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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: anjalini

Hey Anu,

Nice story,one can relate it with real life situation,
You have written it brilliantly as usual.😊
Will enjoy it.
4 FFs at a time?how do you manage?That's a superwoman material for sure..!👍🏼
Congratulations for this FF,
Love you, Anju.

Hi Anju

Thanks. For the Awesome Compliments.😳
Superwoman😲 Really😳
Wow. Thanx.

You are really sweet for encouraging me like this.
I really appreciate this a lot.
You are a true friend indeed.😛
Love u too
Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Anuji, When would you be updating the season for love? Eagerly awaiting an update on that one.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Aazeen

ok... I guess, I misinterpreted it... But, I thot, reaching that level of intimacy, needed it to be soulful... Atleast meri samajh mein toh aisa hi tha... That, that kinda intimacy is something devine and soulful... So plz explain me, they didn't love each other, they had everything common as such between them... Yet they reached that level... Agreed to marry with nothing particular, only to cement the relationship they have, yet have no regrets of the broken relation... (Atleast, abhi tak toh its not shown...) Feels something really awkward... Specially to me...

I have another question... U've replied to one of the comments, stating nidhi will herself tell Ashu abt amar... Is Ashu going to tell nidhi abt the level of relationship he n mallika had? I mean, is transparency going to be on either sides...?


Ok, how to start this...
Aazeen intimacy does not always require love, and sometimes it is just pure lust. It can also be based on mutual attraction and respect, both of which Ashu and Mallika have in my story. And not once Have I mentioned the words devine or soulful in conjunction with the two, anywhere. I just said that they had been intimate. And two people do not have to love each other to have things in common. For example friends have things in common with each other, that does not mean that they are in love. Agar aise hota toh duniya mein chaos hota.😆
And Again I never said that they never had anything in between them. They had friendship, familiarity, profession, similar likes and dislikes, and above all respect. I know some marriages that are based on much less. And when you reach their age, sometimes these things matter more, than love. Love is always not enough, and sometimes at the end of the day I don't know if it even matters that much. I would rather have respect and liking for a person over love any day. You Can love a person you like and respect. BUT, you do not always respect or even like a person you love. At least in my POV.
And where have I written that there are no regrets??????Mallika Toh has only been mentioned by name, and Ashutosh, if you remember he pushed aside his feelings. He dismissed them for a later time where he could think about it in peace.
There is nothing awkward here. Its just that you are too young, and still see life with rose colored glasses. But it is more than that. In fact sometimes people in love get divorced, but people who have the kind of things that Ashutosh and Mallika have in common are better off, their marriages are more successful, and tend to last for a lifetime.
Yes Nidhi will tell Ashutosh about Amar. She has nothing to hide. As far As Mallika is concerned, well Nidhi is a grown woman of 24 here, and a doctor. She understands the basics of life, and knows that Mallika and Ashutosh have know each other and been friends for a long time. Some things are understood, they do not have to be spoken aloud.
As far as honesty in their marriage, they already have it. Nidhi knows exactly why Ashutosh is marrying her, and so does Ashutosh. I don't see anything dishonest here.
I hope I managed to clarify things for you a bit.
But any more questions, plz PM me. its gets awkward on open forum for me to discuss topics like this.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Another feather in your cap Anu. Yet another wonderful presumption,but once more Ashni will be married in the start. But still, the dynamics are different because they know each other for years now and they have a good friendship. The situation and wedding is very much like Aaina, but I assume the similarity ends here.

Ashu has already recognized Nidhi's lack of confidence and self-esteem, so he is going to bring out the real Nidhi. In the process he may also end up curing her of her nightmares, I hope. Looks like he will also help her find her career and become a confident doctor as well. So, where most of the FFs are Ashu's journey, this one is actually Nidhi's journey. Good, subtle variation Anu. 👏

Now, how is Ashu going to feel towards Mallu, will he dislike her forever? And when it comes to intimacy how will he deal with Nidhi, hope he does not inadvertently compare the two sisters. I would love to see Mallu's reaction now. Talking of whom, she must have had a solid reason to get cold feet on her wedding day... by any chance did she fall in love with someone else, maybe someone younger than her?? Not having the guts to confess, she goes along with the wedding but eventually she is not able to go through with it. And I am wondering will she come back to KGH and find Nidhi as an intern. That will also be interesting, since she had herself discouraged Nidhi. Now Nidhi has Ashu's support, so Mallu's antics and taunts may not work on her, may help her see the error of her ways.

CV's relation with Nidhi is interesting. So, he has not paid any attention to her simply because he connects her to his wife's death. Good perspective, and maybe his lack of love and affection has made Nidhi more introvert and added to her nightmares as well. Reminds me of an old Sharmila Tagore movie called Anupama, where the situation is similar. Her father rejects his daughter because his wife dies at child birth and she ends up being extremely docile and shy, till she meets and falls in love with a man who brings her out of her own shadow. A very sensitive and poignant movie.

