OS - Astitva - Page 8

Originally posted by: turags

thank you.

the serial about doctors had quite a few medical blunders and I am glad i could at least correct this one in our minds.

First time I am seeing your comment. Do you read my stories or just this one??

i do read your totally awesome stories and i believe i have read all of them except your recent OS's.. i am mostly a silent reader.. 😳 n some short phases of commenting with long phases of just reading..😳😳

Originally posted by: dancydreamer

i do read your totally awesome stories and i believe i have read all of them except your recent OS's.. i am mostly a silent reader.. 😳 n some short phases of commenting with long phases of just reading..😳😳

Originally posted by: sss97

I love the Mallika's of your FF's and Os

You always have Mallika in a positive role in your writing's. I wish that the Cv's too could have changed her into a good person after her return instead of retaining her as an antagonist.

But hats off to your OS, it has made my day bright.

Thanks once again and please do continue after the show ends.

Looking forward for your future FF's and OS's.

Swathi 👏

OMG... Initial paragraphs literally scared me as I thought what if Nidhi is thinking all this as an abused woman but then it came out to be Dr. Mallika... Nice story- a totally different angle to view at things from Mallika 's eyes & greatest thing is she isnt a vamp here but a helpless woman who tries to protect another woman thinking her to be as an abused woman also. But how she fails to interpret Ashutosh & Nidhi's love for each other at all these times & recalls everything later is really beautifully narrated. Very good OS!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: ttrocks

OMG... Initial paragraphs literally scared me as I thought what if Nidhi is thinking all this as an abused woman but then it came out to be Dr. Mallika... Nice story- a totally different angle to view at things from Mallika 's eyes & greatest thing is she isnt a vamp here but a helpless woman who tries to protect another woman thinking her to be as an abused woman also. But how she fails to interpret Ashutosh & Nidhi's love for each other at all these times & recalls everything later is really beautifully narrated. Very good OS!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: turags

thank you Tupu...

this OS is kind of my own interpretation of how i think an abused woman would actually react in such a situation. glad you like it.😃

Yeah, I truly loved it as I believe that in ktlk, Mallika's character was done total injustice & turned into completely negative character but this character actually had equal scope of development as a complex, layerd personality woman just like the man Dr. Ashutosh... This was really a nice way to not only redeem her but also to provide reasoning for her... I too believe that DV abused woman would be thankful to her saviour always as u have depicted but never behave like the way she did in ktlk... The same goes with character khushi also. Dunno why mallu, khushi, divya all ended up resenting Nidhi for having Dr. Ashutosh as hubby... Anyways, honestly speaking it was tough to visualize mallu in this goody goody avatar in ur OS coz I recalled every incident from show with negative mallu, but had had a great feeling of relief & contentment when I finished reading this OS. Such a good attempt to cover for Mallu by reworking her story!! Hats off to the writer in U Sujathadi!! 🤗

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Yeah, I truly loved it as I believe that in ktlk, Mallika's character was done total injustice & turned into completely negative character but this character actually had equal scope of development as a complex, layerd personality woman just like the man Dr. Ashutosh... This was really a nice way to not only redeem her but also to provide reasoning for her... I too believe that DV abused woman would be thankful to her saviour always as u have depicted but never behave like the way she did in ktlk... The same goes with character khushi also. Dunno why mallu, khushi, divya all ended up resenting Nidhi for having Dr. Ashutosh as hubby... Anyways, honestly speaking it was tough to visualize mallu in this goody goody avatar in ur OS coz I recalled every incident from show with negative mallu, but had had a great feeling of relief & contentment when I finished reading this OS. Such a good attempt to cover for Mallu by reworking her story!! Hats off to the writer in U Sujathadi!! 🤗

Suja Dear, you have succeeded in converting the most hated character in the show to a victim of

Originally posted by: neelimapn4

Suja Dear, you have succeeded in converting the most hated character in the show to a victim of

her own obsession and garnering our sympathy and empathy towards her..

Eversince you portrayed her as a normal, friendly person in Teri Ore, my outlook towards her has

changed...

I admire your ability to interpret complexities of human nature and behaviour.

Now... I would like to have your AshNi Special..