OS# String of My Heart!, part-2,pg 7 - Page 8

Originally posted by: saibanu

Let me know , when you are free ,.I will PM you ...its been while since we talked 😊

Originally posted by: pansy123

lovely Ena! Itz so beautiful. Loved every bit of it. Nidhi's nostalgia was awesome.

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thank you for that..😊

sorry buddy.. really caught up in work.. cudnt manage today.. c if i cud manage in nite!

Originally posted by: Ena292

part-2

--okay the nxt destination is ur OS!😳 Gosh v cud alot a day for everyone to upload.. it wud b easier to follow up!😆😆 without making anyone to feel bad with obvious time and mood constraints tht helds us up in real life!😳

Life is defined by the many moments it is comprised of... Those moments are fleeting, and quickly become nothing more than an experienced sensation and a memory. For that one fleeting moment, you can fall apart, you can change the course of your life; you could even fall in love... Once those moments are put together in your memory they become flashes of pain or joy; they are just little blips on the timeline of your life... People search their entire lives for moments of happiness and try to make the little pieces all fit properly into the puzzle...

--👏its deep philosophical and very romantically put forth!

Nidhi don't want the moments she spend with ashu to become nothing more than a fading memory. She wants to remember all of the times she felt herself fall deeper in love. She want to remember every ounce of joy and the exact second when she looked at him and she just "knew".

They were standing in the woods by the edge of a stream... The sunlight trickles down through leaves and branches and reflects rainbows across the water like a prism... The air was warm but electric, charged with the approaching storm. Nidhi couldn't look away from his eyes and the fire of passion she saw inside them while he talk... She would do anything to keep that light alive. Ashu moved behind her and wrap his arms around her... His breath in her ear gives goose bumps on her skin. She shared her secrets with him; he shared his secrets with her. Nidhi could feel her heart beating so loudly in her chest; it's a wonder he couldn't hear it... She never want to leave this place. This moment was too short; this is falling in love with him.

this is good bt felt u cud've made this scene come alive with some dailogues as well.. it cud've made thr luv more perceptive.. it is palpable.. bt it cud've given it an edge.. jst my POV!😳 Bt i luv this idea of silent solid luv.. its rare tht v c such thing in today's world or even cinema!

They were in his car, going back to the place they used to meet--the dargah!!! Tired of secrets and drained from the complications of all of this, she felt a little out of place and unfocused...

Wat secrets?🤔

A storm is rolling in, the smell of rain lingers heavily in the air... He park the car in a small empty parking lot and it begins to rain. She watched the streams of rain trickle down the window and she ponder the idea of "paths" in life.(???) Needing to ease the tension she decide to get out and step into the rain.

I m clearly not getting her uneasiness!

It is cold against her skin. Her sun dress immediately becomes saturated and clings to her making it hard to move. Nidhi kicked off her high heels and spin in the middle of the road. spin until she was dizzy, nidhi wanted to run until they were free. Somehow, just ashu and nidhi. She felt freedom, found joy.

I cud sense tht she wanted to b free from keeping thr luv a secret from everyone..she wanted to b able to declare it openly and whole heartedly.. am i interpreting correctly?

He held her close, so warm against her soaking wet clothes, and he kissed her so deeply. They laugh and dance in that rain. This moment was too short; this is falling in love with him.

luved this scene.. displays intensity of thr luv.. in such few words!😳

They were on a bike, driving on the highway in the late afternoon. Nidhi loved the closeness she felt to him. She reached up to hold onto him tighter, closing her hands on his sides like her life depended on never letting him go... She felt the wind bend around them and wrap her up in its arms, brushing her skin with pockets of warmth and coolness, causing chills to go down her spine until she shudder... Nidhi watched the road but her mind travels elsewhere, reminiscing their past trips and experiences, flipping through photos in her mind of all the times they had laughed and learned and loved. The sun begins to set over the mountains and it is one of the most beautiful sights she had ever seen. She cling harder to him as she watch God's daylight finale in awe. The sky becomes brightly lit with purples and pinks and shades of orange as the sun slowly sinks behind the mountains; it is a truly remarkable sight. She feel whole; she felt like she could truly be happy like this for the rest of her life. This moment is too short, but it's the moment she "knew"; this is falling in love with him.

luved the sunset scene immensely..it well protrays how she fell in luv with him.. bt i felt Ashu was missing in this scene..

Everyday she dreamt...dream with him...all her dream started with Ashu and ends with him also...

Days passed--6 long month passed by!!

But that cheerpy nidhi was lost ...she lost her happiness...her smile...her familly...friends...even she lost herself also!!!