Lastly, DB seems like a wonderful person. Looks like her view are the same as Ashu's. Wonder if they are going to end up being the strongest allies and Nidhi's biggest advocates... seems like Rohan is an easy going person, someone to make Nidhi feel at ease. Maybe he will hep her with Ashu's complexities arising out of Mallu's betrayal.

Anu, if you read the first synopsis of the show, Ashu was originally supposed to be in his late 30s. I feel for this story, if you ever mention his age, this should be the range, not early 40s. And that 18 yr gap is also getting boring, something like 12-13 is good and that is huge as well. This will make MAllu around 34, a good 10 yrs older than Nidhi... just something to think about, if you have not done so already... waiting for more.

So, Anu 4 FFs, is quite an achievement. Keep it up. But, is SOL nearing finish within a few more chapters. I mean, in that Ashni are almost there and soon everyone will know, there is not much left in that from my POV.



Edited by aardhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: wizardofoz

Anuji, When would you be updating the season for love? Eagerly awaiting an update on that one.😃


I think by the end of next week.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aarti😃

Originally posted by: aardhan

Another feather in your cap Anu. Yet another wonderful presumption,but once more Ashni will be married in the start. But still, the dynamics are different because they know each other for years now and they have a good friendship. The situation and wedding is very much like Aaina, but I assume the similarity ends here.


Thank you so much for the compliment.😳
And so far you have been the only one to guess that the similarity(at least such a distinctly strong one)ends here. There will still be one, but it will be very vague, and only for a 2-3 chaps. it will decrease with each one.

Ashu has already recognized Nidhi's lack of confidence and self-esteem, so he is going to bring out the real Nidhi. In the process he may also end up curing her of her nightmares, I hope. Looks like he will also help her find her career and become a confident doctor as well. So, where most of the FFs are Ashu's journey, this one is actually Nidhi's journey. Good, subtle variation Anu. 👏


Yes, in this FF I want to show him as the kind of mentor, we all wanted to see him as in the show.
He will not only help her out of her shell and build up her confidence, but he will guide her in her career also. This is Indeed mostly Nidhi's joourney.😃
Thank you for picking up on that too.


Now, how is Ashu going to feel towards Mallu, will he dislike her forever? And when it comes to intimacy how will he deal with Nidhi, hope he does not inadvertently compare the two sisters. I would love to see Mallu's reaction now. Talking of whom, she must have had a solid reason to get cold feet on her wedding day... by any chance did she fall in love with someone else, maybe someone younger than her?? 😃Not having the guts to confess, she goes along with the wedding but eventually she is not able to go through with it. And I am wondering will she come back to KGH and find Nidhi as an intern. That will also be interesting, since she had herself discouraged Nidhi. Now Nidhi has Ashu's support, so Mallu's antics and taunts may not work on her, may help her see the error of her ways.

Ashutosh, like in the TV character, here also does not know how to hate. He will be angry and hurt. But, when he finds out the real reason she left, he will forgive and understand, and even be thankful, as he now has Nidhi, because of her actions. As to why Mallika ran away? I cannot reveal that now.
That will come in the later chapters, when Mallika makes a comeback.😆 Yep she will be BACK.
And she has always loved Nidhi. she was just over protective, a bit too much. She never let Nidhi grow up and become her own person. Infact when she returns and sees the new and improved Nidhi
she will be very happy and proud of her. Iss FF mein Mallika is positive all the way.😃


CV's relation with Nidhi is interesting. So, he has not paid any attention to her simply because he connects her to his wife's death. Good perspective, and maybe his lack of love and affection has made Nidhi more introvert and added to her nightmares as well. Reminds me of an old Sharmila Tagore movie called Anupama, where the situation is similar. Her father rejects his daughter because his wife dies at child birth and she ends up being extremely docile and shy, till she meets and falls in love with a man who brings her out of her own shadow. A very sensitive and poignant movie.

Yes, Col. Verma does have that feeling, but not consciously. In the movie Sharmeelas father knowingly did all of that. I have seen that movie, it is oneof my favorites. Specially the songs
Dheere dheere machal ay dile bekara and Kuch dil na kaha. Beautiful.👏

Lastly, DB seems like a wonderful person. Looks like her view are the same as Ashu's. Wonder if they are going to end up being the strongest allies and Nidhi's biggest advocates... seems like Rohan is an easy going person, someone to make Nidhi feel at ease. Maybe he will hep her with Ashu's complexities arising out of Mallu's betrayal.

