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parmarA thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
I read all the chap at one seat.And i am sorry but don't understand what to comment?In first chap,Nidhi and her friends and then that Aditi incident.Really teenagers don't have manners or responsibilities.And then ashu and nidhii's marriage and that's to in sudden.I am here thinking that ashutosh is so proudy here.A real heartstone.He never cares for nidhi.I am also thinking that he is taking revenge on Nidhi?and what he done on SR.Oh my god!totally junglee.But i know you will all settled down and will give U-turn to your story.Sorry for late comment.And Congo for new thread.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congradulations on new thread 😃

I got up at 8 and read your chapter and you were right , after reading ..i was jumping on my bed like restless kitten ...I was so agitated , angry , hurt with Ashu's behaviour ... 😭😭

In Abhi and Armaan 's convo , Abhi tell "Aditi should have been ashamed not you armaan !!!" what does it mean ?? ...Wondering what happened exactly


As Armaan said , yes Nidhi changed a lot ...from happy chirpy girl to someone who mastered all tactics to hide her emotions and Ashu ...looks like he just want to hurt anyone who come on his way , he just want inflict that hurt which everyone gave him ...and Poor nidhi , she is the only one right now , who is getting complete blow of it...I just wish , he does not break her so much with his words that when time comes he cannot take it back ...

So Hk came over to stay at Nidhi's place, glad that Ashu agreed

Tiger! I never thought this day would come..you know! (her eyes turn soft and dreamy and she rubs her cheek over the pillow) but that didn't stop me from dreaming. I never had any hopes but could never control my dreams. And it was always you in them..always.

This girl , she loved him without any expectation , gave herself completely to him ...she is putting up with his rude behavior silently , .i don't know till when she can put up with this ….!! Till when it is going to be like this ???😕

Whatever happened between them ...it was plain Lust , there wasn't any love from Ashu's side ...As nidhi tell in the end ..yes indeed he was like her husband and she was his wife all through it ..and nothing else ...and what is the need to be so sarcastic 24*7 , I am sorry ...i am just angry with this Ashu, his comment after make out session ..nearly killed me ...poor nidhi, he is hurting her …making her feel so guilty , for one stupid mistake of hers which she committed 10 yrs back...does she really deserve this ?? I doubt...!!

In whole chapter, I was searching for a glimpse of tiger but I found nowhere..All I found was this Ashu ...who is so bitter and ruthless...I don't know where it will take them !!

But My heart is on fire 😭😭

Fantastic writing👏👏👏…….you are leaving us in so many cross road and we just not sure which road you are going to take next?? …I am all curious, desperate for next part ….Please bring it on 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good Morn...Congrats on the brand new thread...👏here's hoping many new threads to this story!!!!!

Ok...begining for the very first scene...Armaan n Abhi conversatioon gives us a hint regarding Aditi's involvement in getting physical with Armaan(prob too soon to comment) also, Armaan's guilt gut-wrenching...Mallika is exactly same where she was in the opening episodes of the tv series but this time its Armaan n not Ashu!!!!So, Armaan too has internalised pain n regret just like Nidhi...him not opening to any discussion of past!hiramana kaka seems to be cast as a guarding force in the new Mathur household😃 i think he'll bring a lot of peace n conflict resolution in Nidhi n Ashu's routine life!Pained to see Yog's shoock on Nidhi not having her husband's contact details!coming to the elephant in the room...their bedroom activity! I think everyone will develop a varying amount of hatred for Ashu post this scene...n me not wanting to defend his act at all. This might be classified as marital rape, save if Nidhi had not participated willingly n not responded by her touch, her calling out his name, etc. But what disappointed me the most...was absence of Ashutosh's self-talk in this scenario (earlier updates showed his self talk on Nidhi will refuse marriage, or on her looks when she visits VM) but again this shows, that while the entire duration...his conscience was dead... conscience is which enables one to have a self-tallk or introspection...Ashu sold it to the devil!!!😡nidhi's feeling post intercourse(surely cant b defined as love making) was heart-breaking...her feeling of being used...Ashu not even considering her worthy to touch her or embrace her...i think no woman howsoever evil(as mallika in tv series) deserves this treatment, specially when a virgin!!!Sujaji...not take this criticism...as your criticism..infact its the opposite...your intended message is put across...in hatred for the act; makes u a versatile writer!!😃also, i totally condemn Ashu's public insult of Mr. n Mrs. Verma...i m sure his parents would have not appreciated this behavour of his...what happend 10 yrs bk , reflects only on their parenting, not on thier entire characters...(plus i am sure, Ashu n his parents would have not suffered a public shame for the incident...as compared to the Verma's...after all he was a man!!!)oh...this reminds me...wonder if Ashu used any protection or Nidhi's left to it on her own...i am sure this is not a healthy environment for a child to come into life.Thanks for PM!!! need to read it once more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First congrats on ur new thread.
Second , how's ur headache , ready to take the outburst? 😆
Ok then here's my review:
U said shades of Grey NOT Black , to ye kya tha?How cld Ashu behave the way he did ? Sure Nidhi IS his wife bt he stil doesn't consider her one , then why? Or does he hv sme feelings for her? Or was it just a revenge on his part for what the three did nd poor Nidhi was the first to cross his way?Anyways it's hard to accept his behaviour whether out of anger or luv! 🤢


So Nidhi is Silent , obedient nd ready to gv in n accept any crap enforced , simply out of luv but he just doesn't want to accept Her love? Atleast not so soon!

