Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very nice start ..Please continue

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: tarin292
good start! got a chance to revisit some cute moments of ktlk! will wait for next one...😊😊😊

Thank you so much

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
thats a very good start plz continue soon...

Thanks Nini...hope I can maintain the flow

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: turags
liked CV n Ashu convo...will wait for AshNi convo...

good work!!!

Thank you Sujata...this wold not have been possible without your guidance and encouragement.

@blue: Frankly, i was highly disappointed with Ashu-CV convo in the show...it suited the characterisation of neither man.

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev
Too good, you write well. Please continue.

Thank you Dr. Malvika,

Waise I will need your help for some future chapters of my ff - u know some medical procedures. Can I pm you?

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: vidyasabde
too good you write well. you are filling all the gaps , which we wanted to be filled in serial too. Physical love and hichkichahat was explained very delicately. loved it.

if you have only one mth free then pl make ff more longer or frequent.
Thanks for this ff ..made my Sunday.

Thanks Dr. Vidya. Can I pm you if I need ur help for medical procedures in future chaps?

Yes...from that point onwards, a lot of things disappointed me in the storyline...in my opinion, this is how it should have gone...The AShu CV convo in Kerala was thoroughly disappointing to me, it seemed more like a brawl between two illeterate men (sorry if I hurt anyone's sentiments) rather than a decent convo between educated and sophisticated people.

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Nice one dear. Continue soon.

Thank you so much

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sss97
this was very nice helped me revisiting the old memories of KTLK. Waiting for ashni conversation
Pl update soon.

Thank you so much dear... Will try to update asap.

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vidishaa
Interesting...good that you decided to come up with an ff..you write well.looking forward to the next chapters😊

Thanks a lot for your encouragement.

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anjani9
Thank you for the FF...it is lovely...
It is filling all the gaps KTLK has left like the physical attraction and Ashu's behavior in front of Mallika...abrupt travel of Ashu to Delhi etc...

You are trying to remove all frustations the sudden twists of KTLK has created...

When is the next update coming???

Thank you...

@ bold - you have got the gist...that is what i am trying to do, this is how the story should have progressed after the V-day imo. Till marriage, the story would move more or less the same, as in the show/...that is why i kind of fast forward when it is the same as the show

But still read carefully, as I have made major changes in the story.

After the wedding, my actual story would begin.

UPdate will take atleast 2-3 days...the next part is fast paced...so.

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