This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 89

Originally posted by: suku_07

Most welcome Anu ji... I hope your both your Moms recover soon... and will post the detailed review soon... read half part only...😳

Originally posted by: Libra

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Thank you Sweetheart . I am glad you liked the chap.

As far as the cliff hanger, well I said na, ke cliffhanger is a must.😆

And you may call or PM which ever suits you best. I shall look forward to your review.

I really appreciate your lovely comments. Thankx again.😃

'What a delight! a story that is true to its genre and that transfers us to a world of true love and romance… The chap etches a romantic description of the intense feelings amongst the two main protagonists, . You hv beautifully shown that behind every fulfilled love there is likely to be an unfulfilled one.

Ashu n Nidhi's relation shown majestically! They share a very angelic bond with their fears surfacing again when Mallika suddenly reappears , but then love conquers all ...n together they r ready to face the tornado directed their way.

Complications begin when the two lady characters Nidhi n Mallika, both with a common love interest, come face to face once again. And that's when Mallika's character does tend to become a little predictable. The very usual egoistic n selfcentered Mallika.

Khushi , the operate cooperate episode clearly indicates, she is other meaning of innocence: naive, guillible, and altogether too trusting. She can misunderstand anything other than the most obvious. She can commit offenses unwittingly . 😆 Yet she is adorable

The chap maintains a good pace throughout and end...well a cliff hanger! Why was Mallika shocked when she saw Khushi? Don't tell me she is Mallu's daughter😕

Originally posted by: ttrocks

@bold: yeah, I remember your cute laugh at the end... But aapke readers ko bhi small mercies milna banta hai na... aisa cliffhanger... 😲

Originally posted by: swati62

That was amazing def worth the wait. But wat a cliffhanger. Pls do not make us wait tooo long this time. So happy u are back. And hope u r feeling much better.

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Hope everything around you is under control.The both parts of the chaps are fab.The love journey of Ashutosh and Nidhi was truely enjoyable.I love the emotional attachment of Ranji and Anji and their children.Childrens are truely sometimes atom bomb as you said.Enjoyed both the chap.I am yet scare of Mallika.Hoping for the next chap soon.Tc of yours and your childrens.

Originally posted by: gargpoo

hello Anu aunty,i m poonam.i was a silent reader since a long time,but i could not resist myself anymore,so now i m active here from last month.HAPPY 2 see u back.i was waiting 4 u.i have read ur all FF.all r so nice.ur writing skill is 2 good.last night i read ch 9.I read both parts in a go,both r so good.i loved it.my favourite part was " "COOPERATE" scene. ab aap kaunsi FF ki update doge??? Waiting...