Ashu DRUNK!!! Hard to believe bt probably to behave the way he did with Nidhi he had to get drunk! I dnt think the betrayals cld make him stoop to the xtent he did w/o losing his mind.

Ashu doesn't seem to hv lost his morals completely coz he respects HK( may b he has more role to play than just a caretaker) bt then why is he so harsh on Nidhi nd her father , is there more to what u hv gvn in ur previous chapters?chalo traces of our very own Ashu stil visible thou nothing compared(as yet) to all the other ashu's u hv portrayed!

I strongly believe u wld nvr butcher Ashu's character😲

Armaan's(with a lil tear nd wear) nd Anji's(as for now) characters intact!

Ashu's anger n hurt nd Nidhi's luv n pain r evident in this chap. Waiting to see what unfolds in the upcoming chapters...

Her eyes glaze over for a moment before blanking out all the pain that single comment has caused. She looks at him silently without betraying her bleeding heart by any word or action before silently getting up and bending down to pick up her discarded dress. The soft click indicates the bathroom door being closed and locked and that's when her legs finally give out on her and she collapses on the floor and closes her eyes as tears roll down her cheeks
Beautiful display of emotions...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u mam for the update 😳

but this is so horrible😡 as i cant read such horrible chap indeed 😭

i don't like to see ashu like this please make this change in the next chap at least 😭

other wise 'll may get a heart attack soon 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok Review time...
Pehle toh Excellent yaar👏 the way u write and present the characters is just Fab⭐️...
coming to the chapter...yes it was a tsunami vo bhi itna bada ki mere hosh ud gaye...The way Ashu is behaving with Nidhi really was feeling sad for her...the way he keeps on taunting her 😭 for what happened that night...sach main Ashu jitna hurt Armaan aur Aditi ke behaviour se hua tha usse kahi zyaada Nidhi ke act se usse chot pohchi thi

Felt happy ki koi toh hain jo Nidhi ka swaagat karne ghar par tha,Thanx a ton to HK😊
but u know what ye Ashu kuch alag hain...ek taraf vo batata hain ki he is not cared about what Nidhi does par jab shaadi ke baad ye dono ghar aate and Nidhi tries to take her luggage ye banda uske bag utha leta hain.

I dont know main kya sochu par Ashu ka vo act itna pyaara tha!!!!!! kyuki agar vo chahata toh Nidhi aur uske bag ko chodkar ghar ke andar chala jaata par nahi he takes all the heavy ones and leave the small one for Nidhi...and agar ye Ashu itna cruel hota toh vo gruhpravesh ki aarti ke liya bhi nahi rukta but again i am speechless because he not only stops for Nidhi's aarti par Nidhi ke HK ke per chune par he smiles and does the same thing

Nidhi waiting for Ashu was so sweet😳 and u know vo jab call karti hain usse aur Ashu ki photo dekhti rehti hain the one where he is smiling,u wrote it so beautifully👏 👏 u have that magic ki chote se chote scene main bhi pyaar bhar dete ho😳...

Hey i loved that song 'sawar gayi'😳 ekdum perfect and Nidhi ke yeh feelings touched me alot

Nidhi looks at her henna covered palms and the bangles adorning both her hands. A small "A" had been inscribed into the middle of it and she had made sure no one would even notice it. The only jewellery around her neck is her mangalsutra. Her gaze falls on the sindoor box on the dressing table. With a tiny smile, she opens it and makes sure her maang sindoor is clear and visible. A slight lipgloss covers her lips and she brushes her loose left out hair until it shines. Taking a step back, she looks at herself critically in the mirror. How do I look? Will his eyes light up when he sees me waiting for him like this? Is this too much? Did I go overboard? She quickly goes back to the gift box and pulls out the silk robe that goes along with the negligee and knots it around her waist. There! That's better! She hugs herself and does a small twirl before coming and sitting on the huge king size bed. Her fingers run over the white bedspread with tiny blue and pink flowers on it and she hugs a pillow and closes her eyes on a blissful sigh. Tiger! I never thought this day would come..you know! (her eyes turn soft and dreamy and she rubs her cheek over the pillow) but that didn't stop me from dreaming. I never had any hopes but could never control my dreams. And it was always you in them..always.


