Guzra Hua Kal-Updated ch-7 pg 7 - Page 6

hey bhagwan tumne phir se daant todo hindi ka use kiaa 😡 itta tough hindi hum jaisa anadi kaise samjhega

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Thank you for continuing with this lovely OS Divyaji. Awesome update!! 👏👏👏

Reading all the chapters ek baar phir -- shuru se -- will come back with detailed review. 😃

Originally posted by: debaparna77

hey bhagwan tumne phir se daant todo hindi ka use kiaa 😡 itta tough hindi hum jaisa anadi kaise samjhega

but, mast writing h ...😳

plzz continue asap !

😭 thankoo tune padha..meanings nhi likha sorry..

Beautiful update Divyaji. Was waiting for u to continue with this . not use to writing reviews but !Hindi took me back to my school text book. Please give more updates of this

Mujhe laga, aap ise bhool gai ho..par bahut khushi hui ki apne ise likha !! Wow ,aapke Hindi ke kya kahne !!itni shudh koi shreshth sahityik hi likh sakte hain..aur aap wo bilkul hain ..!!
Yeh path mujhe bahut achcha laga,aakir Nidhi ne apne andhere,vednadai kosh se bahar nikalneki koshish shuru ki hain..!Nidhi-Piyush kyu alag hue ye janne ki bahut utkantha hain...aap aise hi hamesha likhte rahiye,achcha lagta hain.

Originally posted by: mehrj

Beautiful update Divyaji. Was waiting for u to continue with this . not use to writing reviews but !Hindi took me back to my school text book. Please give more updates of this

Originally posted by: Amu_05

Mujhe laga, aap ise bhool gai ho..par bahut khushi hui ki apne ise likha !! Wow ,aapke Hindi ke kya kahne !!itni shudh koi shreshth sahityik hi likh sakte hain..aur aap wo bilkul hain ..!!
Yeh path mujhe bahut achcha laga,aakir Nidhi ne apne andhere,vednadai kosh se bahar nikalneki koshish shuru ki hain..!Nidhi-Piyush kyu alag hue ye janne ki bahut utkantha hain...aap aise hi hamesha likhte rahiye,achcha lagta hain.

Bahut sunder Divya,bahut dard tha khas kar jab Nidhi apne marne ki kaamna kar rahi thi,par bahut achcha laga padh kar,Nidhi apne jeevan ki uljhanon ko door rakhkar Ashutosh ki zindagi ke beete pannon ko khol rahi hai,Kashianth ji ke hriday ke udgaar bahut achche lage,aage ke pannon ke khulne ka intezar rahega,aapki wajah se hamein bhi Hindi mein kuch likhne ka mauka mila,agla bhaag shighra apekshit hai😊

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Bahut sunder Divya,bahut dard tha khas kar jab Nidhi apne marne ki kaamna kar rahi thi,par bahut achcha laga padh kar,Nidhi apne jeevan ki uljhanon ko door rakhkar Ashutosh ki zindagi ke beete pannon ko khol rahi hai,Kashianth ji ke hriday ke udgaar bahut achche lage,aage ke pannon ke khulne ka intezar rahega,aapki wajah se hamein bhi Hindi mein kuch likhne ka mauka mila,agla bhaag shighra apekshit hai😊

😭Yeh kahani aage kab badhegi ????????????