Tu Hi Tu..Thread 2 Chap 6 pg 101 Apr 22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ruchshah

Good Morn...Congrats on the brand new thread...👏here's hoping many new threads to this story!!!!!

Ok...begining for the very first scene...Armaan n Abhi conversatioon gives us a hint regarding Aditi's involvement in getting physical with Armaan(prob too soon to comment) also, Armaan's guilt gut-wrenching...Mallika is exactly same where she was in the opening episodes of the tv series but this time its Armaan n not Ashu!!!!So, Armaan too has internalised pain n regret just like Nidhi...him not opening to any discussion of past!

hiramana kaka seems to be cast as a guarding force in the new Mathur household

kind of...Mathur household or Nidhi...left to see...

😃 i think he'll bring a lot of peace n conflict resolution in Nidhi n Ashu's routine life!Pained to see Yog's shoock on Nidhi not having her husband's contact details!coming to the elephant in the room...their bedroom activity!

😆 elephant in the room...lovely way of putting it...it has indeed dominated the whole chapter

I think everyone will develop a varying amount of hatred for Ashu post this scene...n me not wanting to defend his act at all. This might be classified as marital rape, save if Nidhi had not participated willingly n not responded by her touch, her calling out his name, etc. But what disappointed me the most...was absence of Ashutosh's self-talk in this scenario (earlier updates showed his self talk on Nidhi will refuse marriage, or on her looks when she visits VM) but again this shows, that while the entire duration...his conscience was dead... conscience is which enables one to have a self-tallk or introspection...Ashu sold it to the devil!!!😡

@red...you really think so??

nidhi's feeling post intercourse(surely cant b defined as love making) was heart-breaking...her feeling of being used...Ashu not even considering her worthy to touch her or embrace her...i think no woman howsoever evil(as mallika in tv series) deserves this treatment, specially when a virgin!!!Sujaji...not take this criticism...as your criticism..infact its the opposite...your intended message is put across...in hatred for the act; makes u a versatile writer!!😃thank you...and yes, i do take it as an achievement...and i do understand what you are trying to say Ruchira..don't worry about offending me with your comments...

also, i totally condemn Ashu's public insult of Mr. n Mrs. Verma...i m sure his parents would have not appreciated this behavour of his...what happend 10 yrs bk , reflects only on their parenting, not on thier entire characters...(plus i am sure, Ashu n his parents would have not suffered a public shame for the incident...as compared to the Verma's...after all he was a man!!!)oh...this reminds me...wonder if Ashu used any protection or Nidhi's left to it on her own...i am sure this is not a healthy environment for a child to come into life.Thanks for PM!!! need to read it once more...

@red...uh huh..very valid question...not going to answer that now though...you are most welcome and thank YOU for the review

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

First congrats on ur new thread. thank you Deepali..

Second , how's ur headache , ready to take the outburst? 😆

oh yeah...i am ready...😆

Ok then here's my review:

U said shades of Grey NOT Black , to ye kya tha?How cld Ashu behave the way he did ? Sure Nidhi IS his wife bt he stil doesn't consider her one , then why? Or does he hv sme feelings for her? Or was it just a revenge on his part for what the three did nd poor Nidhi was the first to cross his way?Anyways it's hard to accept his behaviour whether out of anger or luv! 🤢

this IS grey Deepali...if it were black, he would have raped her or spent the night with another woman and told Nidhi about it...

So Nidhi is Silent , obedient nd ready to gv in n accept any crap enforced , simply out of luv but he just doesn't want to accept Her love? Atleast not so soon!

Ashu DRUNK!!! Hard to believe bt probably to behave the way he did with Nidhi he had to get drunk! I dnt think the betrayals cld make him stoop to the xtent he did w/o losing his mind.

😆

Ashu doesn't seem to hv lost his morals completely coz he respects HK( may b he has more role to play than just a caretaker) bt then why is he so harsh on Nidhi nd her father , is there more to what u hv gvn in ur previous chapters?chalo traces of our very own Ashu stil visible thou nothing compared(as yet) to all the other ashu's u hv portrayed!

