz plz leagal field...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithalee




Plz plz leagal field...


😆 Mithalee yeh kuch zyaada nahi horaha???

and where is my review?? 😡

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