Dadi Bua Is a nice person, and loves Nidhi. She will help them get closer and help Ashutosh understand why Nidhi is the way she is. And Rohan is going to be a sweetheart of a Dewar. Being Nidhi's age he will be her strongest ally in the family.😃

Anu, if you read the first synopsis of the show, Ashu was originally supposed to be in his late 30s. I feel for this story, if you ever mention his age, this should be the range, not early 40s. And that 18 yr gap is also getting boring, something like 12-13 is good and that is huge as well. This will make MAllu around 34, a good 10 yrs older than Nidhi... just something to think about, if you have not done so already... waiting for more.


Thats a good Idea, I will check. aur agar kiya bhi hai toh I will correct it.😳😆
Its my FF. I can do anything I want to it. Yea?😳



So, Anu 4 FFs, is quite an achievement. Keep it up. But, is SOL nearing finish within a few more chapters. I mean, in that Ashni are almost there and soon everyone will know, there is not much left in that from my POV.

No Aarti. SOL is far from being over. Abhi story bahut baaki hai. Wait and see what I have planned.
They have it too easy right now. DOno milee pyar hua and shaadi toh pehle hi hogayi thi. Abhi formally ek baar phir hogi. Uske baad life might not be so easy.😉




Thanks for the awesome detailed review. It was as much a pleasure replying as it was reading it.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Libra

@ Aazeen


<font color="#ff33ff">ok... I guess, I misinterpreted it... But, I thot, reaching that level of intimacy, needed it to be soulful... Atleast meri samajh mein toh aisa hi tha... That, that kinda intimacy is something devine and soulful... So plz explain me, they didn't love each other, they had everything common as such between them... Yet they reached that level... Agreed to marry with nothing particular, only to cement the relationship they have, yet have no regrets of the broken relation... (Atleast, abhi tak toh its not shown...) Feels something really awkward... Specially to me...

I have another question... U've replied to one of the comments, stating nidhi will herself tell Ashu abt amar... Is Ashu going to tell nidhi abt the level of relationship he n mallika had? I mean, is transparency going to be on either sides...?</font>


Ok, how to start this...
Aazeen intimacy does not always require love, and sometimes it is just pure lust. It can also be based on mutual attraction and respect, both of which Ashu and Mallika have in my story. And not once Have I mentioned the words devine or soulful in conjunction with the two, anywhere. I just said that they had been intimate. And two people do not have to love each other to have things in common. For example friends have things in common with each other, that does not mean that they are in love. Agar aise hota toh duniya mein chaos hota.😆
And Again I never said that they never had anything in between them. They had friendship, familiarity, profession, similar likes and dislikes, and above all respect. I know some marriages that are based on much less. And when you reach their age, sometimes these things matter more, than love. Love is always not enough, and sometimes at the end of the day I don't know if it even matters that much. I would rather have respect and liking for a person over love any day. You Can love a person you like and respect. BUT, you do not always respect or even like a person you love. At least in my POV.
And where have I written that there are no regrets??????Mallika Toh has only been mentioned by name, and Ashutosh, if you remember he pushed aside his feelings. He dismissed them for a later time where he could think about it in peace.
There is nothing awkward here. Its just that you are too young, and still see life with rose colored glasses. But it is more than that. In fact sometimes people in love get divorced, but people who have the kind of things that Ashutosh and Mallika have in common are better off, their marriages are more successful, and tend to last for a lifetime.
Yes Nidhi will tell Ashutosh about Amar. She has nothing to hide. As far As Mallika is concerned, well Nidhi is a grown woman of 24 here, and a doctor. She understands the basics of life, and knows that Mallika and Ashutosh have know each other and been friends for a long time. Some things are understood, they do not have to be spoken aloud.
As far as honesty in their marriage, they already have it. Nidhi knows exactly why Ashutosh is marrying her, and so does Ashutosh. I don't see anything dishonest here.
I hope I managed to clarify things for you a bit.
But any more questions, plz PM me. its gets awkward on open forum for me to discuss topics like this.😳

ok... M zipping my mouth shut... No more questions n no more queries... No more awkward situations 4 u... U keep writing ur chaps n i'll keep reading n commenting...
Thnx 4 explaining me... N lets leave the rest on time... Certain things r meant to be understood with a period of time, n so will I... U r right... M too young to understand such things in detail... Basically the reason is, my too naive, n have really no exposure to any kinda relations other than those, given my birth... So, let things be... Jab baat samajh mein aani hogi tab aa jaayegi...
Tc...
Love ya...
Aazeen..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Binat

Any updates tonight??


working on it.
trying really hard.😃

if not tonight. 100% tomorrow morning. promise.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Libra


working on it.
trying really hard.😃

if not tonight. 100% tomorrow morning. promise.😳


Thanks - you are a sweetie👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Binat


Thanks - you are a sweetie👏


You are most welcome.😳

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