I strongly believe u wld nvr butcher Ashu's character😲

thank you for that belief...please hang on to it...

Armaan's(with a lil tear nd wear) nd Anji's(as for now) characters intact!

Ashu's anger n hurt nd Nidhi's luv n pain r evident in this chap. Waiting to see what unfolds in the upcoming chapters...

Her eyes glaze over for a moment before blanking out all the pain that single comment has caused. She looks at him silently without betraying her bleeding heart by any word or action before silently getting up and bending down to pick up her discarded dress. The soft click indicates the bathroom door being closed and locked and that's when her legs finally give out on her and she collapses on the floor and closes her eyes as tears roll down her cheeks

Beautiful display of emotions...👏

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Thank u mam for the update 😳

but this is so horrible😡 as i cant read such horrible chap indeed 😭

i don't like to see ashu like this please make this change in the next chap at least 😭

other wise 'll may get a heart attack soon 😭

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Ok Review time...

Pehle toh Excellent yaar👏 the way u write and present the characters is just Fab⭐️...

coming to the chapter...yes it was a tsunami vo bhi itna bada ki mere hosh ud gaye...The way Ashu is behaving with Nidhi really was feeling sad for her...the way he keeps on taunting her 😭 for what happened that night...sach main Ashu jitna hurt Armaan aur Aditi ke behaviour se hua tha usse kahi zyaada Nidhi ke act se usse chot pohchi thi

Felt happy ki koi toh hain jo Nidhi ka swaagat karne ghar par tha,Thanx a ton to HK😊

but u know what ye Ashu kuch alag hain...ek taraf vo batata hain ki he is not cared about what Nidhi does par jab shaadi ke baad ye dono ghar aate and Nidhi tries to take her luggage ye banda uske bag utha leta hain.

I dont know main kya sochu par Ashu ka vo act itna pyaara tha!!!!!! kyuki agar vo chahata toh Nidhi aur uske bag ko chodkar ghar ke andar chala jaata par nahi he takes all the heavy ones and leave the small one for Nidhi...and agar ye Ashu itna cruel hota toh vo gruhpravesh ki aarti ke liya bhi nahi rukta but again i am speechless because he not only stops for Nidhi's aarti par Nidhi ke HK ke per chune par he smiles and does the same thing

Nidhi waiting for Ashu was so sweet😳 and u know vo jab call karti hain usse aur Ashu ki photo dekhti rehti hain the one where he is smiling,u wrote it so beautifully👏 👏 u have that magic ki chote se chote scene main bhi pyaar bhar dete ho😳...

Hey i loved that song 'sawar gayi'😳 ekdum perfect and Nidhi ke yeh feelings touched me alot

After this jo bhi hua no comments...but one thing is for sure my Ashu behaving like this!!!!!... kuch aur wajah hain...i mean he can't be so cold hearted!!!! Kuch toh aur wajah hain for him behaving like this...and i know u would tell only one thing ki 'Mithalee patience' hain na???? ya ya i am redy to wait kyuki I TRUST U and I TRUST UR WRITING...because if ur writing something there should be a solid reason behind it and i am ready to wait😊

Chalo ab jaldi se next chap post karo abhi abhi abhi...

Originally posted by: swati62

Wow. Waiting for the next chapter. For ppl like us u should post couple chapters together then we will not keep pestering u 😃

Originally posted by: aryanpp

OOFFF... please yur update is killing... reveal ashu's mind..., let the tense dissolve, make ashu realise nidhi's love with every single detail of the t-shirt she has, her belief for his love even in teens, her intentions to act that way at the age of 15 years, in such a manner that ashu's heart should bleed for behaving so badly with nidhi... please let the moment be heart rendering... for all we have experienced for nidhi... The only time I liked mallika from all the ff 's is in Teri Ore... other than that I just hatedthe character.. here also... aslong as she is away from ashni.. can not bother me... please give an early update with alll this...😭

Originally posted by: turags

two chapters together?? 😲 😆 thank you Swati ...i think i should hire someone to type for me then 😉😳

Originally posted by: aksuji

congratulations for new thread di...a new thread in just 3 chap...

