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Posted: 12 years ago
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New reader around... 😊
Must say Well done with the plot.. 👏 Mixed emotions of happiness and sadness is included perfectly leaving readers no choice to come to a conclusion right away. it gives gud sense of imagination while reading it but leaves me with no answer for many questions which i wonder in my mind at the moment... waiting to see 2nd part of the story soon. hope it resolves all my unanswered queries. keep up the gud work:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you swati 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: oaz30

Would second Suja on that thus better not be a single part but maaan what a bang start... The scene is set so let the play begin


Thank you so much , its not going to be single update ...Already started writing , I will try to give by today 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.. Ashu is a dedicated doctor.. v tend to underestimate thr hardwork.. bt i guess its the most toughest profession in this world.. and highly estmeed..
I luved the way u described the new baby.. aww.. i find it so very cute.. i luv a new born baby.. thr so tiny.. tiny hands.. tiny feet.. soft skin.. pink color.. aww.. thy r very cute.. especially thr cute cry.. 😆
Nidhi has cherophobia..aww thts sad! Luks like she needs something .. an anchor to stabilize her life.. wer she can perhaps find tht permanent and "real" happiness!
Rohan's story is any girl's story.. v rely so much on instincts and u r rite.. it never fails u.. I keep on saying my hubby.. woman have sixth sense.. he doesnt agree bt wen he is in real dbt he turns to my gut feeling.. tho he is a highly rational man and believes in logical deductions!😆😆😆 and needless to say.. i m rite in the end!😆😆😆😆😆
bt aw.. the way he broke up.. he deserves pushing over the cliff!!!!😡😡😡
so is Ashutosh an orphan? Well i guess so! Sad bt again its one thng tht has become an intergral part of any of Ashutosh's character....
Stocholm syndrome an intrsting syndrome.. reminds me one of my fav bond movies!😉.. so is Armaan a psychologist.. will he play a part in Ashu-Nidhi's story? Hmm.. i think he is going to help out Nidhi! I think it mite b wat Nidhi mite b feeling towards Rohan aftr brkup!🤔 Reasoning out his infidelity!
So Ashu loved Nidhi.. bt thn wat happened.. did he not get chance to confess and make those wonderful babies with her..
I think Nidhi has some serious issues still with Rohan.. she is not able to accept tht he betrayed.. bt i think merely thinking abt Ashu has change the winds..
the way thy Ashu gave her familiar innocent affectionate hug.. my gut feeling says Nidhi was Ashu's ward!
Am I rite?
bt thn y wer thy in no contact for all these years.. was he jst her mentor/teacher/ward and thn thy drifted apart.. or is Ashu in someway related to Nidhi's family and hence this familarity and for tht matter a close relation it seems!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: achiever

OMG , so many questions 😲😆😆



Wow.. Ashu is a dedicated doctor.. v tend to underestimate thr hardwork.. bt i guess its the most toughest profession in this world.. and highly estmeed..

yes , very true ..very toughest and highly esteemed ...😃
I luved the way u described the new baby.. aww.. i find it so very cute.. i luv a new born baby.. thr so tiny.. tiny hands.. tiny feet.. soft skin.. pink color.. aww.. thy r very cute.. especially thr cute cry.. 😆

I love kids , especially new born baby ...Aww , you don't have any idea .. how much i used to circle around my nephew when he was born ..I used to act like mother hen 😉😆
Nidhi has cherophobia..aww thts sad! Luks like she needs something .. an anchor to stabilize her life.. wer she can perhaps find tht permanent and "real" happiness!

She does not have "cherophobia" , she feel she has it after spending years with confused Rohan ...She will be fine when she clear out her head 😉
Rohan's story is any girl's story.. v rely so much on instincts and u r rite.. it never fails u.. I keep on saying my hubby.. woman have sixth sense.. he doesnt agree bt wen he is in real dbt he turns to my gut feeling.. tho he is a highly rational man and believes in logical deductions!😆😆😆 and needless to say.. i m rite in the end!😆

@Bold ..So true 😆😆
bt aw.. the way he broke up.. he deserves pushing over the cliff!!!!😡😡😡

Good na , rohan ne nahi choda hoga tho Nidhi Ashu ko kaise milti ...Now Ashu ka ratsa wsaaf hogaya 😆
so is Ashutosh an orphan? Well i guess so! Sad bt again its one thng tht has become an intergral part of any of Ashutosh's character....

You will come to know about him in next chapter ...😉
Stocholm syndrome an intrsting syndrome.. reminds me one of my fav bond movies!😉.. so is Armaan a psychologist.. will he play a part in Ashu-Nidhi's story? Hmm.. i think he is going to help out Nidhi! I think it mite b wat Nidhi mite b feeling towards Rohan aftr brkup!🤔 Reasoning out his infidelity!

Armaan is not going to play any major role and coming to Nidhi , she will understand and move on when time comes ...At right moment 😃
So Ashu loved Nidhi.. bt thn wat happened.. did he not get chance to confess and make those wonderful babies with her..

You have to wait a bit to what exactly happened 😉
I think Nidhi has some serious issues still with Rohan.. she is not able to accept tht he betrayed.. bt i think merely thinking abt Ashu has change the winds..

She already accepted things , Thats why she told..sitting here far away from him , i am able to look beyond him ...@Bold ..you got it 😉
the way thy Ashu gave her familiar innocent affectionate hug.. my gut feeling says Nidhi was Ashu's ward!

You will come to know about all of it in next chapter 😉
Am I rite?
bt thn y wer thy in no contact for all these years.. was he jst her mentor/teacher/ward and thn thy drifted apart.. or is Ashu in someway related to Nidhi's family and hence this familarity and for tht matter a close relation it seems!
Thank you so much for such wonderful review ..Manisha 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: steve10210

New reader around... 😊

I know who this new reader is ...Mr Steve 😉😆

Must say Well done with the plot.. 👏 Mixed emotions of happiness and sadness is included perfectly leaving readers no choice to come to a conclusion right away. it gives gud sense of imagination while reading it but leaves me with no answer for many questions which i wonder in my mind at the moment... waiting to see 2nd part of the story soon. hope it resolves all my unanswered queries. keep up the gud work:)

Thank you Steve ji for liking my OS , I am really glad ...coming to your Questions , well you will get your answers for few of it in next chapter ....😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi sai...It was an superb update it is totally a different story u always come with a different concept... plz contineou soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: syedzoya

Hi sai...It was an superb update it is totally a different story u always come with a different concept... plz contineou soon


Thank you so much Syedzoya 😃

I wanted to give next chapter by today but really caught with so much work ...Kuch nahi likha aaj 😔, I will try to give by tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Bega kodi...yesthu kaayisuthira?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Bega kodi...yesthu kaayisuthira?😭


Ayyo sorry , I am getting very little time to write ...As I joined a part time job and I will be having college during day time ...

Almost 3/4th part is done , I will write tonight and give you by tomorrow 😊

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