Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
now this is wat i call a complete story..u have justified every little thig v good buddy plz continue soon...

Thank you so much NIni, you are always generous in ur comments,

But, i would actually like to know what portion, what aspect u like or what u dont like, it would help me to write future chapters... so a detailed review pl.

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ariyadasa
What a emotional romantic chapter
i was attracted to so many ff writers specially sai and Alka
you also deserve to be like that too
I like the way you describe how Ashu explain the way that her dad doesn't like to his and her relation it 's too harder to bare as it is so emotional and the adverb you have use to describe ashu was brilliant (rare hira )
Great yarr but update the next soon as i am dying for that

Thank you so much dear...since now i have only 20 days to complete my ff, i would have to add a lot of things to each chapter.

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: swati62
Great chapter. Waiting for the next.

Thanks, next will be after 2-3 days.

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: aarundhati
Jis phool ne mere jeevan ko apni khushboo se mehka diya, aaj woh phool hi murjha gaya. No, he could not tolerate this. He tenderly holds her shoulders, makes her sit on the chair and says, "Hey Doc, woh sab baad me sochte hain, pahle ek aakhri baar kya hum saath me chai pee sakte hai, aur apni pichli saari chai dates ki memories ko taaza kar sakte hain, Woh bhi khushi se. Please Nidhi'.."...

Oh sshirley, loved this part...Ashu is sooo understanding and in control of his self...so selfless his love for Nids is...

YEs, being the matured one, he has to be more in control and sambhalo Nidhi too
Loved the chapter...plz...continue...waiting for the next update...

Next chap. after 2-3 days

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ruchshah
Hey, just came across your FF...me read both the parts!!
Thanks, but, pl. wwould like a detailed review...eg. what u like the most, what u id not like
I wud love to read the story further...plase update soon!!
working on it...

If u maintain a PM list, please add me too!
No, i dont pm anyone my updates
Thanks😊

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Shirley, I'M STILL READING UR chap 1... I liked it, u've taken up ur story from that point... Congratulations for ur new fic... Will comment, when I'll read both of them...😃

waiting wwith bated breath ..pl. give a detailed review

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hilarious44

@hilarious44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hey CONGRATULATIONS for this new FF...😃

Read first chapter...U write really really well...👏👏👏

Great new style..😛.

Loving this...😳😳

Plzzz continue...⭐️

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: hilarious44
Hey CONGRATULATIONS for this new FF...😃
Read first chapter...U write really really well...👏👏👏
Great new style..😛.
Loving this...😳😳
Plzzz continue...⭐️

Thank you so much Fatima (thats ur name right?)

But i would like a dtailed review for both chapter - what u liked particularly or what u didnt like...

it would help me plan the future chapters