I so happily and with all excitement sat down to read the update but very soon sadness dawned on me...now m really very very very curious that what has happened,what has nidhi done,how r the lives of arman,nidhu and ashutosh interconneccted,what revenge is ashu taking on nidhi,who is this additi., was additi ashutosh's gf who was separated from him by some act of nidhi?????????????????.😆😆...I would stop bcoz list of my questions is endless... DI I have missed the first chap for some reason and started following this story from second part so m going to read first chap to clear some of my doubts about additi...

.u r amazing as a writer di,,,,,,,,,hats off to u,,,,,,,

really feeling bad for nidhi who is such a good and innocent soul and m hell mad at ashutosh who is hell bent on making fun of their marriage and their relation...dont know till when nidhi will have to bear this pain and when will ashu come back to his senses and of course then his redemption would be something worth reading....I just hope that ashu realises soon before the damage becomes unrepairable...lo abhi to story start bhi nhi hui and m already excited about redemption...😆 😆 😆 😛

but as I love extreme stories m enjoying reading this one too...

thanku for keeping up with the promise of updating on wednesday...plz continue soon and plz plz plz tell when will be the next updaate so that I can wait patiently...plz di...

love u di🤗🤗

p.s. sorry it came out too long...plz bear with me

*edited*

ok di read the first chap and most of my doubts about additi and this strangled relation between armaan-ashutosh-nidhi have been cleared although a few are still hanging in the air and will get cleared only with further advance of this plot...😊

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

I loved it...you have outdone yourself in writing emotional scenes...

thank you Vidisha..

Felt sorry for Nidhi and sorrier for Ashu...he was a normal, fun loving guy but a series of betrayal have made him snap at anyone who tries to care for him...the cure for his disease is unconditional and pure love which Nidhi is more than ready to shower on him...but he doesn't see it so...

correct...

How many girls would dare to own up their sleazy mistake in order to save their man...Nidhi did it without worrying about the hypocritical society's reaction...her reputation has remained stained ever since...Yog supported her daughter ...how many Dads would put their daughter's honour at stake in order to save a friend's son from being unfairly convicted...why doesn't Ashu see things from this point of view...? He should give Yog some credit for this ..shouldn't he?Why does he only see Nidhi's betrayal.

if he sees all this in the first glance, how would i get to show his grey shades??😳😉

Nidhi is paying for her mistake every single day but Ashu will be ashamed of himself when he realises the purity of Nidhi's love and his beastly behaviour...how will he pay for his sins then?? Will he degrade himself further by cheating on Nidhi...will he keep a mistress...Nidhi will not tolerate it for sure...she can be docile in other matters but sharing her huz with someone else is a different matter altogether.

mistress?? you really are expecting that in this FF??

Though he had lost faith in love, he treated his casual partner well( as seen in first chapter)...what made him treat his wife as a sex toy??? those taunts...they just pierce the heart...Ashu is full of bitterness...his comments are acidic. You have sketched his character very well...Ashu isn't a model lover( at least till now) and you have taken a bold step by writing such a hard hitting story.

thats exactly how i wanted to make him...NOT a model lover / husband...and yes, its a bold storyline...hope i am alive to post the rest of the story...thank God the readers don't know my home address...😆

This is probably the longest comment that I have ever posted in your thread. I had never planned to make it this big...but I just loved the way you have written about love, hurt and betrayal.

indeed it is...i was like.. when i saw your name and the length of the comment...thank you Vidisha...🤗

Ashu is flawed...and the charm of the story lies there👏

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

it is a good siggy...and my answer is Turags killed Aditi.so handcuff her