OS : tera saath hai to part 2 page 1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaj diwali hai,jagmagate diyo ka tyohar aur Mathur Niwas roshini se jagmagata hai.Ashutosh aangan aur ghar me diye jala raha hai BB aur HK ke saath. Nidhi hospital se wapis aayi to dekha ki ghar puri tarah roshan ho chuka hai.Woh apne kamreme gai toh bed pe Ashutosh Nidhi ke liye Anarkali lekar aaya tha,aur uske upar diamond ka set bhi rakha tha.Jaise hi usne woh dekha woh khush ho gai.Usne diamond ka set hat me liya aur Ashutosh ne peechhe se gale me bahe dali,aur bola,"Happy Diwali Doc!.Chalo main tumhare liye yeh laya hoo use pehenke dikhao.Aur hum diwali ki puja saath me karenge.Aur yeh set main tumhe apne hatose pehenana chahta hoo.Nidhi,"sure,hum saath me puja bhi karenge aur diye bhi jalayenge aur aap muze yeh set bhi pahenayenge.lekin pehele aap bahar jaiye to main kapde badal loo. Ashutosh," kyon ? mere saamne nahi badal sakti ? aur usne shararati smile di. Lekin woh chala gaya. Bahar BB aur Ashutosh bat kar rahe the.BB : Ashu,muze tumse kuchh bat karni hai." Ashutosh ," Ji baba,kahiye." BB : Ashutosh muze lagta hai ki peechhle kuchh dinose tum nidhi ke prati laparwah ho gaye ho,use waqt nahi dete hai,khas kar khushi ke aane ke baad,dekho khushi apni nani ke pas hai,khush hai.lekin muze lagata hai ki tumhe apne aur Nidhi ke bareme kuchh sochna chahiye. Itne me Nidhi taiyar hoke aa gai.Ashutosh use dekhkar muskuraya,kyonki usne woh set abhi tak nahi pehena tha.Woh usko lekar kamareme gaya aur use dressing table ke samne baithaya aur use apne haatose set pehanaya. Puja khatam hui aur Ashutosh aur Nidhi aakar so gaye,lekin Ashutosh ke aankhome neend nahi thi.Use baba ne kahaa ek ek labj yaad aane laga.Usne nidhi ko dekha aur soch me pad gaya.," Nidhi ne mere liye kya kuchh nahi kiya.Mere liye woh duniya se lad padi mere liye usne Mallika ko maaf kiya.Mallika ne nidhiki jaan lene ki koshish ki,aur maine kya kiya.Sorry.Fir Khushi ko maine itna pyar kiya,aur khushi ne bhi Nidhi ko ghayal karneki koshish ki.Maine kya kiya?kuchh nahi,kya main sachmuch Nidhi ke layak hoo?Main kyon use pyar de nahi sakta?pyar karta hoo par jata nahi sakta.Lekin ab bus,main ab Nidhi ko khush rakhneki har koshish karooonga. Dusre din Ashutosh subah uthkar baba ke kamare me gaya,baba se baat karke woh apne kamreme aaya.Nidhi bed par so rahi thi.Ashutosh uske pas aaya aur halke se uske forehead pe kiss kiya aur bola ,"good morning doc! Nidhi chauk gai.Woh zatkese baith gai.Nidhi,"Aap,itni subah subah. Ashutosh," Nidhi,main tumhare liye breakfast lekar aaya hoo,tumhara favourite bread butter,and coffee and club sandwich.chalo jaldi se utho hum saath me nashta karoonga aur fir tumhare liye ek surprise hai. Nidhi,"bataiye na kya surprise hai! Ashutosh," Nidhi,agar bata doonga ki kya surprise hai to woh surprise rahega kya? chalo packing kar lo hum teen char dinoke liye bahar ja rahe hai. Nidhi,lekin dr Ashutosh,humare patients? Ashutosh," Nidhi,maine dr Rangnath se baat kar li hai,woh aur priyanka and Jyotika sab sambhal lenge,but tumhe is mahol se thode din dur rakhana hai,aur woh bhi tumhe dher sari khushi dekar,muze jo waqt tumhe dena chahiye aur jo waqt mene tumhe nahi diya uska hi repaid karna chahta hoo. Nidhi ne Dr Ashutosh ka haat apne haat me liye aur use apne aanhope rakha aur boli," aapka kasoor nahi hai dr Ashutosh .Aaap ek achhe doctor honeke saath ek bahoot hi achhe insaan hai.Aur kabhi kabhi insaan ko apne achhe pan ki kimat chukani padti hai,jo aap ne chukai aur maine aapki parchai hone ki kimat chukai hai,Kyonki aapke dil ka dard mere dil se hokar gujarata hai,aapke dukh me mere aansoo nikalte hai aur aapke sukh me meri muskurahat. Vishesh suchana: aap hi bataiye yeh main continue karoo ya beech majdaar me chhod doo.?