Kashmakash -thread 2-Epilogue(pg 99) - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
I can understand your new KASHMAKASH...🤣
Not only its the baby of a brilliant writer but its a sizzling hot baby too...😆. Though u are just amazing in writing intimacy too but i remember ur condition before writing such scenes...🤣
Am super excited to see how u take forward this FF...😃😃😃
Needless to say that u are gonna rock it too...👍🏼

@redso true..

and thanks for your encouragement..🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Reg Kashmakash, your FF is very sweet from 1st line and hope you end it so...it remained a tender love story and please continue it so and end it so, I do not mean there should not be problems but the way they deal with them...Thank you..


u r very correct..the way a problem is dealt with makes a lot of difference..i hope i don't disappoint you in this..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Chapter 18..



Anji the super protective .. over the top well wisher... You portrayed her consistently such...

Aapke "woh" chahate hain... the entire Armaan- Nidhi convo was choo chweet... I haven't mentioned in a while right that I love this Ashu!!

i love this Ashu too..and thank God you haven't started seeing Anji as a villian here..😆

I wish we could get hubbies to be soo sensitive... kya yeh gomti ka aasar hai... ya.. adrak wali chai ka...

😆 don't know..probably Nidhi ke pyaar ka asar hain..

I am seriously impressed how you managed to capture all the rituals...

Anu gave me the list during the version 1 FF (i covered Anji's wedding there) and Doc helped me in making sure i got the order right this time too..

Remember I myself had asked you if CV knew where Ashu was and he saw Nidhi's situation... why didn't he share it with Nidhi...
The current conversation so answers that question and oh so beautifully...
😃😃

glad i could meet your expectations regarding this one..😳

So important to Show CV also worried about Nidhi's future as a doctor, his concern for her career...



How you managed to capture Ashu's love and fear to let her go.. with one line...
Ashu gets startled and instinctively tightens his arms around her: leaving? Why?

Awesome!! 👏👏

😳 thank you..

The flowers at the hospital.. a very nice touch.. and finally the consummation was very beautifully described... Ashu's concern all through is so evident... He is soo sensitive as far as Nidhi goes...
Ashu constantly reassuring himself and Nidhi... taking to her and making her promise... 😉
Very very beautiful...

and thank YOU for this long lovely review...missed u..🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
me thinking aloud:

chapter 20 almost done..should i post it off today or wait till weekend??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

me thinking aloud:


chapter 20 almost done..should i post it off today or wait till weekend??


Please post na...! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu


Please post na...! 😊


you think so?? 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

me thinking aloud:


chapter 20 almost done..should i post it off today or wait till weekend??

U are thinking about it...😡.
Post ir right away...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags


you think so?? 🤔


yes ...missing your chapter very much dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

I wish we could get hubbies to be soo sensitive... kya yeh gomti ka aasar hai... ya.. adrak wali chai ka...

😆 don't know..probably Nidhi ke pyaar ka asar hain..


I was going to put my hubby on adrak wali chai diet... par ab... no hope!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
maam...
plz update asap for you janab...
waiting

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