Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99 - Page 3

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thank you...

@ bold - you have got the gist...that is what i am trying to do, this is how the story should have progressed after the V-day imo. Till marriage, the story would move more or less the same, as in the show/...that is why i kind of fast forward when it is the same as the show

But still read carefully, as I have made major changes in the story.

After the wedding, my actual story would begin.

UPdate will take atleast 2-3 days...the next part is fast paced...so.

Originally posted by: nandinibose

beautifully written.pl continue😊

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thanks Dr. Vidya. Can I pm you if I need ur help for medical procedures in future chaps?

Yes...from that point onwards, a lot of things disappointed me in the storyline...in my opinion, this is how it should have gone...The AShu CV convo in Kerala was thoroughly disappointing to me, it seemed more like a brawl between two illeterate men (sorry if I hurt anyone's sentiments) rather than a decent convo between educated and sophisticated people.

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

sure dear . i would be happy to be of any help to you.

Originally posted by: sshirley

Thank you Dr. Malvika,

Waise I will need your help for some future chapters of my ff - u know some medical procedures. Can I pm you?

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Next chap please.

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

nxt chap kab milega??