Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaaye ch10 p94, epi-p99

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Ena292
Revisit of past memory! Great! U r a very good writer! 👏

Thank you so much Ena

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: nandinibose
u hv exceptional writing skills.👏

Thank you so much.

u v really brought out those aspects which had been left out in the show.
thanku 4 that.

I m trying to make up for things that disappointed me on the show...my actual story begins from chapter 6

song selection------- fabulous

Thank you so much. i guess my hard work on the antakshri paid off

grih pravesh-- superb😉

Thank you i m glad u liked it, It was inspired from Sujata's (turags) ff tum se hi.

loved the naughty ashu

I m glad...

i m glad u brought i armaan's love story😊

I kept waiting for this on the dshow ever since Armaan said "main usse keh nahi paaya ke main usse pyaar karta hoon" on that rainy night on which ashu broke down before him and confessed his love for nidhi
pl continue soon😃

will try asap. got struck on a scene.
can u pl pm me the next time u post?😳

🤗❤️

Sorry dear, i m not very comfortable with the pm. if you insist, pl. send me a buddy request...i will try to.

Hugs and love to you too

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nandinibose

@nandinibose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: sshirley

Sorry dear, i m not very comfortable with the pm. if you insist, pl. send me a buddy request...i will try to.

Hugs and love to you too

u r already there in my friend list.

anyways, its ok if u r not comfortable with sending the pm.

i will login and check after every few minutes to see if u hv updated.😉

kya kare, u write so well that i m literally hooked to ur ff and for the sake of repeating myself, a big fan of ur writing.😳

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

u r already there in my friend list.

anyways, its ok if u r not comfortable with sending the pm.

i will login and check after every few minutes to see if u hv updated.😉

kya kare, u write so well that i m literally hooked to ur ff and for the sake of repeating myself, a big fan of ur writing.😳

Okay will pm u.

I had to be out the whole day yesterday, got so tired that i just got up and now again have to go out in a while. willl return and type the chapter - hopefully i will post by tonight my time.

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ssktlk

@ssktlk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Your ff is going very good, all that we would like to see in ktlk , plus more. You write very well. Loved the part where Ashu tricked Nidhi and carried her over the threshold, western style. Very sweet, and adds a dimension to ashu's character. You have written that your story changes after 5th chapter, will wait eagerly for that.

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hilarious44

@hilarious44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Hey dear..😛

Had been off the forum hence the delay in comments...really sorry..

This FF is FABULOUS..👏👏👏

U are undoubtedly a SUPERB writer...👍🏼.

Loving every bit of it...😳😳

The story is flowing so smoothly n logically...👏

I loved how CV n Shyama united Ashni...😛

The BB n CV part was fabulous..😛.

All the naughtiness n teasing was so so so good...😆😆😆😆

BOLD Ashu is just WOW...😳😳😳

Jhat mangni n pat shadi concept...Loved it...👏

Engagement was awesome...😃

Antakshari was THE HIGHLIGHT...Great song selection...👏👏

Western style entry😉...Hmmm Ashu is a clever fellow...Lets see what he asks from nidhi in return...😉😳

Am enjoing this alot...👏

Plzzz dont say that u will not continue with this...Its so so so good.👏..

I feel my heart sinking when u say this...😭😭😭😭

Am completely hooked..😃

Thanx for two baxk to back updates...😳

Waiting for the next part very eagerly.

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Sherry, First of all, accept my hearty congratulations on your extreme hard work on the songs you've put up in the antakshari... I can very well assume, how much of hard work it would have taken...👏👏👏... Awesome song selections, apt at the situation... Too good my dear frnd... I really like it...

Secondly, I liked it, that You've not created much fuss for both the babas to accept this relation... Thanx yaar...!!! Otherwise, it would have looked quite repeatitive... U've filled up the gaps, very well... I mean, wedding was taken in on a large scale in the show, You've minimised it here... Very smart move...👏👏👏

And I loved-loved-loved this daring Ashu... Nidhi challenged him of the western style welcome, our Daredevil did it, right infront of the entire family... And during the ring finding game... Again Ashu teasing her, where nobody can see... Buddy, its so interesting as well as exciting...

Chalo finally, Ashni are married... Aagey ab kya???

Update soon Sherry... Will be waiting...

Love...

Aazeen...

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ssktlk
Your ff is going very good, all that we would like to see in ktlk , plus more. You write very well. Loved the part where Ashu tricked Nidhi and carried her over the threshold, western style. Very sweet, and adds a dimension to ashu's character. You have written that your story changes after 5th chapter, will wait eagerly for that.

THanks a lot dear...

Bold Ashu - well, this is the most natural thing to happen, in cases where a 42 old man, who has never had even a passing affair, suddenly falls head over heels in love with such a young, bubbly and of course s**y girl half his age - frankly the kind of platoniic affair (yes, thats exactly why I made Mallika say this word in my first chapter) shown in the show was too much to digest.

Yes, my actual story would start from Chap-6. And I will bypass the HM - i hope that is okay?

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
update kahan hai darling?

Abhi tak mere brain me hai...trying to write asap. Last 5 days, had to go out every day...so sorry, actually i want a different SR for AshNI thats y taking so long...

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: hilarious44
Hey dear..😛

Thank you so much Fatima (I hope that's your name)

Had been off the forum hence the delay in comments...really sorry..

Thats okay. Better late than never... i was thinking thaat no one likes my ff much
This FF is FABULOUS..👏👏👏

Thanks - it feels good when someone appreciates your hardwork

U are undoubtedly a SUPERB writer...👍🏼.
Loving every bit of it...😳😳

I m truly humbled by your words, thanks a lot

The story is flowing so smoothly n logically...👏

Thats what i call a complement...but please do shower some brickbats too when i deserve

I loved how CV n Shyama united Ashni...😛
The BB n CV part was fabulous..😛.

Well, in my opinion, Shyama is the most sensible character in the show. So, it is natural that CV would consult her instead of the ever hysterical DB and the egoistic and thickheaded Kapil Solanki (Yes, thats exactly what he is in my ff)
All the naughtiness n teasing was so so so good...😆😆😆😆
BOLD Ashu is just WOW...😳😳😳

I missed all these things in the show, so added them here
Jhat mangni n pat shadi concept...Loved it...👏
Engagement was awesome...😃

Thanks a lot

Antakshari was THE HIGHLIGHT...Great song selection...👏👏

Thanks a lot dear - that was sheer hard work for me.

Western style entry😉...Hmmm Ashu is a clever fellow...Lets see what he asks from nidhi in return...😉😳

I m glad u liked it, chalo keep guessing what he is gonna ask... abhi toh woh khud hi bhool gaya hai - jaanam samjha karo uski SR hai

Am enjoing this alot...👏
Plzzz dont say that u will not continue with this...Its so so so good.👏..

I feel my heart sinking when u say this...😭😭😭😭

I will continue till i can - i hope i can complete it before my vacation gets over.
Am completely hooked..😃

I m really flattered

Thanx for two baxk to back updates...😳

Most welcome
Waiting for the next part very eagerly.