DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu your build up towards actual romance is sooo good that it i very difficult to wait till Deepavali.
I think Ashu is already in love with Nidhi . After marriage how they come close to each other ...i am very eager to know... 10 din kaise bitenge?
it would hve been better if this chapter had come up after D.
10 din ka day dreaming ?
itna accha kyo likhate ho aap.
HAPPY DEEPAVALI TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
(deepavali ka scene aap dal sakte ho where they come closer and get to know each other )
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Posted: 12 years ago
its Wonderful chapter Anu di 😊...Looks like ashu is already in love with nidhi ..eager to see how they will come close and how their relationship build up after marriage ...

Please continue soon , Happy diwali to you and your family 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written,Anu. Just loved u r writing to describe the situation. I imagined that every thing happened before my eyes.
Next chap after Diwali..bahut intezar karna padega but its ok.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is wonderful, to have an update when we wake up...we are fine of No-Romance as we know, you are building the Base...
What will Armaan and Anji talk to Nidhi and Ashu? Agree that CV is ill, so he cannot get too many doubts but Baba and DB do not have any doubts? If 2 people fall in love, it will be very visible to others in the family...
How come Ashu and the entire family agreed to move in to CV's house...Ashu may be under obligation but Baba and DB?
Bonding of Ashu with CV and Nidhi with Baba and DB are also key in this story...
May be you can cover the reaction of fellow interns towards this relation...
Some more intimate family movements including the entire family...
What about Shyama Aunty? Nidhi is very close to her...she will also believe this???
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Posted: 12 years ago
When is your next update (After Diwali), any schedule???
We are Greedy???😲 but that is how we are...
How can we change now????😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow,Too Good Anu!
Superliked your chapter.
Sooo beautifully written,heart soothing lovestory it is!

I must say that You have have tackled AIH issue brilliantly,so now all set for the lovely postmarriage love bonding.Congratulations for such awesome writing👍🏼. God bless you,
Love you,🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wizardofoz

Awesome all your FFs are too good.👍🏼 patha nahin hota ki kaunsa wala pehle padoon.


Thank you so much for the compliment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Anuji...jo yeh aapka brainchild hain naa...it's so awesome, I tell you...that everyone is going to fall head over heels in love with it...what a concept...lajawaab...thanks a lot...really a very long chap...sure must have taken up a lot of your time...had an awesome time reading it...😃



thanks a lot...it's phenomenal...excellent...can imagine the efforts behind it...you know with ur kind of FFs , the show has stopped mattering at all now...atleast for me...much easier to control oneself to not watch the utter Khushi nonsense that's currently going on...👏



Plz...next update...wait karna bahut hi mushkil hain...


Thank you Aarundhati
I am glad that you are liking the story. I wanted to make this chap extra long so that it would make up for my not giving any more updates till after Diwali. So glad that you had a nice time and enjoyed reading it.
I understand your sentiments regarding the Khushi track. I feel the same way😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Manisha😃


Originally posted by: achiever

wow.. very nice chapter.. i luved the little somethings betn these twoo..


I am glad that you noticed that.😉
so u surprise me with Nidhi not taking AIH.. the reasons wer justified.. i thot if Ashu is being too practical thn y not Nidhi.. bt a mother cannot b practical.. so it was Nidhi as a mother who spoke for her child even before it was born.. i luved tht.. 👏

Yes, I knew that the decision would surprise many. But if you look at it, it is not that uncommon. Arranged marriages mein toh yehi hota hai. I had an arranged marriage, and all it took was a little while to get to know each other enough. And since their contract is for the specific reason of
having a child, Nidhi needs to think in that respect too. And being a woman she is a natural mother, and for Mothers, their children are always at the forefront of their thought. So gllad that you noticed this part also.😳
Also.. Ashu is kind of okay lets do it.. bt thn he is slowly getting into ease with Nidhi around him.. he shifted to her house.. tht was the best thing.. in many ways.. 👍🏼

They had too. If he wants a child from her, she is also marryng him for her father. It would defeat the purpose, if she had to apart from him in his last days.😭
so practically sthis is a contract mrg on paper bt everything is happening as it shud happen in an arranged mrg. .very nice story!! this will give thhm a scope to consider their feelings if and wen thy wud develope.. i have had a luv mrg.. and everybody else in my group had luv mrg.. s..o i dont know how one gets physical with someone without knowing.. i mean.. it wud take ages to get to tht level of intimacy both physically and psychologically.. i think.. personally i think a mental bond is necessary before physical bond.. and arranged mrg hardly gives a chance.. bt if i think the other way, if u trust someone and tht person is a gem, thn this cud b very exciting.. the hesitation.. thn the knowing part.. and thn the delivering part and thn living togehter..
I think that you will enjoy what I have in plan for them.

i guess i wud come to know abt tht with Ashu Nidhi..
I luved Nidhi-Baba's luv..

She adores her father it's that simple. What more precious thing can their be, but a father and daughter's bond with each other.
also tht both felt bad thy wer lying to their elders.. so thrs some truth in thr relationship and thy wud relent at some point if something happens betn thm..

Nothing will come between them but their hesitations, and insecurities regarding each other because of the contract.
falling in luv aftr mrg wud b a grt grt thing to watch betn Ashu Nidhi!

I hope to make that part enjoyable for all. Let's see if I can do that.


Thanx Manisha for that awesome and detailed review. I am glad that you are liking my FF😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Thanks to Malvika. Its really innovative.
Take your own time but give us your Best. Keep it Classic and handle it with love.😉 You have taken lot of efforts in writting.👏 Great work. thank you from bottom of my heart.


Thanx for the vote of confidence Rajani. I really appreciate the encouragement that your compliments give me.

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