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Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
First i apologize for being late in giving the review😕
"Occasionally in life there are those moments of unutterable fulfillment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be articulated by the inaudible language of the heart."^^ Beautiful words di...😃A very endearing chapter Aazeen!
Thank you so much di...Ashu is the the magnificent central figure in this chap , wise and affectionate. an unforgettable character that travels beyond the usual questions of love and domestic comfort to explore the most adorable aspects of marital relationships.Indeed, this Ashu is a magnificent central character... Just like Nidhi was the central character in Jhubj, Ashu is in this MJS...😃... I don't know why, but, I search a real life partner somewhere in THIS Ashu... Although, at the whole, its too much of an expectation to have such an imaginary character... Yet, he's adorable...Ur clarity, the wallop this prose packs , the people in this story, so real, so true to themselves and to life.Deepali di, your command over the language is awesome... And again, I feel like my face is shining so bright, with all that love you've showered on me with these kind words... Thank you so much...😃
His respect for Females specially his Mother and wife... He had never let her touch his feet on any of the occasions, including Karwa Chauth...
For me this was the highlight of ur chap...clearly gives an insight to Ashu's character ...A man u can respect , a man you can look up to , not only thinks of his own feelings but he considers those of his wife too , someone who is able to successfully get through the "I" stage to encompass his wife as well is unselfish, as "I" becomes "we".
I don't know exactly, how long does it takes for a couple to get through the phase of "I" and come up with "We" But, surely, AshNi have come a long way... Abhi toh aapne sirf Ashu ka "We" phase dekha hai, soon you'll see Nidhi's "WE" phase, n all you can do is Admire this couple... I'm 100% sure, when it will come to remembering, an understanding, loving, caring and "Going to any extend for the sake of other" Ashni, you'll never forget this couple in this ff... i guarantee this... They are going to be such an awesome couple...The 'paneer tikka' excerpt n the way he takes care of Nidhi as they walk every step...very well written.
Thank you so much...!!!OMG , the end...Rohan n Mallika...why do all writers love to shock their readers?😆
If we writers dont give you readers some shock, and take you all for a Roller-coaster ride, then would you guys enjoy that monotonous ff? And most probably, most of you guys will run away... And, for my sake also, it gives us challenge to write better and something different...Once again sorry for the late reply n a lovely chapter!No issues di... You gave the review, is all it matters...😃 Thanx for such a wonderful review and response...
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