FF:Jo Hua Usey Bhool Ja:Ch13(Epilogue)Pg:78,Question Pg83 - Page 3

All the best for your new FF...but not too many troubles please...

hey azeen... when can we expect the next chapter ??? plzz update soon na... really eager to read on...😃

Congratulations for this new FF dear... So, my "chhota packet, bada dhamaka" sis is all set to rock the writers' world of ktlk forum... ☺️ Good luck!!!

First of all, salam hai aapki himmat ko... pehle hi FF mein, domestic abuse jaise sensitive social issue ko chheda hai aapne... aur justice bhi poora kar rahi hai aap apni kahani ke saath... 👏 The concept that u have chosen for ur fiction is a sad reality of thousands of innocent south-asian girls' lives who get married to NRI grooms and unfortunately get trapped as a slave and have their lives ruined... 😭

Nidhi married to Jagan gave me a 10000 volt ka Zatka... seriously... But, it's what the story is all about... so, I am ok with it and Jagan is already established as abusive and treacherous husband for all ktlkians. However, all the pain inflicted on my dear Nidhi - physical and emotional - rendered me all sob sob... 😭😭😭 Aisa kaun sa atyachaar hai yahan jo ki domestic violence ki category mein aata ho aur Nidhi ne nahi saha ho... 🤢 Upar se aisi barbarous kick pregnant wife ko... 😲 I swear, agar yeh jagan mere haath mein kabhi aaya to dekh lena, woh haal karungi uska ki naani ki naani yaad aa jayegi usko... 😡 Aazeenji... meri 1 request hai aapse: Jaise hi Nidhi ko hosh aaye, usko iss jagan ke khilaf bayan dilwana... yeh nahi ki aadarsh bharatiy naari aur Devi banker chup rahe... Waise toh mujhe andaza hai ki aisa nahi hoga coz Nidhi was shown very determined to escape from Jagan's cage but phir bhi mere man mein jo baat aai woh maine likh di...

Loved to see Nidhi as a pediatrician and with a very nice and caring family and Anji like friend in India. What I liked most is she talking to her baby to pray for their safe escape and staying determined to break free of his tortures... thank God, she had some monies & her passport was within her reach only - Jagan hadnt taken it away and put it in the lock-box... 😊 Jagan's behaviour and dialogue were really abhorrent but pathetically true to reality... 🤢 Such abusive and tyrant people can show such atrocities only... 😡

I dont see much chances of survival of the fetus... unless u r offering us a medical miracle 😃 Whatever u decide is upto u and I am with u in any option u choose: termination or continuation of Nidhi's pregnancy. Ashutosh would be the Godsend now... huh?? Really liked her in-laws and Jethji - Ashutoshji's arrival at the perfect moment and why their arrival will be revealed in next chapter I hope. But, who called the cops? Some neighbour or Ashu and her in-laws themselves?

Awaiting next part... plz. try to update soon!!!

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

hey azeen... when can we expect the next chapter ??? plzz update soon na... really eager to read on...😃

zara, its been whole day, roaming around the city with my mommy... Hell tired rite now, hv to reach home, n then hv 2 go 2 one of the family frnd's home... Dont know, wen m I gonna sit n write... But, jald se jald post krne ki koshish karungi... Theek hai?

Hey Aazeen it is such intresting FF with message and it was just fantastic and the way you write it all the words you used it touches my heart...would love to read its next chapter so please post next chapter soon...:):)

Ok guys... I really have no strength to sit n write the next chap right now.. n have to leave for some1s home... will try posting a new fic dat I hv already written... m really sorry guys...

Hi,azeen.! kaise ho?
Happy to see u wid a ff. It was really nice buss jagan ko nidhi ki pati k roop mein accha nehi laga. Bt ashu agaya to no tension. Update fast 😊

Guys, I know, Jagan being Nidhi's husband, is very-very annoying... But, I gave him this character, becoz of his image preset in mind... I know, I could have put rohan or amar as her hubby, but both of them wont fit the criteria of such a violent monster... Atleast, main imagine nai kar paa rahi thi... Another option cud have been BAJRANGI... But, m absolutely sure, there is no question abt dat... Wo toh main karti hi nahi... Jagan is going to be out of the picture soon (but not b4 sending him to his right place...)
So, tension karo gul... N relax... Will start writing the next chap, so may b can post at night...

Tc guys...
Aazeen...

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

Hey Aazeen it is such intresting FF with message and it was just fantastic and the way you write it all the words you used it touches my heart...would love to read its next chapter so please post next chapter soon...:):)

Thanx so much pooja...😃 will try posting soon...