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well written...surprise can b holiday for jst the 2 of them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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bohoti acha hai Alka ji ...please continue kijiye 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 Nidhi aur Ashutosh flight me baithe hai,aur Ashutosh nidhi ki taraf pyar aur shararati nigahose dekh raha hai,uska haath nidhi ke haath pe hai.Plane take off ho gaya aur dono fir se bahar ke najarome kho gaye.Nidhi aaj peheli baar dr Ashutosh ke saath ghumne ja rahi thi aur woh bhi flight me.Window ki taraf Nidhi thi aur bahar ki taraf Ashutosh baitha tha,uska excitment dekhkar Ashutosh ko us par bahoot pyar aaya,aur usne dheere se Nidhi ke gaal pe kis kiya.Nidhi ekdum shant ho gayi,usne Ashutosh ki taraf dekha aur muskura gai. Ahutosh use lekar Simla Ki haseen wadiyo me le aaya tha,barf ka mausam tha,Bura simala burf ki chadarome lipta hua tha.Nidhi aur Ashutosh ne apne hotel ke room me kadam rakha,Nidhi toh barf ki barish dekhkar khush ho gai thi.jaise hi dono room me aaye Nidhi ne Ashutosh ke galo pe khushi se kiss kiya aur tight hug kiya aur boli," thanks you ji.Thank you very much.Ashutosh ne bhi use bahome liya aur bole," you are welcome sweet heart."Ashutosh aur Nidhi zaroke ke pas khade ho gaye,toh Nidhi boli main fresh hoke aati hoo.Ashutosh ko achanak kya suza ki usne Nidhi ko bahome utha liya aur use bathrom ki taraf le gaya.Aur fir bola," Hey doc! aapka surprise aapka wait kar raha hai.Nidhi," Bathroom me? Ashutosh," of course! Nidhi bathroom me gai toh dekha ki ek chitthi bathrom ke mirror pe chipkai thi," Hey aaine,meri biwi bina kapdoke kitni sundar dikhti hai tu hi bata? Nidhi sharma gai.Aur jaise hi woh bath tub ki taraf badhi woh bhi fulo se bhara hua tha,jahaa ek aur chit tha,"Meri zindagi mehekane wale ful ka fuloke jannat me swagat hai." Nidhi ab bechain ho gai.usne jaldi se nahana pura kiya aur jaise hi towel liya uspar lekha tha," kaash meri kismat is towel jaisee hoti,main tumhare badan pe chipka reheta." Nidhi ne dekha toh wahaa ek packet pada tha jispar uska naam likha tha.Usme Ashutosh nidhi ke liye gown lekar aaya tha,low cut neck,aur sirf knee tak,aur uski zip peechhe ki taraf thi.Nidhi ne bahoot hi koshish ki zip lagane ki lekin uska haath nahi pahuch paya.Toh woh waise hi bahar aa gai.Dekha to Ashutosh ne bed ko flower se aur pura suhagrat jaisa sajaya tha,aur woh haath me fuloka guldasta lekar khada tha.Nidhi uske pas gai aur boli,"Suniye,meri zip laga dijiya please." Ashutosh ," Nidhi,main isiliye to yeh gown laya hoo taki tumhe meri jaroorat pade aur main tumhe apna jalwa dikha sakoo.Aur fir ab tumhe yeh pehenaneki jaroorat hi kya hai.Mian to waise hi yeh nikal doonga.aur tum toh waise hi bahoot ---- lagti ho.Aur Ashutosh use bed ki taraf le aaya aur usne halke se Nidhi ko bed par letaya aur bola," yeh humari zindagi ki nayee shuruat hai.sirf main aur tum aur koi bhi nahi.Nidhi," yahaa thand bahoot hai aur aap muze batome ulzaye hue hai,muze garmi dijiye na please." Ashutosh," Jo hukum madam,main aapka permanant heater hoo,dekhiye ab kahaa kahaa se garmi aati hai aapko. aur dono rajai me chhup gaye. Comments please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niniborn2rule

well written...surprise can b holiday for jst the 2 of them...

yes just for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saibanu

bohoti acha hai Alka ji ...please continue kijiye 😊

Thanks sai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just read part two. It was really awesome. Ur ideas are really nice. Dis is wat i want to see on d show, an outing for our ashni. But i m glad dat our request gets fulfilld over here
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vaah Alkaji ! Main mar jaava. Sooo S😉😉y. Aaj kal aapki writing skill ki kya kahane!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...had a great time reading it...thanks...👏 Nidhi does deserve a break like this...kaas asli BB bhi aisa kuch Ashu ko samjhate...but our Ashu falls deeply for his every guest and wants to make them a part of the family...BAD LUCK, Nids...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lee_Ashni

Vaah Alkaji ! Main mar jaava. Sooo S😉😉y. Aaj kal aapki writing skill ki kya kahane!

Thanks lee

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