After this jo bhi hua no comments...but one thing is for sure my Ashu behaving like this!!!!!... kuch aur wajah hain...i mean he can't be so cold hearted!!!! Kuch toh aur wajah hain for him behaving like this...and i know u would tell only one thing ki 'Mithalee patience' hain na???? ya ya i am redy to wait kyuki I TRUST U and I TRUST UR WRITING...because if ur writing something there should be a solid reason behind it and i am ready to wait😊

Chalo ab jaldi se next chap post karo abhi abhi abhi...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chalo ab jaldi se next chap post karo abhi abhi abhi
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Tsunami digest ho Gaya?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Chalo ab jaldi se next chap post karo abhi abhi abhi

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Tsunami digest ho Gaya?

ofcourse yaar!!! Main kamzor nahi hoon 😊 just waiting to know more about my Ashu in Tu hi Tu 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow. Waiting for the next chapter. For ppl like us u should post couple chapters together then we will not keep pestering u 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Finally the other two important characters, Rohan and Nidhi's mother have entered. I wanted to ask you if Ashu's parents died in an accident and you revealed that already.

yeah...i didn't want to dump too much info in one chapter so have split it up in various chapters

But first, Nidhi's self-thoughts were very explanatory of her depth of love for Ashu. So my guess that it was always love from Nidhi's side is right.

Other than Anji no one knows about this. And yes, it is also clear that Nidhi is punishing herself, has taken the entire blame for Ashu's desertion on her head. And to hear Ashu verbalize what she had been feeling all these years would have been worse than any punishment. And the little episode with the t-shirt, why do I get the feeling that one day Anji is going to open Ashu's eyes by showing him that t-shirt... Anji is the only one to know Nidhi's true feelings, though she seems to be hiding that knowledge from Nidhi herself. She also seems to be hiding Rohan's true feelings from Nidhi. That slight pause was probably that, isn't it?
@ red..

But Rohan, has he suppressed his love as well understanding thatit will never be so for Nidhi? Another question now?

So how long is it going to take for Nidhi now to make in-roads into Ashu's heart? How long before Ashu accepts her and forgives her willingly? If he does, he may recognize the fact that it was Nidhi's foolish, thoughtless gesture that probably saved him from prison on murder charges...if he does he may realize that Nidhi could have kept quiet rather than expose herself to everyone's ridicule, which she did...if he does he may question the true motive behind Nidhi's actions 10 years ago and may realize her love... sigh!

IF IF IF IF...so many IFs...lets see how those IFs would turn to FINALLY!!

This brings me to her parents, I feel even they have not helped Nidhi overcome anything. They still feel responsible and openly show guilt for Nidhi's actions... and from her mother's words it seems as if they have been prey to a lot of gossip. It also seems as if the gossip has affected any marriage prospects for Nidhi. Is that why they want to right the wrong...its not only for Ashu but also to get Nidhi married? Or was there some talk regarding this between Ashu's and Nidhi's parents before their sudden death? Why does her mom feel they have no choice? Is it only because of the business? So more questions here as well...
@ red...may be..

The grown up Anji seems to put her foot into everything...wants to talk before she thinks! She is letting out some secrets that Ashu could use against Nidhi to hurt her, but at the same time she seems capable of blasting Ashu if things get out of hand with his attitude. Which will it be ultimately?
😆 wait n watch...

Ashu for his part is on mission 'annoy/ hurt Nidhi' but so far all he has got is a stoic quietness/ acceptance from her. She has hidden herself very well, has not taken the bait as yet!

The only place that revealed some of her true self was in the decorated house. And in the selection of photos, seem to imply that Nidhi knows Ashu too well, more than what he thinks. So he will have to be careful if he wants to keep this a strictly business affair... I also suspect the only place and time Nidhi will even react is when they get intimate...then again she will definitely not reveal her true feelings of love but she will certainly show to him that beneath all that ice lies a fiery, passionate woman. Since Ashu has already declared they will sleep together, I am assuming this angle, hope I am right?? 😳
oh yeah you are right...and that has come out in chapter 4 so i am giving you a straight answer here...for NIdhi, the physical act in the darkness is the only way she can openly express her feelings towards him...

Armaan is also complex here... he is giving Ashu all this time hoping Ashu will listen to him. He is waiting for Ashu's forgiveness. So he has hidden this from Mallika and she is waiting for the day when she will marry Armaan and when he will let her into his heart completely. But it seems he is not in a live-in relation.

no. no live in relation here...

Abhi, as I mentioned in chap 1 review is still a loose cannon for me... he could have very well done the murder considering that when Aditi was murdered non was aware about the Armaan connection. And at that time Abhi felt Ashu and his parents to be like family and out of rage for having hurt his pseudo parents and brother he could have done it... or maybe her father considering he was the one who implicated Ashu or like I mentioned it could have been a random person... you know shaadi ka ghar, lots of money, jewels, etc, must have thought of robbery but things went bad...

hmmm...you seriously should participate in the betting game that Mudra has started...

Interestingly, at this point in the story no one is thinking of the murder, that seems to be a closed case. So how is it going to come to life once more? I'm pretty certain Rohan will investigate but what will inspire him to do that... wonder how you are going to connect that into the scheme of things once more?

😆 patience patience...lets take one thing at a time...

Finally what will be the extent to which Ashu will go and Nidhi will bear before things come to a head?? So some more questions...phew! Now, waiting, waiting for more...

And I am glad I got this in before your next chapter! 😆 And I did write in this thread coz it was for chapter 3, hope you do not mind! 😳

of course i don't mind...but hope you don't mind that my reply to your comment is in the new thread. i didn't want any one to miss reading this one...

thanks Aarti...🤗

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