That day of Ashu's accident...she left everything...without the moment she lived with ashu!!!

All her dreams were shattered...though she was totally unware with the fact that...far from her someone close to her heart waiting for her ...counting every second!!!!

And that was no one but ashutosh!!!
The body which was identified as his...actually damaged greatly...and that wasn't his but the man he gave lift that day!!!

His car hitted the tree and roled ...it was damaged greatly...and the man was spot dead...everyone thought that it was his body...but the destiny had something else destined for that two lovers!!!

Grt way to make the dead come alive!! and more realistic..👏 Ekta shud learn ur ways!😆

He was unconcious for about two days...and some villagers saved him...and took him with them!!!

After regain consious...he first of all want to see his nidhi's face...he thanked god for giving him second life that can he lived with his nidhi... But...

But the destiny played a brutal game...though he regain life...but lost his reason to live...he lost his nidhi...his love!!!

--so is Nidhi lost.. does she really no one else in her life.. has she gone somewher he doesnt know?

Ashu screamed...cried...he got nightmare every night...thought of something bad about her killed him inside everytime!!!
But he knew if he was alive...then nidhi must be some where in this world exist...and waiting for him..
And now his work was to find her as soon as possible...

--- Kaha ho tum, Nidhi??!!
He whispers holding her picture close to his heart!!!

A loanly tear drops fall from his eye...when his cell rings loudly...!!

--want to know wer he is right now! Guess he is well and fine!

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The bus was late when it started to rain. The first drops dropped not like droplets at all, but like the innards of water balloons bursting one by one upon the pavement. A minute later, the dark cloud above released its later trap door and the flash flood had begun.

Nidhi had been waiting beside a guy, wearing a pearl-colored blouse which appeared so delicate that someone doubted it could withstand the kiss of the summer sun let alone the ravaging of a spring rain. The guy made no hesitation, stretching his umbrella over her body before the storm could impact its worst.

"Thank you, but I don't need it.!!," she said without looking at him "I forgot mine at home."
but he continued holding it ...and then nidhi was expressionless...she didn't care about anyone's presence anymore!
The rain fell harder and before long it seemed as if the two of them stood alone within a tube of glass while the city filled around them like an aquarium. For seven minutes in all, they shared the same red canopy, hesitate within the same breathless humidity, and excused themselves with each accidental glance of their shoulders. But in that mean time she didn't look at him at once!

--who is this guy!!!! seriously!!

When the bus arrived, nidhi stood up to catch the bus...just then the guy held her hand from behind!!!

She was surprised as well as schoked...bcs she recognised the touch...she recognised her Ashu's touch!!!

Whoooaaa!!!😲

She didn't turn...actually didn't dare to turn...she afraid if it was again just a dream of her!!!

awww...

Tears were there in her eyes...when she heard him saying ---hey, doc!! murke dekhoge nehin????

i know this makes one feel one is going insane..!! its creepy in a way!😆

She closed her eyes as if wants to feel his voice...she realized how she missed his" hey,doc"
Her body tremble...when he pulled her towards his hard chest...

he is making her go crazy.. agar main Nidhi ki jagah hoti to ek thapad de deti.. itne time khade hokar kya kar raha tha.. ye to Nidhi ko heart attack dilwane ki tayaari main hai!😆

She turned...her eyes were still closed...Ashu holds her face in his palm...tenderly kissed her closed eyes...just when she opened them...with immense love in them...

openly PDA.. he hehe..chalo Nidhi cudnt get heartattack now.. yes.. he is in his all flesh-and-blood standing right infront of her.. and kissing her..!😳

She holds his collar tightly...wanted to tell him so many things...but couldn't utter a word...just stared at him with tear filled eyes!!!

bola na main hoti to thapad de deti!😆

She raised her hands to touch him...and then the thundered roared...she closed her eyes...thinking that may be he will again disapear...but this time her trembled body was held by a strong pair of hands...her love...her Ashu!!!

--Whoosh!

They hugged tightly...living all those moments that they dreamt each day...forgetting all nightmares!!

The strings of their heart once again joined...and this time forever!!!!

Grt way to end this OS.. or is it an end.. v wud obviously want more!!!😳

Originally posted by: achiever

ur way of seeing things, looking at world and perceiving it is very different.. i like it!

-••••thank u!!!

btw, jst out of curiosity.. how old r u?

-•••• 21 years old i am!!

u have oddles of talent to b a very good and diffrnt writer! U have a distinct style thts very dffrnt from others!😳

And fillhal I am reading ur Ss... Will give my review after finishing it...xm hain Sunday ko...to shayad thoda late ho jao ...

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Ena agla update kab milega??